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Index

Concept :- Page1

Prologue :- Page 1

Chapter 1 :- Page 5

Nice concept

will love to read this track with modified version

prologue is beautiful

both trust each other

as a parents both will work together and bring their beloved son back

his words of assurance👍🏼

thanks for writing 👍🏼

😲😲

Kya yeh sach hai ya sapna

OK I will read and edit cuz I need deep breaths first😆

Double post

Apparently I have lost it🤣

Will update comment here

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Read m1

First of all thanks for the ffs, u know how much am obsessed with show wale canon kalma ffs.

Beautiful update malharji

Kallu ka pain, mallu ka pain so beautiful shown.

Waise I didn't understand that ole baby part . Explain plijj malharji😳

haai my jaan u r giving me shock today ff peh ff dekhe love u my jaanu 2🤗

interesting concept

kalma is in pain

waiseh i love moon

please do continue soon

Di aapko aaj Kya hua hai ...shock pe shock de rhi Hain ... second ff ...Haye nazar naa lge aapko 😆

Prologue is amazing .👏

Update soon🥳

Sorry di double post ho gya