Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 38

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb

thnx for pm

cont soon

Thanks for reply.

Originally posted by: ishitadalal

Marvelous....absolutely mind blowing. I really couldn't guess the course the story is taking....but its great going... a cliff hanger... plz update jaldi jaldi...

No I won't leave you with any cliffhanger for sure.

Thanks for commenting.

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Thank you for commenting.

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

That was full of action! Waiting for the team to reach the dock. And I love the understanding you show between Riya and Ayesha. It was a packed update.

Waiting for the next update.

I am glad you enjoyed the action and thrill of this update.

Thank you for the reply.

Originally posted by: Anchal91

Mind-blowing update 😍😘😘

Thank you yaar 😍😘

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

Awsm

Thank you.

Originally posted by: AriyaLilyOrchid

Wow a power packed update

Let's see what happens

I am glad you liked it.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Chap12

Audio clips are awesome

They had a very cordial convo on that night

He just push her away for her safety

But what happened after that???

Awesome update

Loved it :)

He didn't want distractions like always.

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

His mu spoilt everything

His realization was too late

What 's up with sakshi

Awesome update

Cont soon

Sakshi might play the cupid or maybe not.

As for now she's just curious.

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Omg they are stuck in ocean without boat n injured as well

Hope somebody ll reach there

But that was stupid they didn't call back up earlier nor informed anyone

Awesome update

Cont soon

They thought they can handle the situation but it turned out pretty bad.

Kind of they were stupid😂

Thanks for replying on individual chapters 🥰😘

God it is getting frustrating

Who the hell is Leuitenent

Riya's boyfriend...??

Has Riya moved on

Doesn't she love Arjun now...??

I mean okay if she is angry and hurt but still the tiny winter love isn't there in her heart

I miss so anxious now

Please tell us what's gonna happen to area

Are they going to be a pair or not

Originally posted by: swaasp

nice update dear

update full of investigation and action

loved it

ohh no riya and co are in danger

hope all will be fine

thanks for the pm dear

update next part soon

Thanks for liking the thrill and commenting.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very interesting chapter

Riya is trying to fix her friendship with shree

But somehow shree is hurt by Riya leaving without saying anything

As now Riya have to work little more

Loll shriza is just impossible😆

Liza winked at shree & he lost the competition🤣

What happened in past that Riya is still hurt?

Riya found clue abt the murder of that fisherman

But now Riya Aisha & rohit in danger

Riya & rohit got shot😭

Hope they will make it up

Continue plz

Shree was the one who was with her in her every thick and thin but this time she left and she disappointed him so she owe him that much. She should try more and she will.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

ind blowing is the word for this one. 👍🏼

Thank you 😍

What a power-packed update it was ! I could visualize the whole thing and it felt so real. 👏

I so wanted you people to feel the thrill😳

You know what ? I am already hooked up with this and no doubt why it tops my list of favs. 😎❤️

I am just so very glad for all the love this story is getting. Thank you so much. 🤗

It really hurts losing a friend who was always there for you. 💔 But no one can be blamed here. Shree is right in his place and I believe Riya had enough reason to leave. But it's really good to see Riya trying her level best to make their friendship work again. And our girl will manaofy Shree soon. 😎

Riya had her reasons and she left for good. Shree wanted to help and tried his level best but sometime the only one who could help you is you and no one else.

I always loved the seedhi saadhi Ri. But trust me your version of Riya intrigues the most. The journey from sweet to savage surely was not an easy one to make. And the way you have decided to unravel it is undoubtedly gonna be interesting to read. 😃

One doesn't change overnight and become someone else. So you are right, it took time to shape her for what she is today and it will be revealed with proper justification. 😃

To be a witness of the blooming fellowship between Ri-Sha was ecstatic. It gives me a glimpse of the old version of Riya. She is not lost or changed completely yet. Is she ?

She's indifferent to the old team but to Aisha she's just any normal person and it wont hurt to have an ally right?😉

Riya has returned as a stronger and better cop and Rathore is surely proud of her now. Riya's indifference hurts for sure. But there is a reason right ? 🤔

There is!

As Riya is trapped with Rohit and Aisha can we say the prelude thing is coming in the next update ? I am not greedy. 😆 Just asking you know. 😈😆

Lol , yeah! I hope you like it.

The case is progressing with the leads Riya is getting along with the help of others. The cop in her is on full swing and I can already see her reaching the culprits. But for now they need backup which I am sure writer ji has already planned how to provide. 😎😈

Case will be interesting day by day and you will like it I guess and how Riya and the team solve it.

Update soonish and please drop a pm if possible.

And can I get links of your other works ? 😳

Yeah I have many other works, I will drop a PM of the stories I have completed and aren't in cliffhanger.😊😊

Thank you so much for the detailed review on this chapter😘

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Whoa whoa wait hold up I have so many questions.

How come Arjun left so early with MMC? Like everyone was present in office even rathore but he leaves?! Like whaaa....

Aisha Riya went all by themselves to a dangerous mission and nobody from ETF was there or didn't know? Gah!

If Shree don't have curls now then how's his hair style? Can u Post a pic?

What distrust ri talking about when she mentioned rathore? Was there another reason she left apart from her confession?

If have any other questions will reply here 😊

We have discussed everything no?

I will stalk Shree and then send you his pic okay 😂😂😂

Originally posted by: loveuAriya

Loved it

Amazing update

So now precap is coming in the next update

Already waiting for it

Thanks for PM

Plz update soon

Sunday is also gone

I can't promise to update every Sunday. I will just update weekly.

Thanks for the reply 😘