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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Hope akshat guddan ko jald hi dhoond le

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Part- 5


One Year Later

Jindal House

Akshat had tried finding Guddan & Revati but there was no news about them. He even tried to contact Vikram but he was also unavailable. Regarding his business he have to went to different cities there also he could not find them. As he returned from Mumbai, Dadi, Durga & Laxmi went to him. Akshat looked at them & nodded his head in negative, they sighed.

Da:Lalla do hafte baat Mrs. Singh ke bete ki shaadi hai hume invite kiya hai parson nikalna hai..

AJ:Maa aap log jayi mera maan nehi hai

D:AJ aapko jaana parega Mrs. Singh ke bete sirf family friend nehi hai aapke business partner bhi hai aur bhagwan ne chaha sayad Sasuma ka pata bhi lagjaye

Da:Haan lalla Durga bahu sahi kah rahi hai

AJ:Thik hai maa aap tayari kijiye.. parson subha niklenge

All of them left. Akshat looked at Guddan's picture.

AJ:Kahan ho tum Guddan

Durga, Laxmi & Saraswati were working at kitchen.

D:Ek saal hogaya par unn dono kahi pata nehi chal raha hai

L:Himmat maat hariye Durga Di bohat jald pata chal jayega

S:Kya aap log uss Guddan ke name ka jabh kar rahi hai acha hoga woh kabhi na mile uske bina ghar mein kitni shanti hai

Durga stopped her work & went near Saraswati & twists her wrist. Laxmi & Saraswati were shocked.

D:Ainda agar Guddan sasuma ke against ek word bhi bola toh toh gharwalon ke yeh batadungi ki kaise tumne uss Antara ke sath deal kiya tha ki jaisei use property milegi uski 40% malkin tum banogi

Saraswati was shocked, Durga left her hand she & Laxmi left kitchen.

S:Agar kuch karne gayi toh mera raaz khul jayega ise acha chup hi rahun

Two Days Later

All the family members reached Udaipur Airport, the place they were going was more 3 hour distance. All came except Kishore & Vardaan, they are supposed to come two days before wedding. Akshat was driving car with Dadi beside him. After 1 & half- hour journey, Akshat saw a girl was asking for lift.

Da:Lalla gari toh rok dekh koi lift mangraha hai

AJ:Haan maa

Akshat stopped the car in front of girl.

Girl:Kya mujhe age tak lift desakte hai pls

AJ:Kahan jana hai apko

Girl:Ji jana toh mujhe Galaxy Resort par ahan se 45 mins distance pe ek dhaba hai aap mujhe wahan chod dijiye

Da:Arey beta humlog bhi wahin jaarahe aaja tujhe chod dete hain

Girl:Sachi Thank you..

The girl get into the car & sat beside Durga & Laxmi. Akshat started the car.

Girl:Thank you so much apke help ke liya woh kya hai na meri bus chut gayi aur late na ho isilye lift mangli

L:Apko dar nehi laga stranger se lift mangte huye?

Girl:Darti toh mein apni maa se bhi nehi hun lekin agar late hojati na meri Di meri jaan leleti actually mere Bhaiya ki shaadi hai na isilye.. by the way mera name Piu hai

A:Ek min apki bhai ki shaadi.. kahin aap Manish Singh ki behen toh nehi?

P:Arey Haan ek min aap log mere bhai ki shaadi mein jara hein kya.. acha aap log hi Jindal family hai kya?

Da:Haan beta

P:Arey bapre pls pls gharwalon ko maat batana ki aap logo ne lift diya hai mujhe warna Di bohat dategi

All smiled at her talk.

AJ:Waise tum jo baar baar Di ki baat kar rahi ho jitna mein janta hu Manish ki toh sirf ek hi behen hai woh tum ho toh yeh Di

P:Haan Di matlab meri badi Masi ki beti.. humare saath hi rehti hai 1 saal se.. jo dhaba ayega na woh unka hi hai.. meri Di dil ki bohat achi hai but jab unka koi trust todta hai woh bohat gussa karti hai.. Di ne bohat bhasoda kiya tha mujhpe ki mein bus miss nehi karungi par miss hogayi.. aap logo ne itna travel kiya hai bhook lagi hogi samne Di ke restaurant mein khalijiyega.. pls mana maat karna yeh meri taraf se treat aur aap meri Di se milbhi lena wahi hogi abhi

AJ:Acha thik hai

Akshat reached the dhaba & stopped his car. He read the name of dhaba. It was 'Possible Restaurant'. All were surprised reading the name.

P:Arey chaukiye maat name parke kya hai na meri Di se na pehle dhang se ek kam nehi hota tha aur aaj aisa koi kam nehi hai jo meri Di se na ho pata ho chahe woh khana bana, business ya phir wedding planning karna ya ho ya koi aur kam meri Di sab ho pata hai

All got down from the car & sat on a table. Piu called a waiter & was about to give order when they all heard an angry voice of a girl.

Girl:Tumhari himat kaise huyi mera bhasoda todneki

All were shocked hearing the voice specially Jindal family.

AJ:Guddan

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing as always👍🏼

Thanks for giving fast update🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wow amazing plz plz update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

So now guddan has become perfectionist

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing part

Bahot accha likha hai excited for next part

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Awesome update

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Note


As there are new characters I can't upload pics but I m telling there names.

Piu Singh - Reem Sheikh

Mrs. Singh - Supriya Shukla

Manish Singh - Barun Sobti

Neelam Agarwal (Manish's fiancee) - Sanaya Irani


Part - 6


All turned towards the voice & was shocked to see Guddan. Akshat was happy to see his Guddan.

P:Arey bapre abb kya hogaya

Jindal family turned towards Piu.

D:Tum ise janti ho

P:Haan yehi toh meri Di hai Guddan.. iss restaurant ki malkin aur restaurant ki chef

All were shocked hearing Guddan's qualities.

P:Di aise gusse mein iska matlab issne Di ka bhasoda toda hai.. aur jo Di ka bhasoda todta hai Di usse tod deti hai

Akshat looked at his family members then at Guddan. Here Guddan stepped dangerously towards the man who bowed down his head.

G:Tumhari aise himat ki tum Guddan ka bhasoda todo.. jis restaurant ke meine tumhe manager banaya, accountant banaya aur tumne chori kiyi..

Man:Sorry mam.. Maine sirf paanch hazaar rupaye liye the majboori thi mein wapas karne hi wala tha..

G:Baat yahan paison ki nehi hai baat yahan bhasode ki hai.. jab paisa chahiye the mang lete mein khushi khushi de deti bhasoda todne ne ki kya zaroorat thi

Man: I m sorry mam.. pls maaf kardijiye

G:Guddan ko jhoothe aur bhasoda todne walon se sakt nafrat hai

All Jindal family were shocked at Guddan's behavior.

G:You are fired

Saying this Guddan wore her sunglasses & left the restaurant. Akshat couldn't believe it was his Guddan, the girl who used forgive people now doesn't even tolerate them.

P:Hey bhagwan kya banadiya apne meri Di ko

Akshat turned towards Piu.

Da:Kya matlab hai tera beta

P:Meri Di pehle bilkul aise nehi thi.. kisi ke badi se bhi badi galati karne walon ko bhi Di yunhi maaf kardeti thi aur aaj.. yeh sirf aur sirf uss Akshat ki wajah se hua hai.. na Di ki uske saath shaadi hoti na yeh sab hota

Akshat looked at her stunned.

AJ:Akshat kain?

P:Meri Di ka ex-husband.. jisne uske aur uske parivar ke liya apni jaan tak dau lagadi usne kya kiya meri Di pe thoda sa bhi bhasoda nehi kiya ulta meri Di pe pata nehi kya kya ilzam lagaya

A:Yeh Sab tumhare Guddan Di ne bola hai

P:Nehi nehi woh Di ki choti behen Revati Di ne meri maa ko sab kuch bataya tha.. toh jab batarahi thi tab maine sab sunliya warna aaj dono ne Akshat aur uske family ke khilaf ek word nehi bola hai ulta mein aur bhai kuch bolte hai toh Guddan Di hume dant deti hai.. mujhe sirf uss admi ka name pata kabhi surname pata hota toh ab tak jaan se marchuki hoti..

Akshat couldn't believe that what damaged he caused Guddan. He stood up & went outside the restaurant. Other members also followed him. Piu was confused at his behaviour he also followed him. Akshat stood in front of his car & tried to suppressed his tears, Dadi holds him.

Da:Sambhal apne aap ko lalla

Piu stood behind him, Akshat turned towards her.

AJ:Jis Akshat ki tum baat kar rahi ho na woh koi aur nehi mein hun

Piu was stunned hearing this.

P:Yeh aap kya kehraha hai

D:Sach kehrahe hein AJ, Guddan ka pura name Guddan Akshat Jindal hai.. AJ ki wife aur hum teeno ki saas

Piu looked at them in disbelief & stepped backwards.

AJ:Meri baat ekbar

P:Kya sunu mein apki ki wajah se Di ek pathar dil insan bangayi hai.. apki ki wajah se Di ke khud ke papa ne unn par bhasoda nehi kiya.. Di abb pehli jaise hai magar jo dard apne unhe diya hai na uski wajah se woh gusel aur kathor ban chuki hai.. yeh sunu mein

AJ:Janta hu bohat bada gunah kiya tha maine Guddan pe bhasoda na karke.. inn ek saal mein maine Guddan ko harjaga dhundne ki koshis ki par kahin nehi mili.. pls piu meri madat karo Guddan ka bhasoda wapas jitna ke liye.. bohat pyar karta hun usse

Akshat folded his hands in front of her. Piu looked at him helplessly.

P:Thik hai karungi apki madat magar isliye kyuki Di bhi apse aaj bhi pyar karti hai isliye toh unhone dusri shaadi karne se mana kardiya

All were happy at Piu's decision.

AJ: Thank you Piu..

P:Lekin use pehle apko kisike permission leni padegi

AJ:Kiski

Piu dialled a number.

P:Haan hello kahan hai aap

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow 👏👍🏼

Amazing part guddan became like aj

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wow superb plz plz update soon

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