FF: Pandian Stores - Part 3 updated

Part 1

*Kathir and Jeeva in pandian stores*

*Kathir is simply staring at the floor since long time*

Jeeva: Kathire..Dei Kathire..

Kathir: Kooptiya na

Jeeva: Sariya pochu da, 5 nimshama kathiru kathiru nu kooptene unaku kekalaya..

Kathir: Nejama va koopta..hehe.. Kekalana

Jeeva: Ama apdi enna da kooptathu kooda kekatha alavuku yosanai..

Kathir: Athellam onnum ila na, chumma..

J: Onnu ilathathuku ivlo neram yosikra aal ila née.. Ennanu sollu

K: Athu vanthu.. Annen..

J: Adei, solra..

K: Athu.. Athu..

J: Ennada Pant vanganuma??

K: Ennnathu..Pant ah..😕

J: Pinna kadaisi thadava née ipdi nelinjitu irunthathu Pant venumnu solla thaana

K: En na née vera, summa iru na..

J: Appo neeye sollu..

K: Epdi solrathunu therila na..

J: Née solriya ila naan Annan kita solava..

K: Aiyo, athellam venam naane solren..

J: Seekram.. Seekram

Will post part 2 tomorrow

Part-2

K: First née oru bathil sollu..

J: Kelvi eh kekama ennada bathilu..

K: Athu.. Kelvi vanthu.. Un kadhai la first pidichirukunu sonathu yaaru..neeya..anniya..

J: 🙄 Itha kekava 5 nimsham tharaya ve pathutu iruntha..

K: Sollu na..

J: Ama athu ethuku ippo..

K: Sollu na sollu..

J: Naan thaan da sonen.. Ippo enna athuku..

K: Enna.. Née thaan sonniya..

*K started thinking again* appo namma thaan solanum polaye*

J: Ennada..

K: Athu.. Neeya sonna..

J: Ilaya pinna.. Poovellam kuduthu asathunom..

K: Adengappa..

J: Ippo née solla vanthatha sollu..

K: Naan solren, first itha mudipom.. Née sonnathuku anni enna sonanga

J: Ava enna sonna.. Sirichite ninna konja neram...apuram Rose ah vangitu 'me too' nu soltu odita

K: Athenna athu 'Me too'

J: I love you nu sonna me too nu thaana solvanga..

*K was tensed and stood up*

K: Ennathu I love you nu sonniya..

J: Dei dei athuku en da kathuraven, ukkara, ada ukkaru da..

K: Athellam cinema la thaana katuvanga.. Née epdi sonna

J: Seriya pochu po.. Nejathula nadakratha thaan da cinema la katvanga

K: Athu oru maari nalarukrathune..

J: Dei oru nimsham iru, ithellam mullai kita sollava imbutu nerama yoschitu iruka..

*K looks down* Embarrassed * Blushing*

Very good FF, love your writing , the dialogue are perfect that too the one " ennathu I love u sonniya" I could well connect and imagine kathir reaction I couldn't stop laughing thinking about that.

Please do write more story or continue on this, will love to see how kathir will propose.

Part - 3

J: Dei.. Unmaya solra.. Mullai kita solla va ivlo vivarama keta..

K: Ada..vidune.. Née vera..apdilam onnum ila

*J got to know this is the issue from the looks of K and glares at him*

K: En ne moraikura..

J: Née onnum solla venam da.. Po.. Poi velaya paaru..

*K breathes out in relief*

J: Naan antha pulla kitaye ketukren..

K: Ayooo..

*J tried hard to suppress the laugh*

K: Née...Nee..Nee Ava kita nee enna keka pora..

J: Née antha pullaya pudikumnu epdi sonanu thaan..

K: Ennathu..😧

*K is clearly scared and though J has no plans to ask Mullai about such personal things, he is just inducing K's emotions and enjoying his lil brother's reactions to that*

J: Ama da naan keka thaan poren..

K: Anne.. Athellam venam na..solratha kelu..

J: Ada oru vazhiya solla othukudan da.. Seekram sollu.. Mani avuthu...

*K is confused*

K: Enna solanum.. 🙄

J: Athaanda, solrathu kelu nu sonniye,..sollu sollu née mudhala sonniya ila antha pulla sonnucha..

K: Ayo Anne, athu antha solratha kelu ila.. Solra pechu kelu nu sonen..

J: Ithu velaikavathu polaye..

K: Anne, Anne, Anne, vendam na..

*K holds J's hands to convince him*

J: Adei.. Ippo née en tension avra, nee epdi enkita ketiyo naan athey maari Mullai kita keka solli Meena kita solren..

K: Naan unta thaana ketan, nee en ippo avanga rendu perayum ithula izhukra..

J: Née thaan solla matengriye..

K: Anne.. Athu vanthu..

J: Ennada vanthu poi.. Iru naan ippove Meena ku phone panni solren..

*J pretends to dial Meena's number and K snatches his phone *

K: Athellam onnum venam.. Née avanga kitalam solla venam..

J: Appo née sollu.. Apdi ennada ragasiyama kadhal kadhai unaku... Solra..

K: Sollu sollu na, ethachum soliruntha thaana solla mudiyum..

J: Purilaye..

K: Naan ava kita etha soliruntha thaana unkita solla mudiyum..

*J is shocked*

Great storyline, every dialogue is accurate with emotions attached to it. It's hilarious as well, waiting for more updates. Keep it up. Cheers. 👍👍

Wow I can actually imagine these dialogue in Kathir's and Jeeva's voice. Brilliant. Please continue. Will check it out😊

Excellent.. I can connect to kathir jeeva characters upon reading it.

Apt words and slang used.

Keep writing.Thanks for sharing.