AkshAn FF: Judaai (Last Part, Pg 20) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part - 2

Jindal House

One Week Later

All family members were mourning on Guddan's dead specially Akshat. He has stopped talking to people & most of the time in his room. Akshat was sitting on his bed holding Guddan's picture as thinking about her when all of a sudden he heard Antara's voice.

A:Akshat bacho

Akshat came out of his trance went towards hall. As he was going downstairs he slipped & rolls down. He gets injury on his head due to which his head started spinning. Somehow he stood up & stood at center of the hall. Antara comes & went towards him & holds his shoulder.

A: Akshat kya tum thik ho

AJ: Haan mein thik hun

A:Par zyada der tak nehi rahoge

Akshat looked at her confused. She pushed him & he falls on the ground. Antara bends towards him.

AJ:Antara yeh tum kya kar rahi ho

A: Jo mujhe Guddan ne karne pe majboor kiya hai.. tumhara khoon karne jaa rahi hun

Akshat looked at her shocked. She stood up went backwards near the pillar where the chandelier rope was tied up. The chandelier was just above Akshat's head. She opened the rope & holds the end of it. Akshat somehow went on his knees.

A:Main tumhe marna nehi chahti thi par kya karun tum jab tak maroge nehi tab tak mujhe yeh property jo nehi milegi.. agar Guddan ne aisa clause add nehi kiya hota toh tum apne Guddan ke adao ke saath jeete aur mein tumhare paiso ke saath

Akshat looked at her shocked.

A: Aise haran maat ho Akshat tumhe marte huye mere haat nehi kapenge.. arey mere sage bhai ko marte huye haat nehi kaape tum toh phir bhi mere ex husband ho.. haan maine apne bhai ko mara pata hai kyu isliye ki woh apni sagi behen ka saath nehi deraha tha uss Guddan ke saath meri sachai gharwalon ke samne lane wala tha..

Akshat somehow stood up & looked at Antara with an unbelievable reaction.

AJ:Iska matlab Guddan ne jo bhi kahan tha woh sab

A:Sach tha.. uski har ek baat mere khilaf sab sach tha.. mera coma mein jana tumhare saath sona meri pregnancy sab kuch ek natak tha sirf aur sirf tumhare paison ke liya

Lone tear dropped from Akshat's eyes. He couldn't believe that Antara could do all this just for property. Due to her he hurted his Guddan & now she is gone. Akshat closed his eyes remembered the hateful words he had said to her when Antara faked her miscarriage. How he told her that loving her was his grave mistake.

A:Mujhe pata hai ab tumhe bohat regret horaha par koi baat nehi thodi der mein tum bhi apni Guddan ke pass chale jayoge phir dono pati patni ek sath rehna

AJ: Kya kami reh gayi thi mere pyar mein Antara jo tumne yeh sab kiya

A:Sirf pyar se zindagi nehi chalti Akshat paisa sabse badi cheez hai.. maine tumse yeh soch ke shaadi kiyi pyar ke saath saath saren aso aram milege par kya mila mein 3 bacho ki maa bangayi.. saas God.. mein Guddan ki tarah pagal nehi thi bash isilye yeh sab kiya

Akshat looked at her in a trance.

A: Chinta maat karo tumhare marne ke baad mein tumhare gharwalon ka ache se khayal rakhungi.. jaisei property mere name hojayega tabh koi acha sa dharmsala dhund kar unhe waha bhej dungi

By this time Akshat was in tears. He was just thinking about Guddan.

A:Bye Bye Akshat Jindal or AJ

With that she left the rope of chandelier & it started falling down. Akshat didn't moved from his place. He just closed his eyes.

AJ: Guddan


Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Very nice

I think Gunddan saved aj

Keep writing

Update soon, I am very excited for next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing yr

Finally bhootni aunty ne apni sacchai ugal di

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Excited by for next part..

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Can't wait to see what will happen

Amazing

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Antra is s7ch a big pyscho

Waiting for more

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

awesome

plz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chlo acha h hmari gudiya ko zada kuch aur shna nhi oda aur bhootni aunty ne sachai khud hi keh di

...muje aisa kyu lg rga h ki guddu zinda h aur aj ko usne bacha liye hoga.....🤓

..but an amazing update ...jldi se suspense kholo buddy plz cont soon😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much guys for liking my ff.. Will update next part soon..👍🏼 Bash iske baat ke parts parne ke joote chapal maat marna.

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