To Err is Human (AK/AR)1 parts 1-17 - Page 44

awwww the pooor food! Is jealousy is getting me all mad and frustrated….at the food! Hehe!!

Hehe!! Poor raoool!! He is gonna get it for sure…but why mr. armaan are you soo concerned??

Sooooo mr. Angad here is so confident that Kripa is his…wait a minute…since when did he own Kripa…thought he hated the sight of him….so why doe he feel the need for her to belong to him…hehe guys I tell ….so confused!! Hehe!

awww poor prithvi!! Stupid Angad!! He spoiled prithvi's moood!! I also hope that Angad doesn't make fun of Prithvi and stuff….but knowing the way Angad is behaving he won't leave prithvi I think :s

Kripa and Riddhima looked at each other, wondering what had prompted the overt gesture of friendship from the two obnoxious men? ….cuz they were jealous like heck!! Hehe!!! And what did armaan mean when he said how can they do that?? Kripa and riddhima have full freedom to do whatever they want to…no one can stop them…jeez armaan calm down!!! Hehe!

hehe loved it when the two girls said no…and omg! The four guys actually listened! And armaan said "Jaisi aapki marzi," did I read right lol! Since when do men listen to women! Lol!

omg!! Armaan is soo mean!! Tennis ball! Has he no sense!! No look what he did….riddhima twisted her foot!! Good!! Armaan is too much!

Why does he have to bring riddhima's dead in the middle!

And awww!!! Current passed when they touched! About time! Lol!

grr this is the limit! Can't believe he left prithvi and rahul there!! Wat a jerk!!!! And he is soo rude!!!!

Angad turned back at that comment and grinned, "aap log tho doctor hain……jaanti hongi ki zyaada sweetness health ke liye achchi nahin hai…..kadvi dawaa se hi ilaaj hota hai….. meethi cheezien sirf zubaan ko bhaati hain…..zehen ko nahin!" loved this line!!!

Wonderful part!! looooved it!!😃😃😃

woooo u updated!!!!
my bday was okkk not 2 bad lol
abt d part.....wooooo me got an award 2!!! hehe
shame prithvi and rahul...gt left behind hahaha
i love AA's shaitaaniyaan! plzzzz cont soon!!
and eyshhh i want some romance alreadyyy lol
that was not nice of Armu 2 hrut Ridz like that:@
oh btw bolly baby....i would love to be ur friend! mujhse dosti karogi?:D and im sure ouma wont mind sharing ranbir with u hehe

this time i am with my early comments 😆 lke usual...

angad is following his instinct... thats good... he is not in hurry to tame the girls like armaan. he is pretty much sure that kripa will be his... i wonder what will happen to him after kripa becomes his...

armaan is a total spoilt brat... he sprained her leg on the first day.. pata nahin.. aage kya hoga..

i like this prithvi... not rahul... 😆 but they made fun of themselves...i felt sad for prithvi... 😳

👏👏wow!! I luved it and Armaan is so naughty and urrm sort of obsessive..haha..can't believe he hurt Ridz like that, but i guess he got what he wanted and Raoool and Pritvhi got kicked out of the car.😆😆
~ Call me mean and nasty, but i feel no sort of sympathy for Pritvhi at all, maybe his real kyph 'avtar' has ruined every character of his for me, but I really don't care. Still I love the fact he is trying to impress Angad,😆 (its i first i belive) and sounds like he won't be a tough match for Angad. Not sure about Rahol, I'm scared they both will 4get the medicine course and they will make Ridz their trophy😡
~ Ranbir won best dressed, i mean his always best dressed,he won the title also on some Zoom tv episode i was watching the other day😳😆 for the filmfare awards!! Bless him..and woo I won it as well!! And Hinnzy!! The awesome threesome!! Great part! Looking 4ward to more!!

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hahahha yeah....oumzzzz so happy we got da award:D dont worry...u and ranbir can be a couple....hehe....but im still both ya bessie looool

loved thee part!

Arman is ridiculous! LOL! oh dear... Angad is sooo much calmer...I like it...it's a calmness filled with arrogance! Like you said...he knows Kripa's his soo need to worry!

Anddd the car was SEXY di... I could imagine it soo perfectly!

loved the part! 😃

i loved the comment angad gave "kadvi dawaa se hi ilaaj hota hai….. meethi cheezien sirf zubaan ko bhaati hain…..zehen ko nahin!". awesome part. lol...why is prithvi so worried about angad not talking to him.


~Sana~

OMG di it was simply awesome part

yes arman is so jealous and angad he is so confidence on himself that he will get his kripa not matter what so he is not jealous at all muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

wow what a plan armaan make to make girls sits in their car and they kicked rahul and prithvi out 😆 😆 😆

now can't wait till all four of them get back together

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal

Originally posted by: **~SoniHinnU~**

hahahha yeah....oumzzzz so happy we got da award:D dont worry...u and ranbir can be a couple....hehe....but im still both ya bessie looool

😲OMG!!!! Did U Just..but How..Ye Kise Hua!?!?!? haha!! I love it..msn par aa, who talked sense into you?!!?🤣 Ranbir and Me..Hiyaa and Hinnzy and Akkii!1 SOni Hinnzy!! hehe

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Originally posted by: vallanki

RESERVED!!! 😉

Ifollowed the girls😛..I'm slow reader and everyone takes place before me tho I start reading first😆

I'm here with comments😳..

You stopped without showing kripa's reaction😕😆Better start next part with her reaction😳

I loved Angad here .. very balanced... unlike Arman who is arrogant, attitude, hasty, jealous personality..he already convince his heart that kripa belongs to him👏Good positive approach😳...so, he is supporting Dr.Kartik instead of understanding what Keerti was going thru? Did I miss something here? Did "first impression-A"statemetn meant that keerti fell for Kartik first tho Subhankar was in deep love with her and she dint recognise b4??...like kyph-AKP??...then A is right to dream for kripa to come back..hope he won't be like subhankar😆He better realise it..instead of waiting for kripa to come to him leaving prithvi..he should try to divert her attention towards him.😳

[quote]"how one person could take the joy away from Prithvi's glory in a second! "[/quote>

You better have goodanswer for this😳

I wonder why prithvi is worried about Angad..hope you don't make him third gender like in some other ff...twinswala😆

Loved Arman's spontaneous mischief👏he is determined to drive Ridhi's attention...loved it.

Looks like AK will start slow and steady attraction towards each other. Very balancing.👏..hope it won't be late like KKS story.

Ridhi has headstrong along with strong respect on her father..she cannot tolerate one negative comment against her father..she better get used to it ..after all Arman is future sil and all sil's love to comment negative on FILs😆

This ff is different as you are giving detailed description of the story-each scene stepby step...unlike other ffs where you used to go straight to the point. Liked it👏

Hope we get updates promptly on your vacation as we always had..

Thanks Vallanki...loved ur detailed comments 👏 👏

Ok coming to the Kartik-Keerti part. Actually Shubhankar loved Keerti too but was a silent lover and never expressed himself.Keerti also loved him but Kartik was more expressive and stole her away from a silent Shubhankar. Angad does not want to be like Shubhankar. He sensed that Keerti loved Shubhankar more but ended up marrying Kartik who was the first but not the right choice for her as she is not that happy now. Will he be able to change the history in his favor now?

Prithvi is sad because he wants everyone to like him 😆 U will find out more about why he wants to be Angad's friend....and don't look for parallels from real life 😆 😆 😆 these are just characters 😉 😉 And No gay-way ka chakkar here 😆 😆 ket SRK-Kjo-SAK have fun with those jokes now 😆 😆 yes this story is moving slower because I have to tackle so many characters and make sure that i don't end up writing a AK centric story as I always do 😃