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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

Just outstanding n mindblowing update

Love it

Sameer is too much

Want to read more

Eagerly waiting for next

Thank you smiley31

I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaariya

Awesome

Lovett

Cont soon

Thank you smiley31

I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome

loved it

thnx for pm

cont soon

Thank you smiley31

I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sahanashaleen

such a beauty it was

u balanced both fun and the tense factor balanced

that iran italy were great 👏

hope you continue it soon

thanks for the pm

Thank you so much smiley31

I'm glad you liked that part

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaval05

Thank you for the pm. I was thinking about this ff and i noticed the pm. Wonderful update. Looking forward to see what riya's secret mission is and how it is going to affect riya and arjun's equation. Sameer is interesting character he is willing to turn a blind eye to the pain of a friend that has been more like a brother. It will be interesting to see how Sameer would attempt to redeem himself when the truth comes out.

Thank you so much smiley31

You will slowly see the revelations about Riya's secret and how it will affect her and Arjun.

I'm really glad for this comment.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Awesome update

Loved it so much!!!

Shree a d Chotu are teasing Riya. I actually liked the joke...poor Shree nobody appreciates him.

Either way it clicks Riya about the meaning of the message.

The mystery thickens! So Italy huh.....ab ye sir ji kaun hai?

Oh my god! Sameer did not just... I dont believe this. Looks like the juniors are going to take their chief for a ride now.

Cont soooon

Thank you so much smiley31

I'm glad you liked it. Hehe I liked the joke too. At least we appreciate him. Sir ji is another mystery that will slowly unravel.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Riya aur choree jab shuru hote hai to time ka pata nahi chalta upar se shree ke lame jokes per uski wajah se riya ko hint mil gaya yeh sirji kaun hai aur xora mein kisi aur ka haath hai sik ka nahi mujhe yeh baat samajh nahi aati sameer humesha arjun ko itha kuch sunata hai per takreeban her story ke end mein oose maafi mil jati hai poor arjun fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

Thank you Di smiley31

Yup, Riya got a clue because of Shree's joke. You'll know soon who this sir ji and what his role is in the story.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Thank you smiley31

I'm glad you liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

Not fair yaar you update after such a long time than give us such a chotu aa update

We expected a long one as you were absent for so long

But anyways the trio nailed it though their friendship's endless

And the mighty "sensible" Chief of ETF has no sense

Next time please don't gayab yourself for long and please update soon like very soon with lamba wala update

You found this update small? But every update is going to be this size more or less.

Thank you smiley31

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD3009

Beautiful & intruding update dear

Loved it

I must say that Riya has improved as an officer under Arjun, the way she cracked the code was awesome

Friends bantering was treat to read Shree & Chotu teasing Riya was ubber cute 😊

Well I am tense about Riya the way she is working she may land herself into a deep pit of trouble 😓

I feel she should come up with things before it's late & then Arjun would be in a fix too

Last but not the least what hit me the most was Sam ... His behavior & taunt towards Arjun was bit too much

In his pain anger & ego he never realized that what Arjun is going to feel .... I must say ego anger & tiff filled reactions between 2 lost friends was amazing

What I loved that you haven't changed the characters & essence of the things which we use to love in original series

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Thank you so much smiley31

I'm really glad you liked it.

Yup Riya improved as an officer over time and she knows how to tackle every situation.

She can't reveal her secrets yet because she knows that it's not the right time. But her secrets will be out in the open as the story unravels

I tried my best to keep the characters as close to their portrayal in the show as possible. But there will be times when you'll find them a bit out of character to fit the setting of the story. I hope you'll still be able to relate them to their original selves. But I'm glad you loved that ❤️

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