ArHi FF: Fragmented Colors [COMPLETED] *Replies posted - Page 40

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

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Does your Arnav refer to Khushi's separation from him as "chauda saal purana haadsa" too? 😛 -You could say so 😆

On a serious note, I was surprised that Arnav wasnt angry with Khushi when they met again. No, I agree with Arnav. Khushi did what she had to so that both of them do not get distracted from their primary focus in life and that being their family and the sense of duty towards them. if I were Arnav I would have been angry with Khushi for not involving me in that decision. Anyways, I am not your Arnav, so... -I'll be honest with you, I kind of hated the Khushi in my story at some points despite the fact that I was the damned person penning her. I guess her sort of non-confrontational, oblivious personality is what made her so realistic which is why she left like she did in the story. I guess my Arnav accepted that this was Khushi's decision and his love for her made him live with it. He realized that if she felt the need to leave so abruptly, she would feel uncomfortable with his involvement too. Another reason why my Arnav is too selfless and Khushi is flawed. But I see your point 😊

I recently read somewhere, since sex has been easier to get, love has become difficult to find. I hear of so many divorces around me these days (irrespective of class, caste or creed) due to unfaithfulness of either of the partners, that the jaded me finds it difficult to believe that people like ArHi can exist who stay true to their love in spite of everything. Sigh... -Haye, which is why we have books and movies to escape this reality. To look on the bright side though, once in a while I witness a couple truly in love and it doesn't seem so bad anymore 😳

Isn't it easier to move an interior business than a conglomerate? -It probably is, but Arnav didn't have any family in the States other than his mother, while Khushi had her parents, her sister, plus Arnav's extended family etc. which is why Arnav took the decision to move to India and open a new branch there as well.

I liked your writing style. It was easy to read yet effective and emotive. At one point, I thought this story will take a suspense-thriller turn, but I was mistaken. You kept the ebb and flow consistent to the silent love story you were penning -Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It means a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: SillLisa

What a wonderful wonderful story. I have no idea how I missed it. Thank you so much!!!

Hey, I just came across this story, and read it all in one go. And its beautiful - there is romance, and heartbreak, and hope and loads of love. You have a wonderful way with words, that makes one never want to stop reading...

Beautiful story.....cant stop reading it one go.

Thanks for sharing your work with us and keep writing

Amazing story loved it so much.