Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 37

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update dear

Loved it

Thanks for updating

I didn't understand who is the girlfriend of Lieutenant. I mean there was only aayesha nad Riya down there and In helicopter he was worried for Rohit😆

Loved the conversation between Arjun and Riya

I thought whenever they will talk about those recordings it's going to be awkward but here it didn't feel like there was any awkwardness

Riya get really shocked by the fact that Arjun is her new neighbour

It's good to see Arjun is getting clear day by day about his feelings though I really doubt is it the guilt he is feeling or he is really acknowledging his feelings for her

I am looking forward to see how the secret slowly unfolds and so as Arjun's feelings for Riya.

Great chapter. I am really a fan of your writing. Your other stories of Ariya are also beautiful piece of works

Keep writing and please update soon

Thank you for PM

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Posted: 6 years ago

An AWESOME chapter. Liked it. Thanks for updating.

The doctor was so close to the cure of X-ora ll but killed.If it was before Sikander's death, It could be linked with Sikander but now who could be?? Random terrorist or something big?? Hope the case solved soon.

So, Arjun is much clear to himself what he wants now.He is changed for good. Liked his caring side.His fear of losing her is depicted beautifully. He was so impatient to talk with her.He is hell bent to sort out everything & apologize but she knocked him off & was like not interested or may be don't want to go through all the pain again. Is he even understanding his love for her or only for his guilt doing like that??

I think Riya's panic attack for hospital room is for may be it reminded her X-ora ll related incident. But how Arjun couldn't understand her!

Their conversation in the emergency room was so cute. The revert back of 'Mere chehre pe kuch laga hai' was awesome. It was hilarious how both left from there like thieves!

The two best friends understand each other even now & Arjun is quite open with him then before I think. Rathore's black eye thing was hilarious & Arjun's curiosity more than that😆

Are we getting end of Rathore-Ayesha too? Liked their little scene.

What the Lieutenant was? At a time he was smiling seeing Riya, the next moment with Rohit. By Girlfriend, he meant Riya or the man🤣

How irritated she asked & how calmly he told about the neighbour.The reaction😆 I wish the water were on his face or shirt😆

Is any time soon the past revealing?? The suspense is eating my head!

Edit was awesome.

Try to update soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Continue soon

We can't keep calm

Very well written 💘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Omg....that was a hell of a thrilling episode....fantabulous...just wow....thank god all three of them are safe.... now who is this lieutenant's gf? Is it riya?....no i cann't take it....i really like d way arjun granted her wish.... i also think that if arjun shows a bit more concern, a bit more care and a bit more love...riya won't be able to reject arjun coz she is worn out and exhausted physically as well as mentally....she too needs /wants arjun and his intense love to heal herself of d trauma and ignorance that she has undergone since last few years. What do u think?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh fish thank god back up reached on time to save Riya Aisha & rohit

When samjun got to know abt Aisha & Riya they were hell worried abt them

Seeing Riya like that Arjun almost lost his breath & made him realize what she meant to him

Oh god why Riya is so frustrated in the hospital?

She didn’t even take painkillers & also told Arjun to take her out of hospital

Arjun talked to Riya abt their past but Riya isn’t ready to understand anything

Coz whatever happened in the past broke Riya & now she has changed so much🥺

Oops Riya was so shocked to know Arjun is her neighbor😲

Now what Arjun will do to stop Riya leaving after they solve the case?

Continue plz

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Posted: 6 years ago

Ariya relationship is so complicated

Glad back up force came on time to rescue

What's up with lieutenant??? Who is his gf???

Why riya left that place so abruptly???

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Originally posted by: Shanaariya

Awesome amez super update

Loveit

Cont soon

Thank you for the reply 😊

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Nice chapter. It also tasted my patience with the detailed case.But I think it was needed for the basement of the upcoming scene for which I'm waiting, the previous precap!

Riya is doing much to mend the broken friendship.Liked how she claim her right as a friend not waiting for an answer.

Who is Dr. Mehra? X-ora ll related?

Looks like Riya is friendly with Ayesha than others.

So, they're caught in the sea cause of the bad weather but it also saved them from the intruders.Both Riya & Rohit is injured.If Rohit's digital devices would have worked, they could be in much better position.Looking forward to see how they will be saved and Arjun will come to know.

Nice edit.

Thanks for the PM.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.Continue soonish.

The case is very important for the ongoing track and for the story.

Another reason is that I feel I am a bad romance writer 😂 I can writer thrill and mystery and cases better than any other genre so cases bring balance to my story 😂

No, Dr. Mehra is not XoraII related but he has some role in this story and Riyas life. It will be revealed later.

To others I mean except Arjun-chotu-rathod-shree, Riya is normal as any other person. Its only affecting these four because they have seen how she was and how she is now. They can judge a difference but Aisha, sakshi and Liza cant.

Thank you so much for the detailed reply 🥰

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Originally posted by: minamma

An action pack update it is

I guess in next update you are going to reveal who's ayesha's boyfriend...

Now it is making sense about the prelude you have left us with some days back

Still no luck with that.

Let's see who is his girlfriend 😆

Thanks for the reply 🥰

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