Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 27

Bajaj was so mean to Prerna but I understand why

He did apologize as best as he could

I’m glad kukki is fine

Love this new character Tubby 😳

Its just hard to imagine him with someone else other than Prerna. But It’s your story so you do what you want to with it. I will continue to read either way

Will wait for your next update

Thank you so much 🤗

For me it was a heartbreaking update 💔 the way Bajaj got angry at Prerna made me scared. But this is the best consistent character of him and really can't wait for the future where he too will get focused on Prerna.

Even though he was extremely harsh and unfair to her, stamping her as just an employee, I find the way he shared his fear with her aftermath also fascinating. I believe Prerna's the only one in front of whom he had let his anxiety and relentless efforts on Kuki's treatment expressed.

Please continue and thank you for the quick update!

Oh man he was harsh he ripped into her and then justified his anger Perna should have blasted him back he wanted a mother but wants to treat her like a nanny kuki became her daughter also not just his awesome update .

I like your writing, I like Tubby, I like Prerna too. RB's rebuking came out much harsher than the show, I literally felt as if she were a nanny. And, I don't get the mother - daughter bond here, is it meant to be such? She seems pretty much like a distant relative paid to care for the child. Which she is in a way, but still.

And I guess, the life out of RB is sucked out of him in this. Update soon!

Bajaj's night endeavours- I am all in for that as long as the progression between Prerna-Bajaj is organic. I don't expect him to not have his own life away from Prerna at this stage.

A brilliant update again.

I read a lot of stories on this forum and mostly a silent reader, leaving a like button and responding rarely. It’s not personal though. This FF, is my favourite. I think it’s the way you have sketched Bajaj and Prerna, it’s very relatable. Also, your storyline has elements of realism which makes it easy to connect.

Oh my, I do understand what Bajaj was going through when Kuki was found sick, but damn his foul mouth. as a reader, I could feel the words cutting through through Prerna. It’s also the power of your writing 😉😉

Awww, I think tubby stoke my heart in the last bit. Also, I am really interested in bajaj’s night life.

Tubby ❤️will fit right in with the remaining Bajaj’s – I loved the last two lines “As far as Tubby was concerned, Littlest Human and Mama were bestest. He was going to reserve judgment on Papa.”Even their dog has attitude😉….as for the infidelity clause, I think it is all hogwash RB just wanted to see what Prerna would do and she reacted predictably. He was really mean to Prerna, but this was in line with the ruthlessness of his character,the only one worthy of his love has been Kuki and his opinion of the female species has been skewed first by Menaka and then the various women who were interested in either his money or the power which comes from being associated with the Bajaj name. The evolution of his relationship with Prerna will change RB and I am really interested in seeing this come to life under you…I love your work, please continue to write especially for non-writers like myself👍🏼

We got to see a new side of Bajaj in this chapter. But let me start with how they are in this typical routine of the family setup, where they are just Kuki's parents. I love this Bajaj not only as a father for loving his daughter unconditionally but also as a partner to Prerna by simply taking care of Kuki once he is back to home so that Prerna can take care of her studies. How many men do that, giving a break to their partner by taking care of their kid.

Now coming to the main part. He is so harsh, especially asking her to leave the house and telling that he can replace her. The truth is maybe he can never do that. Here Kuki's acceptance plays a major role, and Kuki has already accepted Prerna, and I don't think she would ever want to change it. And I think even he knows about it, but this is his anger and fear talking now.

Their conversation about his choices and his helplessness when it comes to Kuki's health. I would like to know what made him make the choices which he made. Kuki's health and his helplessness even after having all the money and resources, he can't do anything to cure his daughter🥺.

Coming to Tubby. I love him already along with both mother and kid. He is so cute and his thoughts about Bajaj, in the end, are funny. I cant wait to see how Bajaj would handle Tubby in the house now😆.

No problem in reading about Rishabh's nightlife. Is this related to his Friday nights which is mentioned in this chapter?

Originally posted by: MR21

We got to see a new side of Bajaj in this chapter. But let me start with how they are in this typical routine of the family setup, where they are just Kuki's parents. I love this Bajaj not only as a father for loving his daughter unconditionally but also as a partner to Prerna by simply taking care of Kuki once he is back to home so that Prerna can take care of her studies. How many men do that, giving a break to their partner by taking care of their kid.

Now coming to the main part. He is so harsh, especially asking her to leave the house and telling that he can replace her. The truth is maybe he can never do that. Here Kuki's acceptance plays a major role, and Kuki has already accepted Prerna, and I don't think she would ever want to change it. And I think even he knows about it, but this is his anger and fear talking now.

Their conversation about his choices and his helplessness when it comes to Kuki's health. I would like to know what made him make the choices which he made. Kuki's health and his helplessness even after having all the money and resources, he can't do anything to cure his daughter🥺.

Coming to Tubby. I love him already along with both mother and kid. He is so cute and his thoughts about Bajaj, in the end, are funny. I cant wait to see how Bajaj would handle Tubby in the house now😆.

No problem in reading about Rishabh's nightlife. Is this related to his Friday nights which is mentioned in this chapter?

Ramya!

I'm so thrilled you noticed that! I was waiting for someone to pick up on the fact that he treats her like an equal. Like he doesn't think her college work is any less important than his business and doesn't think that because she's a woman, the primary caregiving falls on her.

Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts!

Mr Bajaj was so absolutely in character! He's not in love or even particularly fond of Prerna the person, so of course he would lash out and viciously at that. I give Prerna kudos for her calmness and not reacting nastily to him. I love how this story is developing and can't wait for the next update