TS::Safar.. (Completed) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Aap Pune ke ho isiliye Pune ke..ye kaisa logic hua😳😆..

I think Dono ke🤔😆

😆

Awesome story

Ending superb

Epilogue please

Continue soon

Awesome update

Loved it

It was such a sweet transition

I knew it Ye wahi banda hai!!

Ladki aayi thi mana karne lekin pyaar karke chali gayi

The climax was beautiful

Lovely end

sonu i m sry

but really yr i ran short of words

the way you presents your story is commendable

i really loved this story

this was a nice ending

n yes maybe it would annoy you but the truth is i m really curious about your other stories

so plz jldi se uspe ap km start kr do😃

Part 1:

Amazing update Di 👏

Loved it

Aapne kaha ki we can imagine anyone. Lekin sach bolu toh main kisiko imagine kar hi nahi paayi. Poori story 'ladka' aur 'ladki' samajhkar hi padi hai 😆

Ladki ki wajah se bechare ki wicket chali gayi

That boy is so annoying.

The girl's experience in the new place is very strange. Everyone is crazy around her

Lol ladki ne Pune ki kitni bezzati ki...aur ladke ne defend kiya. This is literally Mumbai vs Pune 🤣

I like how the girl is more broad minded while the guy is the reserved one. Nice change

I have no clue what's happening in the story but it's funny

Thanks a lot for the PM

Sorry for the late comment

Awesome updt di

Loved it

I knw it its the same guy girl came to meet🥳

Lol at last that girl agreed that Pune is better than Mumbai..well wo to hona hi tha writer ki marzi jo thi😉🤣

Lo ladki ne to i love u kaha hi nhi sirf ladke ne kaha wo bhi Japanese me❤️

Write such stories more di

Thnx for pm

Part 2:

Awesome update Di 👏

Loved it

Arey inki Mumbai - Pune war abhi tak khatam nahi hui?

Aww...the boy's love story is too cute. Japanese...Sanskrit...Marathi.

But these two will never stop fighting

Mujhe fir se samajh nahi aaya ki iss story mein ho kya raha hai, but maza aaya 😆

I'm surprised that they're spending so much time with each other but never asked for each other's name. But I guess it's because you're keeping them anonymous

Thanks a lot for the PM

Sorry for the late comment

Part 3:

Awesome update Di 👏

Loved it

I knew he was the same guy she was in Pune for

Ab jiske phone se uska hi phone number dial karegi, toh number kaise lagega? 😆

OMG...the boy's way of proposing was so lovely 😳

He was right...the girl couldn't say no to the boy when she sees him

Aww...his 'i love you' in Japanese. But I wish ladki ne bhi bol diya hota.

Beautiful end to a great story

Keep writing such wonderful stories

Awesome update

Love the ending

Beautifully written