Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 5

This is beautiful. I wish I could describe more, but it's too good for me to comment on. Continue.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Right after you post your OS..😎

Originally posted by: .amigos.

You promise?

Can't make promises lightly. What if you post in an hour or two? Tab toh mein gayi na. But for you, I'll try to update by Friday.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Can't make promises lightly. What if you post in an hour or two? Tab toh mein gayi na. But for you, I'll try to update by Friday.

So she actually starts to like him due to his charm and manners. Honestly there is something that endears u to a manner who treats you right

Loved the part ksg oops !I mean bajaj's dimples !!

This piece of fiction is so engaging and beautiful. I must admit I'm a big admirer of you writing. It's been just two chapters and your brilliance has already transformed me into a voracious reader. The vivid imageries employed by you painted alluring pictures in my psyche.

Rishabh Bajaj continues being an enigma. I'm in love with his characterization. Prerna, I'd like to repeat, is so likeable in our fictions, unlike the one are required to bear in the show.

The equation between PreRish is adorable. I liked RB's joke and her reaction to it.

The conversation between Prerna and her future-ex was loaded with not-so-subtle hints of a future death. I like how you kept it dignified with both being in limits.

"Prerna, the weather is too good to not go out for a walk. Will you join me?"

Saying no to him is impossible when he is looking at her with such warmth. His smile displays the deep dimples under his cheekbones. His smile is enchanting. Infectious.

She nods.

^ Cannot wait for the next part.

Superb awsm update to gud

Lovd it

Plzzz do cont asap

What an engrossing story..

Absolutely loved the equation between Prerna and Rishabh.. They both exude such natural warmth.. Really want to know their detailed back story related to divorce.. Did the evil Bua orchestrate their divorce?!? And I am guessing in this story Prerna is not pregnant and that's what I am liking more.. Here she is self dependent and confident and has a ntuaral charm to her personality which is very likable..

Rishabh's infatuation towards her and the sexual tension between them is very palpable and enjoyable to read.. Their sarcasm, Rishabh's joke with a poker face about shiv and her reaction was awesome..

The character I am totally disliking here is Anurag.. He is behaving like a typical MCP here..

I really want to see Prerna's intelligence and competence helped her to get the job under Shiv not some kind of favor Anurag is insinuating here..

Overall an amazing update.. Waiting eagerly for the next one.. Very much hooked to your awesome Prerna and Rishabh here 😍😍

The flow of the story line is so smooth and it seems to be maturely handles , would waitin for the next updates and also if a possibility of a more mature intimate story line cuz none of the other story lines are inclined