Perfect. That's the word that comes to my mind. And, I am not saying this because it's the work of my dearest people in the forum. It indeed is Perfect and I have my reasons in the point of view of a reader and a writer herself.
Collaboration usually means different writing style and one idea. There are major chances of losing the connection between the readers and the story because sometimes, changing writing styles puts off the mood, IMO. But, it didn't happen at all, instead I found my eyes watering when Sameer mentions about the significance of the wedding date or found myself giggling like a little girl who just won a toffee after hours of whining when it was narrated to us that Sameer already knew about Naina's 'hidden' box with all the past items or gifts he gave to her. Or closing my screen for a second to stop myself from becoming a complete laal like tamatar when our beloved Samaina touched and felt each other, like it was just the first time.
It was also perfect for me because it had all the right flavours in the right proportion; filled with passion, cuteness, nostalgia, hardship and last but not the least, loads and loads of serene and unfiltered love.
Though I dislike dolls and teddy bear, the mention of them becoming that to each other was very cute. ❤️ Also, when Naina kisses Sameer's cheeks publicly; this woman is a temptress!
Really liked this line and I completely agree- He had learned to view their moments together with love and only love; devoid of sadness. Remembering Nanu as he deserved to be remembered: with warmth and respect.
I might just go on an on so I am putting a full stop right now. Thanks a ton Ray for creating this post, Humera for suggesting such an amazing idea and all you beautiful writers; Hash, Su, Chaaru, Sims and Anshika for this wonderful addition to the silver jubilee celebration!
Before signing off, I love the title!
Loads of hugs 🤗
Edited by Mayashika - 6 years ago