‘Updated’ Guddan - TS - Mat jao... part 4 on pg 6 - Page 2

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Everyone quietly left the hall leaving Akshat alone... he just looked blankly at the door, his eyes brimming with tears... then he walked up the stairs towards their room... with each step came the flashback of each painful thing he had said to her, with each step he saw her face and the pain in her eyes every time he said those words to her...

Akshat - Mujhe kaise Uske chehre pe wo takleef nazar nahi aayi... itna kaisa kho Gaya main Antara ke Dhoke mein ki apni Guddan ka pyaar nahi Dekh paaya... vadaa kiya tha ki hamesha uspe bharosa karungi hamesha uska saath dunga to kyun Antara ke aate hi wo saath chod Diya Maine...

He enters his room and the first thing he notices is the chits he had put in the wall that day... that horrible memory came crashing down on him!

Akshat - kitna dard Diya hai Maine tumhe Guddan... ab mere dil ko mehsoos ho raha hai wo dard jo tumhe mehsoos hua hoga...

He fell on the ground and started crying... he missed her and wanted to hug her... suddenly he heard a voice... Jindal Saab!

He was shocked... He looked up and saw Guddan standing there in that beautiful yellow ruffle saree... she looked beautiful as ever... she sat next to him and said - Kya hua Jindal Saab... aap aise zameen pe kyun baithe hain aur ro kyun rahe hain...

Akshat- Guddan! Tum waapas aa gayi!!! Mere paas waapas aa gayi...

Guddan - Hum gaye Hi kahan hain Jindal Saab... humne aapse Wada kiya tha hamesha aapke saath rahenge to hum aapko chod ke kaise jaa sakte hain... aap Jaante hain Jindal Saab... Hum chahe aapse kitna Hi dur kyun na chale jaayen aap hamesha humare dil mein rehte hain... jaante hain kyun... kyunki Hum aapse baht pyaar karte hain...

Alshat - Main bhi Tumse baht pyaar karta hun Guddan...

Guddan - pyaar karte hain to Hume khud se dur jaane kaise de rahe hain... humare liye aapka pyaar itna kamzoor hai kya...

Akshat - Nahi Guddan... aisa nahi hai... Maine tumhe khud se dur nahi jaane dunga...

Saying this Akshat trying hugging her but she vanished... it was all a dream... he was imagining her...

Akshat - tumhe sahi kaha Guddan... tum hamesha mere saath Rahi us waqt bhi jab Maine tumhara saath nahi Diya... tumne apne pyaar ki taaqat dikha di... ab meri baari hai... tumhe apni zindagi mein waapas le ke aaungi main... zindagi tumhare saath Hi hai meri warna nahi hai...

Next day morning Akshat went to dadi and Angad and said that I need to do something to bring Guddan back...

Akshat - main kya Karun... use kaise manaaun... wo to mujhe baat tak nahi kar Rahi hai...

They thought for some time then Angad said...

Angad - Bhai... Hume Revati ki madad leni chahiye...

Dadi - Angad sahi keh raha hai beta... waise bhi mujhe lagta hai ek baar Bhushan ji se baat karni chahiye Hume... Angad aur Revati ke rishte ke bahaane unke ghar chalte hain... wahan jaa kar hi andaza lagega ki aage kya Karen...

Akshat - aap Sahi keh Rahi hai maa...

Angad - main Revati ko phone karta hun...

While efforts to bring back Guddan was going on somewhere else something dangerous was getting planned for Guddan...

Antara was in jail and said to someone who had come to visit her in jail - meri is haalat ki zimmedaar wo Guddan hai... ab mujhe Shanti tab hi milegi jab main use jaan se maar dungi...

To be continued...

Its amazing

We can feel the feelings and pains to which akshan is going through

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Awesome job

Akshat's pain was unbearable

Angad revti ki shadi idea Best hai wish ki ah guddan mil hate

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You penned the emotions so nicely

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So beautiful and painful👏

Every emotions and pain can be felt by reading each word👏

Can antara be out of picture forever...