Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 34

Originally posted by: minamma

It was again a beautiful update

There must be solid reason for riya to verify indifferent towards them otherwise it wasn't her persona to be this rude

there is and it will come out as the story progresses.

I actually want riya to just shut miss publicist mouth once and for all

It would be so Ecstatic to read

it would be ecstatic to write that too

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Awesome Update.

It's good that Shree-Riya's relation is mending and they are much comfortable with each other.At least now Riya will have someone too close.

Thats the only relation shes trying to fix as for now.

Arjun had known about the recording and again misunderstood her.Also didn't want to hear anyone's justification.Can't he tone down his anger for a little, Angry young man.

That's the problem with these angry young mans. they just dont listen😵

In previous chapter, Riya said Arjun doesn't know that she knows what happened that night but she herself told that. And didn't Shree tell Riya about office incident? I think, not, he didn't want to hurt her by telling.

You have thought right. Shree didn't tell her about the office incident because of the urgency of the case. if he'd have enough time he would have warned her about this angry mans mood.

Sorry to say, even I feel Riya shouldn't have opened the topic in that important case.

there was something else she wanted to say, but as arjun was blinded by his couldnt think of anything else. its miscommunication on both of their parts. what she wanted to say will be revealed soon.

Really where the case is going🤔

i am trying my best to wrap up the case, but I would like to keep it parallel with whats going on in the characters personal life.

Hopefully, the mystery will unfold in the next update.But I'm waiting patiently like you said.

i am really thankful for your patience

The edit is beautiful.Both rock in black.Liked the texture. Isn't the banner of first page new? It's also good.

thank you really🤗i used textures from deviantarts for making those. and yes the banner in the first page is new too. thanks for liking it🤗

And one thing, can I make a request of an edit?

yes sure, you can. just PM me your specifications, i will be happy to do an edit for you

Thanks for PM and updating regularly.

Please Continue soon.Eagerly waiting.

thanks for the reply dear, it means a lot to me😳

Originally posted by: AriyaLilyOrchid

Finally the past is uncovering

And slowly 😳 it will take time😳

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I don’t remember the last time I had commented on a thread. But this one is too beautiful and close to my heart to leave without dropping a comment.

hey tasnim🤗

I am very pleased to know that😃 I took a long break from the forum and didnt want to continue yet i just gave in😳 and i am happy that i am doing something good with the story for your liking 😳

I started visiting the forum a few days back and came across some amazing stories. But it has to be my fav one.

I am flattered❤️🤗☺️

I am just loving the way you are spilling the beans with each update. The pace is just accurate. And a big thanks to you for not rushing the story. Trust me it helps the readers or rather say helps me to connect myself to the characters if the story is not rushed.

I feel its important for the readers to connect with the characters of a story. here we know these characters but they have shades too, thats why i didnt want rush the story

I could always connect myself to Arjun's character and waited for more to unfold. But then I myself stopped watching the show after Riya's death. Was it the teenager in me who expected a love story between the supercop and miss statistics or something else that compelled me to do so I really don't know.

God!! its not only you okay. i have cried buckets with the demise of the character Riya. these two characters have left their imprints in my head and they stayed for very long. 🤪hell we all expected a love story there which became god knows what later🥺

Khair..sorry for the rant. Kabhi kabhi dil ke jazbaat bass bahar aa jate hain. Can't help myself.

i dont mind 😆i am always ready rant when i remember the heartbreaking way these two character ended for us💔

Back to the story..hell ! I didn’t even start with the story. *embarrassed*

😆ok

So there was something apart from the drunken encounter Riya wanted to talk about only to be royally ignored by Arjun. Arjun aur uska gussa ! I tell you !

you guessed it right😉

And Arjun was always affected by her. Wasn’t he ? He was just afraid as talli Riya said in the last chapter. He was afraid to give Roshni's place to Riya. He was afraid to let her in. He was afraid he might get distracted from his aim. An aim that kept him alive when his every reason to live was brutally taken away from him. But now that he has done justice to his wife and life is giving him another chance won't he grab it ?

that woman had always been affected by him too. to some point it was mutual yet it always remained closed behind his self-restraint. lets just see how he grabs that chance and how he convinces this stubborn lady😆

He is deffo falling for her. Bas iss bar ACP sahab apne dil ke muddo par bhi thoda gaur farmaaye toh kuch ho sake !

agar wo thoda kam khadoos ho jaye toh sayad kuch baat ban sakta hai🤣🤣

Riya has always been the character I felt myself connected to. She was hopelessly in love with the no nonsense supercop Arjun Suryakant Rawte only to get her heart broken. I don’t know whether I am defending her character or offending anyone. But there must be a solid reason behind this rude and indifferent Riya. The girl we knew six years back would be anything but rude. And now that we are getting glimpses of the past let's see what unfolds next.

there a limit to which tolerate certain things and then a point will come you just cant resist and you have to change and work for what you want and deserve. i am really glad you connected to her character to the point of loving her ❤️🤗

And finally things getting back to normal between Shree and Ri. He has been her bestie and it hurts to see his indifferences towards Riya. Hopefully they will sort things out soon.

they do have a very long history together. so it will hurt. and if they'd finally mend their relation they could fix each other too. sometimes friendship takes the top most stage at any relation and its a beautiful feeling

I'm happy things are not being rushed by the writerji. Take your time and come up with another dhamakedaar update.

i am more than happy to have a few patience readers like you

Waise toh lalach buri bala hain. Par yeh dil hain ki manta nehi. Toh jaldi se update kar de.

ab usmai deri nahi hogi😆

Btw this naacheez is called Tasnim. And it's her first post in this forum.

your first post on my topic🥳☺️ well Tasnim i welcome you to this forum and hoping you will have a nice time here🤗

The only reason behind this pakaofying comment is I just wanted you to know that you are amazing and this story of yours already tops my list of favourite.

this wasnt pakaofying trust mei love reading long comments, detailed reviews and criticism too. so bring it on. 😎

And once again, thank for your love to my story and my writing🤗

Originally posted by: swaasp

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nice update dear loved it

my question is same as arjun why sam is tagging sakshi with arjun?

he is lacking entertainment in his life😆😆

jokes apart, its a team thing. so no partiality over there😛

ohh no arjun not yet realized his love for riya

hmmm past is revealing slowly

guess what would make him realize soon?

the past will have a slow progress.

thanks for the pm dear

plz update next part soon

thank you for commenting.

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Ankita,

I am way too in love with this story. Waiting to know what really happened in the past!

Keep up the good work and please update sooner, because honesty I'm becoming addicted to your story!

Lots of love

thank you so much for loving the story☺️

i hope you will be addicted till the end😉

and thank you for replying. i would like to know your name please? 😳

Originally posted by: loveuAriya

Awesome update

Loved it

Thank you for PM

Sorry I got late to comment on it

Update soon

Thats fine. i am glad you took out time to read and comment.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Awesome chapter

Uff Arjun was really too much in past

He didn’t even let Riya to explain

Coz of him Riya left ETF💔

Look like now shree & Riya mend theirs friendship once again😊

Continue plz

Plz continue all ur pending stories also dear

yeah, he didnt let Riya to explain in the show too🤔

As for now i am focusing on this only story. about others i am not sure. i will finish this first

thank you for your reply😳

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

Amazing n mindblowing

Love it

Want to read more

Eagerly waiting for next

i just updated the next part

thank you for the comment.

Awesome amez super update

Loveit

Cont soon