Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 28

Read this story in one go...

It's amazing.. seriously loved it...

Continue soooooon.....

awesome story dear

I'm loving it

Thank you so much for continuing it

plz update next part soon

Hi,

Loved this Riya.

Waiting for the next update. Can you please pm me?

Oh god i just finished 1st chapter and want to say only one thing......

.

Good one...successfully u made me to stick to this story till end

Hi, How are you? Hope all fine. I'm a fan of your stories and creations.You know when I see topic name changed, I just can't believe that you came back.I always wished you would come back one day.And now that you came back, I'm so happy.Thank you so much for coming back and updating the story.It's one of my favorite story in this forum.I read few of your stories just when I was new & thought to be silent member & never left a trace.But being active, I thought to comment by scrap but couldn't cope up with the time.I'm only commenting in this story now but will surely do for the others as well later.

This is a AMAZING story.I just liked the Strong Riya, her attitude, her sarcasm everything.But sometimes she is too harsh with her attitude like regarding promotion of Arjun or being a cared Arjun for her.Liked how you described their emotions, thinking, desperation & pain by their POV.Both were trying to find the older one but that is just lost! Here their role changed fully 180 angle.When one was longing for a little attention,a little care, the other denied.It was heart wrenching to see when the realization hit Riya that he can never move on but now he....

Yeah, we could never know how Arjun would be if he had completed his revenge.But you give a glimpse of that.May be he would have been like this.

You beautifully penned down Shree's anger along with his care.Liked the conversation of Shree-Riya in temple.Shree's point was so true.I like the story more for it's philosophical thinking.

Unknown to Arjun, Riya helped him in his life's important mission.That shows though Riya acts as if she changed, but deep inside Really she? I think she is just wearing a mask.Neither she could fake indifference seeing Arjun-Sakshi together nor take the indifference of Shree.

I think Tasha is Anshu's girlfriend type something.His wife is dead and Anjali his daughter.As Riya said why she always gets close to people with bad past-of course dead wives.

What did the team do with Riya that made her like this? It's still a mystery.

Why she said that they labeled her as Mentally Unstable? Did she literally mean that?

Why Riya was so in rage X-ora ll outbreak? Was it connected with her resignation?

So, Riya is going to be Arjun's neighbour.Waiting for their more interaction there.

Waiting for the precap which you gave in previous chapter.

Please try to update soon.I really wish you complete the story this time.

And one thing I want to tell you now that all the creations you made on Ariya are just mind blowing.I liked each of them a lot.The texture you use on the edits made them just extra-ordinary.The combination of color, the selection of scene all are amazing.Once I thought to use one but couldn't choose cause all are beautiful.And I like your Avatar a lot.You just made a story and reflect the emotions of Ariya through it.

At last, I would say Please don't disappear this time.You're an amazing writer and one of my favorite.I like your stories so much.The way you describe, I feel like I'm watching the scene.

PS : I'm really Sorry that I stalked you😞 But if I had not, I don't think I would have read many of your beautiful stories like this one.

Beautiful update

Eagerly waiting for next

Continue soon

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I... I am speechless myselfYou have expressed it beautifully

The elephant between them , the awkwardness and specially the realization that he couldn't move on...

Riya is right on her part , he never showed that he care... while He never noticed that she cared

Now the roles are reversed

The change is drastic but maybe she needed it ... to become the independent strong woman she is now... but she paid a price...n she lost the innocence , smile and feelings

Loved it... Update soon and pm plz

I am really glad to have your comment and that you read it in one go.

sometimes its better to get off the line and write something thats different than usual. i hope i made that difference visible.

thank you for your reply.

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb updates

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

thank you. and i am sorry for the late reply.

Originally posted by: Kasturi.gupta

Want PM...Story is two exiting a mystry...

pls be quick...

i will send you PMs of next updates onwards.

thank you.

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Wonderful update yaarLoving it

And precap toh masha alha

Very excited for it

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

Thank you i am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

nice

Thank you

Originally posted by: symrandsouza

Read this story in one go...

It's amazing.. seriously loved it...

Continue soooooon.....

hey there new reader

i am really glad you liked all the chapters.

Thank you for your reply

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

finally....

loved it

superb

thnx for pm

update soon

yes finally

thank you for reply.

Originally posted by: Shanafr

Awesome super update

Loveit

Thanks for pm

Cont soon

Thanks for reading and liking.

Originally posted by: loveuAriya

Welcome back dear!

I loved your story and I was waiting to read further

Thank you so much for coming back and continuing it

Plz give updates frequently and complete it

Now about your update I just loved it though I read the entire story from start again

It was amazing

Now Arjun and Riya are neighbours. I hope to see some more scenes between them

Plz PM me

Yes I will complete it this time.

I really am sorry to make you guys wait and making you read all those chapter again.

there still time for some scene to happen with the neighbours

thanks for the reply

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Plz pm me

Thank you for reading and liking.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Well come back dear

It’s been really longtime we haven’t seen u

Awesome chapter

Plz continue

yes its been a long time and i have already planned to finish this one this time.

thank you for reading and replying.

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

Beautiful update

Eagerly waiting for next

Continue soon

i will update soon. thank you for replying

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update

Love it

Thank you.

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Oh god i just finished 1st chapter and want to say only one thing......

.

Good one...successfully u made me to stick to this story till end

thank you kavz

hows you?

its been long and i really miss our old days

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Hi,

Loved this Riya.

Waiting for the next update. Can you please pm me?

Thanks for liking Riya.

yes i will PM the next update to you.

Originally posted by: swaasp

awesome story dear

I'm loving it

Thank you so much for continuing it

plz update next part soon

I am even more glad that you are still interested.

Thank you for reading and replying

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Hi, How are you? Hope all fine. I'm a fan of your stories and creations.You know when I see topic name changed, I just can't believe that you came back.I always wished you would come back one day.And now that you came back, I'm so happy.Thank you so much for coming back and updating the story.It's one of my favorite story in this forum.I read few of your stories just when I was new & thought to be silent member & never left a trace.But being active, I thought to comment by scrap but couldn't cope up with the time.I'm only commenting in this story now but will surely do for the others as well later.

Yes,I think I am fine. I am just really glad that you replied. occasionally i would visit the forum but never really had that confidence to write again. i cannot say i will continue the other ones but this one i am sure. its very close to my heart and my personal favorite. so i just hope you like the other ones.

This is a AMAZING story.I just liked the Strong Riya, her attitude, her sarcasm everything.But sometimes she is too harsh with her attitude like regarding promotion of Arjun or being a cared Arjun for her.Liked how you described their emotions, thinking, desperation & pain by their POV.Both were trying to find the older one but that is just lost! Here their role changed fully 180 angle.When one was longing for a little attention,a little care, the other denied.It was heart wrenching to see when the realization hit Riya that he can never move on but now he....

i always wanted to write a character thats not typical. in this story riya is strong but she is flawed too. she's rude and she makes mistake too and i think thats what makes a character more lively and more relatable.

there is still tension between the two character even though they deny it and Arjun is way closer to accept what he wants now. you just have to wait and see Riya copes with this change in Arjun.

Yeah, we could never know how Arjun would be if he had completed his revenge.But you give a glimpse of that.May be he would have been like this.

i could never think anything but emptiness after his revenge. its obvious a character is nothing without any purpose so Arjun needs to cope up with the life after his revenge. i will add his POV too.

You beautifully penned down Shree's anger along with his care.Liked the conversation of Shree-Riya in temple.Shree's point was so true.I like the story more for it's philosophical thinking.

its true he's angry and no matter what sometimes you cant just forgive some mistakes or say in case here broken promises. i am glad to have this philosophical point of view being accepted in this story.

Unknown to Arjun, Riya helped him in his life's important mission.That shows though Riya acts as if she changed, but deep inside Really she? I think she is just wearing a mask.Neither she could fake indifference seeing Arjun-Sakshi together nor take the indifference of Shree.

she's a human and she will have all those emotions that define us. i just want to bring shades to her character and see how she moves forward. she might be wearing a mask and might not be but she's changed.

I think Tasha is Anshu's girlfriend type something.His wife is dead and Anjali his daughter.As Riya said why she always gets close to people with bad past-of course dead wives.

you're close with the guessing part. you will know soon.

What did the team do with Riya that made her like this? It's still a mystery.

there is still time for that to unravel.

Why she said that they labeled her as Mentally Unstable? Did she literally mean that?

well you will know. there is more history to Riyas character.

Why Riya was so in rage X-ora ll outbreak? Was it connected with her resignation?

So, Riya is going to be Arjun's neighbour.Waiting for their more interaction there.

that will happen for sure😆

Waiting for the precap which you gave in previous chapter.

i havent forgot the precap. and it coming soon.

Please try to update soon.I really wish you complete the story this time.

i am determined to complete this story now

And one thing I want to tell you now that all the creations you made on Ariya are just mind blowing.I liked each of them a lot.The texture you use on the edits made them just extra-ordinary.The combination of color, the selection of scene all are amazing.Once I thought to use one but couldn't choose cause all are beautiful.And I like your Avatar a lot.You just made a story and reflect the emotions of Ariya through it.

this reply totally made my day and gave me enough motivation to write more. And about my creations, i am pleasantly glad you liked them. i cannot control my creativity when i see Ariya so thats my way of still shipping them ❤️😛 i have made some more creations and i will share them too.

At last, I would say Please don't disappear this time.You're an amazing writer and one of my favorite.I like your stories so much.The way you describe, I feel like I'm watching the scene.

i wont disappear. yes i wont😃

PS : I'm really Sorry that I stalked you😞 But if I had not, I don't think I would have read many of your beautiful stories like this one.

i dont mind that😆 initially i was a stalker too🤣🤣

once again thank you so much for such a beautiful review and a long reply. i am glad you took your precious time read the entire story again and reply.

🤗i am sorry on my part for being late and making you reading all the chapters again. i am hoping this wont repeat.