Awesome OS Hash!
Thank you so much for this one.๐ค
The first thing for which I am happy is that it had a happy ending because Saathi Re literally left me in tears and after reading this one, I had a smile on my face.๐
So Naina was pregnant but hadn't told Sameer about it and was angry because he hadn't picked up her call ๐. She was on literally on fire and I liked it very much.
Our Bechara Sameer came back home only to meet his angry wife. Biwi ko gussa dilaya hai to anjaam bhi bhugatna hi tha.๐
I loved that you gave such beautiful Samaina scenes in your Octo friendly way. You really take care of all your readers. Thank you so much for that.๐ค
The scene in the hospital was Dil le lo. Naina got her little Sameer and Sameer got his little Naina. And the names of their children were so beautiful - Zeo anf Saina .
And the last part where Saina asked Sameer to choose between Naina, Zeo and Saina was amazing. Sameer chose Naina and the reason of him choosing Naina was beautiful.โค๏ธ
And Mr. Maheshwari is afraid of his wife, hmmm achcha hai achcha hai ๐. It was pyaar wala darr and therefore I liked it very much.
And what to say about the song. Hash, I applaud you for your amazing writing and your choice of songs. The songs chosen by you are always apt for the stories of your One Shots. You really are a wonderful writer.๐
"Ae kaash ke hum
Hosh mein ab aane na paayein
Ae kaash ke hum
Hosh mein ab aane na paayein
Bas nagmein tere pyaar ke
Gaate hi jaayein"
Such a beautiful song it is. And I just lovvvvvveeee this song โค๏ธ. And just like Saathi Re, now even this song reminds me of your OS every time I hear it.
Please do write more One Shots like these in future.
Keep smiling,
Prachi ๐
Edited by TheGirlWhoLived - 6 years ago