Ariya FF: Niyati ka Khel [Thread 2] - Page 62

Originally posted by: nitris23

Awesome update

Read part30 n 31

Love it

Finally sik is death...

Plz continue soon

Thnx for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😃

I'm glad you liked it

Yup, Sikander is finally dead

Originally posted by: pink1

Nice update finally Sik dead update soon

Thanks a lot dear

Yup, finally he is dead

Originally posted by: Sanavi

How did I miss this one. Read all updates in one go.

You have beautifully captured emotions and the way you have woven the flashbacks and their feelings is awesome.

I have become a fan of this one. Your way of expressing is great specifically those cliffhangers.

Do continue soon. Please add me to your PM list

Thanks a lot for the compliments dear. I'm glad this story could catch your interest. 🤗

It truly means a lot to me that you like this story. Consider yourself added to the list!

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Thanks a lot for the compliments dear. I'm glad this story could catch your interest. 🤗

It truly means a lot to me that you like this story. Consider yourself added to the list!

Awaiting the update. After reading it in one go, I'm kind of missing these characters now.

Can we have a whole chapter for each couple to sort out their difference. It will be nice to learn about each character in depth. It's just a suggestion

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Ahana mari nahi thi. Wo sab ek drama tha team ko uski galti realize karwane ka that if 6 of them couldn't save Ahana then how can they expect Arjun to save Riya alone. Aur iss naatak mein uska saath Riya, Aisha aur Purab ne diya tha. I hope confusion ab dur ho gaya ho 😃

Beshak dur ho gayi.. 😜Thnx.. 💕

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Nice story.All the Ariya moments were beautiful specially liked the dinner date and when first time Arjun tells Riya about his past.You described Arjun's emotion beautifully whenever he was devastated, in pain, his loneliness or rage.

Liked how first Riya then Ayesha make Sameer understand his fault & his apologize.

How can one make same mistake twice.Sameer shouldn't accuse Arjun when Riya was hospitalized for second time.But Ryan's outburst was natural.Other team members also shouldn't accuse as they knew what Arjun had been through before.Good that he'll not forgive them so soon.

Purab-Ryan-Arjun relation & their moments was lightful.

Sakshi's past was painful.Glad that at least she found her love now.

Why that Kirti is even on ETF? She should be out of ETF not just for undercover mission but for lifetime.

Sometimes it feel like Arjun is Rockstar when he said that he'll not hurt her for the third time and sometimes not.When will this Rockstar mystery unfold

Felt bad for Sikander.You depicted Sikander's part very beautifully when he knew Ahana was in danger.But as you sow, so you reap.Can't escape doing bad things.

Once, in your reply you said that Ryan & Ahana will not end up together.But why? People make mistakes and they should given second chance.I admit he was too rude but his sister's life was in danger & he was worried.Arjun also did the same.If Arjun can be given chance why not Ryan.Moreover, they love each other.But yeah Ryan should repent badly.Sorry if I sound offensively.

Now, few questions my mind couldn't answer through the story😳

1. Whose funeral ETF did? The girl Riya mentioned as her look-alike or another.
2. Why Ryan didn't do Riya's funeral? I know you answered.But he hadn't any proof being her alive apart from the emotional one.He blasted Arjun & Ahana now but can't show up that time.
3. Why Ryan didn't look for Riya before finding her on hospital? Although they lived in the same apartment before & now.She was kidnapped not in any undercover mission and no one knew.
4. You didn't reveal the reason why Ahana was annoyed with Purab, did you?
5. How none of team knew Riya's brother (except Arjun& Shree) after her death and informed her family

Sorry for all the questions but these were running in my head & I couldn't but ask you😳Disadvantage of reading many parts together.

P.S. Can you check if the links given on first thread working on current window? Every time I click, it not works and I had to open the links on another window.

Oh my...you read the entire story in one go? Wow!

Thank you soo much dear 🤗❤️ It was my first time writing a story so I'm glad you liked it. Your words really mean a lot. You don't have to apologize for asking questions. I'll be happy to clear any doubts.

Kirti can't disappear lol. She's coming back in the next chapter. Along with that, the Rockstar mystery will be solved in the next chapter as well.

The characters of Ahana and Ryaan were created to be a couple. But as the story progressed, things happened and it felt wrong if they were to eventually end up together. But I'll be leaving that decision on the readers. If people think that Ryaan deserves a second chance, there will be an opportunity for him to right his wrong-doings. Admittedly, Riya's character is more forgiving and that's why Arjun got his second chance.

1. The funeral was held for the Latika, the girl who looked like Riya.

2. Ryaan was in denial, in a sense. He couldn't believe that his only family was also dead. Therefore, he gave the emotional reason to the team as he couldn't reveal what he was feeling during that time.

3. He tried to look for her. But as a DCP, he had his duties to fulfill and was never given the time to properly search for his sister who was dead for the world.

4. Not completely. But during her outburst, she mentioned that she was angry at him for leaving her and Arjun alone when they needed him the most. She was annoyed that her best friend walked away from her even when she pleaded him to not leave.

5. Ryaan's relationship with Riya was kept a secret due to security purposes. Shree knew it because he's Riya's best friend and Arjun knew it...how? You'll know soon. Riya's parents had died years ago so everyone assumed that she had no family.

The links are probably not working because I've used the NOCOPY command. With the new IF, if this command is used in a post that has links, the links won't be working. I'll try to fix them.

Once again, thank you very much 🤗

Originally posted by: Farzeen20

Plzz update this story.

This is one of the best stories.

Waiting very badly for this updates😊

Thank you so much dear 😃

I'll update this very soon

Originally posted by: bloomie

Update soon

Very soon I swear

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Update soon dear

Very soon Di

Originally posted by: bodalareshma03

Hey when are you going to update

I'm in the process of writing the next chapter. Will update very soon