Sweet Nothings - #12 - Pink & Blue - MishBir - Page 23 - Page 10

I'm really really amazed at how you can keep making these one shots better and better

Like seriously, it just made my heart skip a beat and yay it was really nice to see Abir's perspective in this

Every time you capture their characterisations so well

Thank you for writing these

Really really appreciate and love them

Originally posted by: Krpkab_superfan

What an amazing OS. This is such a nice scene that I really hope the CVs visit this forum and get this idea. I am one of those who want Mishtis confusion zone where she feels the attraction and questions it to extend for a while and this sat so well with that theme. Thanks for writing this 👏🤗

Thank you!! :) :) I am one of those too! I am loving this stage in the show, and in no hurry to rush her realization and confession :)

Thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: vssdp

Wow wow wow, totally loved it

CVs ko seriously Aapse ideas lene chahiye for mishbir

Itne realistic situation and Itna intense romance

I am in love with it totally

And the song you used 😍😍

I want more and more mishbir

awww thanks! I think the CVs do come visit IF, so lets see :) I loved the #loveanthem #sathiyaMere :) Had to use it!

I am sure in the coming weeks MishBir are going to give me more and more inspiration to write.

Thanks for leaving a comment. glad you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411

Loved it.. can totally picture Mishbir...

thanks sam! :) glad you enjoyed

Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Mridhu, this one is so good! I totally loved it. My heart skipped a beat when I read that Abir removes his shirt. You tricked my mind but I'm glad that it did not go the way I thought it would. A wonderful step to Mish's realisation! Can't wait! Thanks for writing such a beautiful piece!

socio 🤗🤗 Thank you!! huuuuuuuuunnh, you thought Abir was going to do something other than drape his shirt over her? un-sanskaari chokri!!! 😛😛😆

ha ha

thank you! glad you enjoyed it :)

Originally posted by: meen123

Mridhu wow it was sensual, intense yet very couply thing. I can totally see Abir doing this and Mishti trying to make sense of her feelings

Thank you meenu ben 🤗

Originally posted by: -Viji-

Beautiful OS es Mrindu❤️Read everything in One go! I can just imagine everything by just reading itself, its that good! And hoping to see all these in real in the show soon!🥰 Especially the starry night and the painting together!

Hiii Viji! Welcome to my adda! :d

thank you so much! :) :)

Originally posted by: Namzie1226

Mridhu, I think you want to kill me....

Fantastic

i told you this in the AT na, nami - phir bolungi - jo khud mar mit chuke hai woh kya kisiko maarega? 😆

ek zipper scene ka yeh haal hai, god knows kya hoga in the future when they step up the romance :d

Originally posted by: srilotus

Amazing os. Aisa Laga jaise main story nahi MishBir Ko hi dekh rahi Hun.

Thank you!! :) So glad you could picturise them when you read it. :)

Originally posted by: coolove

I'm really really amazed at how you can keep making these one shots better and better

Like seriously, it just made my heart skip a beat and yay it was really nice to see Abir's perspective in this

Every time you capture their characterisations so well

Thank you for writing these

Really really appreciate and love them

awww, thanks!! It is just the MishBir magic i guess! :) :) Abir is tough to write TBH! :) Mishti's attraction and confusion is muuuuch easier :d

thank you for reading and leaving your comments here :) glad you enjoyed

Sorry couldn't reply yesterday.The story was very nice.Could literally imagine the scene in front of my eyes.Amazing Mridu(can I call you di?).

I love this song! And this scenario, finally they are moving from friendzone to something more! Thank you for keeping us in hope that they will be one soon! ❤️😉

I loved this new OS...

Very very well written Mridhu. It's like i just saw a actual Mishbir scene.👏

Read all those os

They are lovely dear...i could visualise our misbir doing those stuffs.

Do continue writing.

Hello!!! Thank you for the beautifully penned stories ⭐️... awaiting to read more 😊

Such beautiful and well written stories...bookmarking for future reference 🙈

Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Sorry couldn't reply yesterday.The story was very nice.Could literally imagine the scene in front of my eyes.Amazing Mridu(can I call you di?).

Thank you asmi!!! You can call me anything - mridhu, mridz, di kuch bhi chalega. Your wish. :)

How was your exam?