AkshAn SS: Adhoore ( Part - 5, Pg 4) - Page 2

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Part - 3

Jindal House

Night

All retires in room. Guddan came inside her room & looked at Akshat. Akshat also looked at her. Guddan without a word took her pillow & blanket started moving out.

AJ: Kahan jaa rahi ho

G: Terrace pe sone hume yahaan nehi sona.. aap chinta maat kijiye buaji ko kuch pata nehi chalega

Without hearing anything she left the room.

AJ: Bohat jald Guddan tumhe mein issh kamre mein wapas layunga

Next Day

All were busy as today was Angad & Revati's mehendi, engagement & sangeet. Whole day Akshat tried to talk to Guddan but she ignored him all day.

AJ: Guddan full avoid mood mein hai kisibhi halat mein baat karni hi padegi.. inn dono ke shaadi tak ka waqt hai

All women gathered at terrace for mehendi. Some women forcefully made Guddan wear mehendi, the mehendi women even wrote Akshat's name on her hand.

Women: Arey apki mehendi ka rang toh bohat gehra hai iska matlab aapke pati apse bohat pyar karte hai

Guddan face dropped hearing this & left from there. Akshat heard their conversation.

AJ(in mind): Pyar toh mein Guddan se bohat karta hun aur bohat jald mein woh jatayunga bhi

Guddan in her room looked at her mehendi & smiled.

G(in mind): Kaash Jindal Saab jitna humse pyar karte hai thoda sa bharosa bhi karte

A lone tear dropped from her eyes.

Evening

It was time for engagement & sangeet. Akshat was getting ready when a button of his kurta broke.

AJ:Ise bhi abhi tutna tha

Akshat took thread & needle tried to sew it. Just then Guddan entered saw his struggle & went towards him. Looking the way he was trying to sew Guddan started laughing. Ahshat looked at her amused.

G: Chalo Mr. Perfectionist ko kuch toh nehi aata

AJ:Badi hasi arahi hai na?

G:Hasi toh ayegi akhir aisa nazara thodi har roz dekhne ko milta hai.. layi hum kardete hai

She took the needle & thread started to sew. Akshat was staring at her as he was mesmerised by her beauty. Unknowingly his hands rested on her waist. Guddan was feeling ticklish due to their close proximity, it was difficult for her to continue her job but she somehow completed it.

G(whispering tone):Hogaya

Then Akshat pulled her closer & both looked at each other eyes. There eyes were speaking thousand words. He forwarded his face towards her when all of a sudden Laxmi entered in their room.

L:Sasuma woh

Akshat & Guddan moved away from each other. Laxmi realized she came at wrong time.

L:Woh niche sab wait kar rahen hai

Saying this she ran from there. Guddan also embarrassed left the room & went downstairs.

AJ:Merehi gharwale mere romance ke dushman bankar baithe hai

Then he got ready & went downstairs & joined the family. All gathered for the ceremony & soon engagement took place. Akshat was stealing glances but Guddan avoided him fully. During sangeet ceremony also Guddan avoided staying near him. Akshat was getting irritated as he couldn't talk with her. As guests started leaving again Akshat tried to talk to her but again she avoided by saying an excuse. Three daughter-in-law's went to Akshat.

S: Kya hua AJ baat kiya apne

AJ: Woh mujhe puri tarha se ignore kar rahi hai

D: Ab

AJ: Aaj mein Guddan se kisibhi tarah se baat karunga

Saying this he went to his study & started drinking whiskey from the bottle itself.

AJ:Pls Guddan baat karo mujhse

He drank the full bottle & started going towards his room. He was stumbling on his way to room but somehow he reached there but Guddan was nowhere.

AJ(drunk):Phir Terrace pe chaligayi

Akshat went towards terrace. Here, Guddan was standing near the pool & thinking about Akshat.

G(in mind): Kaash Jindal Saab aap thoda se bharosa toh aaj humlg eksath hote.. kash mein aap par phirse aitbar kar pati.. apse alag rehna bohat muskil hai

Just then Akshat came to terrace & saw her. He went towards her & pulled her in his arms & caged him between his arms. Guddan was shocked with Akshat's sudden behavior, realising what was happening she started struggle to come out from his arms but he couldn't.

G:Jindal Saab chodiye hume

AJ(drunk): Chup bilkul chup.. nehi actually tum bolo tumhari silent treatment mujhse bardast nehi horaha bahut dard hota hai..

Guddan was shocked hearing all this. She realized he was drunk.

G: Aap hosh mein nehi hai chaliye aap

AJ:Nehi jab tak tum meri baat nehi sunogi tab tak nehi chodunga tumhe.. ekbr sunlo plss

G:Thik hai

AJ(teary eyes): Janta hu bohat taqleef pauhchayi hai tumhe.. tumhara bharosa toda hai aur maafi ke layak nehi hun.. lekin yeh bhi sach hai jab mera dimag tumpe aitbaar nahi kar paraha tha tab mera dil bar bar sirf tumpe bhasoda kar raha par maine issh dil ki ek baat nehi suni aur dekho pachtabhi raha hun.. tumhe khokar

Hearing all this tears were streaming down from Guddan's eyes. Akshat kept his forehead on her forehead.

AJ:Jab main Antara ke sath tha jab yeh soch raha tha ki woh pregnant hai kitni kitni bar yeh khayal aaya ki yeh sab kuch chod kar tumhare saath kahin bhak jahan sirf tum aur mein.. kitna bar mere yeh kadam tumhare ore janke liye tadpe hai Guddan.. kyuki mein tumse bohat pyar karta hun

Guddan blinked for a second & looked at him.

G: Agar pyar itna hi pyar kartein the toh bhasoda kyun nehi kiya

Akshat left her moved backwards & stood just in front of pool.

AJ:Gunah hua hai mujhse Guddan tumpe bhasoda na karke aur iske liya tum jo saaza do mujhe manzoor hai par pls mujhe chod ke maat jao.. kyuki yeh Akshat Jindal apni Guddan ke bina adhoora hai.. jee nehi payunga tumhare bina

Guddan do not know what to say so she just turned & started to leave.

AJ:Guddan ruko

Akshat stumbled & felt into the pool. As he was drunk he was struggling to swim & was drowning. Guddan turned around & saw him & ran to save him. She jumped into the pool & went towards him.

G:Jindal Saab

Somehow she managed to pull Akshat out of pool & made him laid on the bed of terrace. She started shaking him.

G(patting his face): Jindal Saab uthiye.. uthiye

Akshat opened his eyes. Guddan was relieved to saw him concious & was about to leave when he caught her & stopped her. Guddan looked at him.

AJ: Pls Guddan mujhe chod kar maat jao.. pls

Guddan was sad seeing his state. Akshat falls asleep holding her hand. She tried to free her hands but couldn't.

G:Ahi sojate hai kya kar sakte hai

Guddan slept beside while he was holding her hand.

Next Day

Akshat woke up & stood up holding his head as it was paining. Someone brought a glass of lemon water in front of his face. He looked saw Guddan holding it.

G:Lijiye pi lijiye

Akshat took it from her & drank it.

G: Jab samhala nahi jaata hai khudko toh itna peeta kyun hai

AJ(embarrassed): Sorry

Guddan turned & started to leave but Akshat stopped her. She turned towards him.

AJ:Maine nashe mein kuch galat nehi bola toh tumhe.. actually kuch yaad nehi araha hai

Guddan thought about his confession & asking for forgiveness.

G: Nehi.. chinta maat kijiye

Without saying anything she left from there.

AJ:Thank God kuch ulta seedha nehi bola paar aaj kisibhi halat mein Guddan ko mananahi hoga

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