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thank you dear. I was getting less responses so I just decided to move it and I already sent the link for you. Check it. And yeah I definitely try to update here too.Please continue the story I'm waiting for the update.
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Hello everyone, as many readers are requesting me to update the story here I just decided to update one more chapter. I work much on writing and Iam sure every writers need responses it will help us to write more.
And I already sent the link.
Okay.here is the another chapter. Before goes into the chapter..
Good or bad things all are comes from the home first. Here this story is about a girl facing problems in her own home, not every girls but there are some which unseen by us, not everyone have a courage to come out and stood against this, some comes out some will be a buried book. So it's wise to teach our children what is good and bad touch because it says do something before it's too late....
And this chapter has some mature contents ahead, so read it with your concern. I don't know how you guys will take it but it's the plot of this story, And give your response ❤️❤️.
So here we go for the chapter......
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Sky covered itself with the generous velvet blanket, inviting the world into the night, the night of love, night of joy and the night of sorrow. It brought newlyweds more closer cocooned in each others arms while a new hope to distant lovers. For many it was night of joy and for some it's the only room for unshed tears. The Twilight of the stars were no where to seen in the sky, that night became even more darker, a kind of darkness that give orange brightness rays in the sky like a blossom in the spring. A hope.
unusually Agarwal's mansion was filled with laughter and giggles without any commotion until the two men arrived home. Three ladies were engrossed in the kitchen preparing for dinner. Naina and Preeti were tasked to rolling the roti dough, in every shapes except a round. At first naina's dough was pasted to the board in second attempt it was teared while taking it off from the board and thirdly it wad pasted to the role pin. exhausted Naina stomped her foot " is this a rocket science or what?".
"beta first sprinkle some flour on the board, it's a simple technique not a rocket science" Rama replied slightly smacking her head.
" Ohhhh.... the book worm doesn't know to make roti". Preeti said poking her shoulder.
" Awww....first see your roti, oh sorry sorry this is not roti, looks like a ladle with holes".Naina showed her tongue.
"Ahhhh......." and the clinging sound of the spoons mingled in the air, which became sword for their silly fights. At the end of it they shared a tight hug and giggled at their childishness. Naina laughed heartily, it's a sound of music her mother felt like hearing after thousands of years. Even it felt alien for Naina too. Her lips crooked into the smile her heart lightness without any worries until the man's voice boomed in the house.
"Naina....." Rakesh called holding her stumbling mamaji on his hand. Naina quickly helped him placing his bag on the desk.
"Help me first...." Rakesh shouted stumbling along with poorwesh.
"ah.....ah..papa".
" Ruko Naina, go clean the kitchen I'll help him". Rama literally jumped to rescue her daughter.
With a slight nod Naina returned to the kitchen, cleaning the utensils. Dinner was served. As soon as Rama & rakesh retired to their room, poorwesh diverted his gaze from his plate to the two girls cleaning the kitchen slab.
"Naina...". She jerked hearing his voice. Preeti held her trembling hand and assured her not to look at him. His voice boomed again. She looked at him heart thudding.
" Can't you hear.....how long I was shouting, get some water....".
Naina extended the glass to him keeping the decent gap, he hardly pulled her to him in such a force that a glass full of water spilled on his face, Preeti couldn't stop her chuckles. Rage filled in his eyes, he slapped hardly across her face, his finger imprinting on her soft cheeks. Naina stood shocked holding her reddened cheeks.
"get some water to my room ...." Saying he stormed out.
Naina was planning for every possible ways to quickly coming out of his room after offering water, when Preeti snatched the glass from her hand with devilish grin. Naina watched her adding two spoon full of salt into the water and mixing it.
"Preeti what are you doing?".
"Ahhh Naina don't shout watch me,how can he slap you? he need this..". She quickly placed the glass inside his room before he could come out of the bathroom, and without any trance they ran into their room locking the door behind. Soon Preeti hugged Naina caressing her cheeks she asked "behen....is it hurting?".
"Hmmm....leave it Preeti it will happen usually".
On the other hand poorwesh gulped the water in one go and shouted coughing inside his room. "Mission accomplished" both sister did a victorious dance hugging eachother. Little only they know that they erupted a volcano, anytime it will erupt a flame turning them into the ashes.
All ahemedabad was indulged in a deep slumber. In Maheshwari mansion lights were dimmed, darkness engulfing the room. Dinner plate was untouched and some important files were waiting for him to recheck it. But the man lying on the bed was lost in somewhere thinking about the turning of events in his life. He is never a mumma's pet, rarely remember his childhood with his father.Nanu was his only world who cocooned him lovingly in his arms all these 22 years. He just turn 25 years last month and and now they fixed his marriage with Naina. 'Naina' the name did something to his heart. when he saw her in the market something was changed in him, the way he stared at her, the sudden anger he felt when he saw her revealing white bra strap. Her flattering eye lashes, adorning smile and the silver chain with 's' pendant, the pendant clung near her chest. " Oh god....not again, not go there again Sameer", he sighed what more his fate stored for him.
He sat quickly on the bed suddenly remembering something. "Wait,why she wore that specific s pendant is this is 's' mean for Sameer or anyone else? ".
That mere thought of anyone else with Naina angered him. he felt a strange knot in his stomach. What is happening to him? the answer was yet unknown for him safely treasured by only Naina. his Naina. "She signed the papers, then why she want to wore that pendant or is she acted Infront of her sister?".he thought.Confusing him more he saw the neatly folded clothes on his bed when he returned from office. When he asked ramadari he said " I didn't went to your room Bhai, might be Naina babhi did it". He felt dizziness surrounding his head. "What is the need to mess up my already messed life" he cursed under his breath. He felt like someone hit him on his head with a hammer. His heart thudded heavily. He heaved a sharp breath. Every time he started to think about her his mind bombard him with questions by questions. He stood up quickly throwing punches on his boxing bag getting out his frustration " yaar Naina why did you came in my life? making it hell for me, I hate you ,I hate you Naina. he muttered between his punches.
(* mature content ahead*)
on the other side in Agarwal's house Naina came out of her room to get the water jug. Two strong arms held her shoulders tightly making her gasp. she stood in shock looking at her mamaji. He pinned her to the wall holding her chin up with his one hand cluching her cheeks tightly.
"How dare you ahhh? how can you put salt in my water? thumare himmat kaise hai?. she stood silently not saying the truth after all she want to save her sister from this devil.
" Don't you know me, what can I do to you? or did you forgot what I did?". he asked with a devilish grin. She closed her eyes breathing heavily. All her past flashed Infront of her eyes within a blink of moment.
*falshback. 7years old Naina*
Poorwesh started to hit her with a stick removing her frock, when she sneakily went out to play with a boy one of her neighbour. The thick stick fell across on her soft and warm skin. Naina can still freshly hear a fearful voice of 7 years old Naina pleading in pain "I will not play with him again mamaji, please stop it's hurting..''. "aahhhh....Maa please tell him to stop it's hurting Maa". Rama's words too went deaf on his ears. When Rama asked to stop him tightly clutching her daughter's petite body on her arms. He simply replied "we want to raise Naina well mannered...not like this rama".
Naina can still remember the red bruises on her back later turned into purple, "how she winced in pain turning and flopping on the bed while hugging her mother". She tightly closed her eyes blocking all past in her brain. She didn't want to remember that deadly days. She wished to travel into the time and erase all over her past when the devil came out of his hell.
(flashback end.)
"So you want to punished now, for what you did?" he said rage filled in his eyes.
He went near her closing their gap, his drunken smell strongly hit her nose. His hand inched above her waist. Naina clearly knows what is coming up to her next. Whatever happen she will not let him touch her this time, gritting her teeth she reached her hand to pick the vase nearby. She hardly hit on his hand before she could touch her, he winced and shouted moving out of his way, before he could harm her more she quickly ran inside her room closing the door behind.
Tears rolled down on her cheeks, she suppressed her cries leaning on the door. Her heart screamed. He messed her life. When everyone playing with their friends in childhood, she played with a doll inside her room, that only her mother can do to save her from that evil. She never knew what is childhood. Glad that she studied, books, books are her only solace but today it too failed to give her needed solace. She craved to hear his voice, the voice which can melt her into the puddle, her medicine for the wound on her heart. He is calmness to her raging wind. On the other hand Sameer wants to clear his all questions, he knew Naina can only answer him. he wants her answers and she wants him. As he heard her phone shrilled on the bed side table.
She ran to pickup it like she started to breathe again.
"Hello ...." his word smoothened her. Her soft sobs were audible for him. 'why is she crying now?' he felt like the ground beneath him dropped.
"Naina are you okay?......why are you crying?".
She tightly clutched the receiver wiping away her falling tears with back of her hand.
'ah...ah Sameer Iam okay....'.
He could easily sense her. "Naina is there anything wrong?" he asked . his heart thudded praying for nothing bad. For once she thought to tell him everything.
"......Sameer ..that i'm ......(she inhaled sharply). He listened patiently.
" Sameer....within two days our wedding. I want to leave from my mom. She lied.
Sameer somewhere felt this was not the actual problem, yet he want to soothen her worries.
"Hmmm but girls want to move from their house after wedding, Naina you can see your mom when you wish....."
"Hmmm".she hummed.
"Naina, don't worry everything will be fine".
Naina smiled, she had no words. Men in her family were treating a girl like a doll and here he was respecting her and soothing her worries.
"Thank you Sameer.....ah, why did you called ? did you want to say anything? can I call Maa?".
'oh god he forgot the reason for the call'....he facepalmed himself. " Ah..no..no..Naina I want talk with you".
"With me? Tell me sameer". she blushed.
He thought for a while "good night naina.." he said disconnecting the call.
He want to ask her about his questions but her cry worried him even more. For him at that time he just want to soothen her, rest will wait. He not even felt uncomfortable with their conversation. A smile crept on his lips and he fell into the peaceful slumber forgetting about his all confusions. Naina blushed tightly clutching the phone ''good night Sameer" she whispered only audible to her. Her worries and pain were swept away from his words. She too fell into a deep slumber that night, heart lighten without heaviness. She remembered 'The story of sleeping beauty" how the prince waken up the princess with a soft kiss from her deep slumber after years. And here her prince put an end for her all sleepless nights with his soft words. Just more two days and she will be there by his side with her love. They are like a undeniable magnetic pull, how far they try to go away from eachother it pull even more closer. If he is a wide ocean, she is the river thriving to dwell on it, to feel him.
Thank you for reading.
Very nice story. Different concept. Do update soon
Nice update
Waiting for the marriage now
Hope u will give update here..
If not, kindly send me the link of ur blog
Nice story, different concept.
Update soon
Really nice update. How long naina has to suffer. Why she is not giving back to poovesh. Thanks to sameer calld her and both forgot their sorrow. Sameer didn't get answer for his queries still he is happy. Naina was sad still she forgot everything after listening to his voice. The sisters bond was really nice. The relationships between mom and daughter and mom trying to save naina from the evil creatures are really heart warming.
A very nice update. Great job dear. 🤗H
Beautiful Story, nice concept. Please don't discontinue this story, since the new IF format all stories have lost readers due to many of them leaving the forum. Please don't get demotivated 😭