PreRish One-Shot: You Are Tired I Think! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Thanks Oppo! 🤗

Yeh wala hi itni mushkil se post kiya hai and you want more? 🤣

ha aur ek likho kal tak

My fav lines....

But she was certain of one thing, that she wasn’t a slave to his impetuous whims.

. He wore a mask with such a proficiency that it almost blended with his face, leaving zilch traces of the merger

His words made her feel weighted down by an invisible burden, and she failed to voice the pain it caused..

Miserable and repentant, they stared deep into each other’s eyes, thinking this confession would have brought immense joy in a parallel universe

This is really nice. 😳

“I’m tired of broken hearts and relationships. I’m sick of being dejected and sorrowful with no positive outlook towards life. I’m just…tired now!” she said in a deadpan manner and sat on the nearby bench.

💔

You have put it in simple words but can feel for her.

Keep'em coming Shruti 🤗

PS: So Saps gave her inputs. But she wont write. Hmm.

This emotional turmoil is really beautifully written. Loved it specially the part where she describes how she wanted both of them help each other in overcoming their heartbreaks and pain

Ooh God this was so amazing! Absolutely loved it ❤️

Nice OS. Outburst of Prerna and Rishab surrender was outstanding.

Keep writing more

This is just so beautiful and abs awwwwwww. LOVED IT❤️

sosososososoossoso goooood will be back with a better response in the morning for sure! 😃

the broken hearts can no longer take yet another heart break ..the pain , the emotions came through beautifully . they want to heal and seal each other ...
this is absolutely beautiful shruti .. LOVED it , ❤️