Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected Thread #3 (Part 35-Pg 115_No PMs) - Page 51

Hi sur

Nice update n after a long time.

I can understand u must busy per plz thora jaldi jaldi update diya Karona, laalchi readers k baare me soch ker.

Pata nai aesa Kyu lag raha he, koe aur siyappa hoga next update me. Naina nai batayegi ya Sameer jaan jayega na phir Mr A tapak jayega.

I know Naina side of story must b heart wrenching n Naina k taraf soft corner jyada he mera, per Sameer ne bahot suffer ker liya, even he needs diyaz of hope of ray in his life.

Hero-heroin to Thora soft karo ek dusre ki taraf.

Aur Mr A bahut confusing lag raha. Though I m dnt like luv triangle, but samaina k lie itni based hun na ki Mr A ka dil tut jayega to bhi chalega

Take care

Sakina

Originally posted by: AaishaM

Didi, mai finally aa gayi 😳

🤗 Aajaa aayi bahaar! ❤️ Tu is gaane ko samajh legi! 😉

First things first, I haven't read Part 31 yet, to uske liye reserved 😆Par maine dekh liya hai ki aapne ye part mujhe dedicate kiya hai ☺️Thank you so much didu 🤗 Vaise maine kuch khaas help nahi ki thi I know lekin fir bhi shukriya. Aur doctor friend ko bhi bat diya jaaega 😉

Arey bahot help ki yaar! I'm really grateful to you! Padh ke batana kaisa laga...khair tujhe suspense to pata hai hi!

Aur jaise ki mai hamesha late lateef hi rehti hun😆Jo ek aur pehle part aapne hum sab Paradise lovers ko dedicate kiya tha uske liye bhi vadda vala thank you. Aapki itni pyaaari story me apna naam baar baar dekh ke dil garden garden ho jata hai 🤗

Awww...dosti mein no sorry no thank you...aur late lateef (yahan bhi hum same hi hain😆)

Didi, can I tell you one thing. From the time you wrote your first story, you have come a long way. Itni ghajab ke changes dikhte hain na. Itna flawless likhte ho aap, bas mai kya bataun

Hayeee..thanks a lot dear...I've tried to improve my writing and shayad practice ke sath hum better hote jaate hain...flawless to nahi yaar...hum kabhi perfect nahi ho sakte, par koshish kar sakte hain ki pehle se behtar hon aur main wo kar rahi hoon...I'm happy that tum sab logon ko itna pasand aata hai jo main likhti hoon aur isse badi baat koi ho nahi sakti mere liye! ❤️

I am in love with this story and more specifically in love with the way you have depicted Samaina's journey. From being at loggerheads with each other to each others' best companions, that was hell of a journey. That new years celebration is my most favorite part. It was so surreal to read.

Thank you...thank you so much dear...when I first started writing this story, I never expected such a wonderful response from my readers...bas jo dil mein aaya likhti rahi...and sabko jab itna pasand aayi Samaina ki journey to mujhe bahot khushi mili!

Aur romantic scenes to kya likhe hain aapne. Matlab mai to padhte padhte kho hi jaati thi. Despite the fact that this story focused around the physical intimacy that Samaina shared, never once it got vulgar. And you deserve an applause for that. Sacchi bata ri hun bohat baar sharmayi hun vo sab padh padh ke😆

Thank you dear...mujhe ab bhi lagta hai maine kahin over to nahi kar diya...vaise to main bhi likhte likhte sharmane lag jaati hun...but am so glad you liked the romance of Samaina in this story...the reason physical intimacy was introduced in this story was because I wanted to introduce the concept of a love child here...

Par didi, I am angry with you for se😊parating Samaina this brutally. Ab Shefali ki baat ko itna seriously lene ki bajay Naina thoda to apna dimaag bhi chala skti thi na. Khair I won't blame Naina completely, Sameer bhi to kabhi apne man ki baat nahi smjh paaya na hi express kar paya. Dono ki galti hai par kya karun Sameer ka dukh to merese bilkul nahi dekha jata. You know na 😆

Hehe...I know...sorry dear! Yeh story mein thoda separation tha...but wo zara emotional ho gaya aur zara lamba ho gaya...haan galti dono ki thi...Naina bahot insecure rahi aur Sameer apni feelings se bekhabar aur pyaar se darne wala...khair ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya...ab to sab theek karna baaki hai...Sameer ka dukh to mujhse bhi nahi dekha jaata...maine kaise likha hai mujhe pata hai! 🤔

By God mujhe pakka pakka shaq hai Naina is not married. Baki, mere assumptions hamesha galat nikalte hain to mai jyada dimaag nahi lagaungi. Arvind seems to be a very nice man. I don't want you to break his heart. 😆

Hehe...main spoiler nahi de rahi yahan! Arvind abhi tak to acha hi lag raha hai...agar wo sach mein acha hai to I'll find out a way ki uska dil na toote!

Vaise Naina bohat hot headed ho gayi hai. Sameer ki baat sunti hi nahi. Bas jhaadne ke liye taiyar. But I am happy yaha pe dono ek dusre ko mast sunate hain😆

Haan yahan jab maine Naina ka gussa likha to baad mein laga ki yeh to show ki Naina devi type ho gayi hai jabki is story ki Naina ekdum balanced hai! But yes, yahan Sameer bhi chup nahi rehta...as you said dono ek dusre ko sunate hain! 😆

I really really hope that Sameer gets to know Diya's truth very soon. I can't wait to see his reaction. I can't wait to see him taking care of Diya. he still does but mai dekhna chahti hun ki kisi ka papa hone ki feeling ko Sameer kaise accept karega aur kaise apni zimmedariya nibhayega.

Sameer ko pata chalega jaldi dear...ab zyada der nahi hai...Sameer mast papa banega...main dikhaungi wo sab! ⭐️

I know I know, 31 parts ke liye ye response bohat chotu sa hai par pakka promise ki ab se mai regular rehne ki koshish karungi.

Nahi nahi...tumhe dil se yeh story achi lagi...isse badi baat mere liye koi nahi...❤️

You are a phenomenal writer aur romantic scenes likhne me aapka koi saani nahi ❤️

My God! You really made my day Tashu! Thank you so much! I hope I can always live upto your expectations! ❤️

Hi Tashu!

Thank you so much for an amazing review! My replies in red.

Love,

Sur di

Originally posted by: Khushiamaan77

Hi dear

A big fan of ur writing and i love ur ff...

Loved ur each n every chapter of ur ff...👏👏

Plz pm me ur next update and add me in ur buddy list....

Eagerly waiting for ur next update.....

Hello dear Khushi! Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like my work! For sure I'll add you to my buddy list! I hope you liked the next update!

Love,

Sur

Originally posted by: Rizz_1987

Hi dear,

This was a such beautiful update...you have done a lot of hard work on research on this ailment...n very well portrait here as we all enjoy this information.

What willl Sameer's reaction when he came to know about his n diya's realtionship...he is very much attached to diya now... anyways plz update soon

One more thing dear I have a little confusion here regarding the chapter numbers...u have updated chapter no 30 - diya's ailment on page 55 but had updated the topic as chapter no 31...plz confirm me as I have missed chapter or what... because I don't want to miss anything from ur story...

Riz

Hello Rizz!

Thank you so much dear! I'm glad my research proved successful and all of my readers got to know about something new!

Sameer ka reaction bhi pata chalega jaldi hi...he is actually very attached to Diya...

Ohh thank you so much...it was a mistake from my end...it was chapter 30 only. I have updated Chapter 31 now! I hope you like that as well! :)

Love,

Sur

Hi..

amazing update...dreams are mostly our subconscious mind's thoughts..

Dream was so beautiful..I m waiting for real reunion..

Sameer should finish the novel first...he s yearning for Naina and Diya to b his family.....they are yours only yours...

Slip of tongue...this s what's not happening..I hope somehow Sam finds out the truth..it will be better if he comes to know from Naina...

Soulmates haan yaar..now i am more eager to know part of Mr.A n Naina and Diya's life..

Sameer jealous f Mr.A...unwanted thoughts......... 2 saal mein Jo nahi Kar paaya 🤣arre Bhai Tera hi Kiya hua hai...

Update the next part soon..

Sri

Please unhe Mila do abb. I've read your story after so many days after the separation. It used to be the best FF back then😔

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Something here about her apprehension about inviting neighbors or friends over.. of them learning about the truth of her family circumstances... put up some flags... made me start wondering if she and Arvind are really married? Or is it a marriage only for namesake? Could it be that they both need a front for appearance sake for their own reasons?? Too much buzzing in my head!!!

You know what, I was thinking the same! Either Naina and A are not married or A doesn't care about Diya as much as he shows. Bcz as Sameer said, he's never seen with Naina and Diya. Mushkil se ek bar dekha usko sath. And also, as you said, Naina doesn't invite anyone to her house, not even neighbours. Kuch to gadbad h Daya🤔

Sur dii Sabse pehle i am so sorry for commenting very late since i am very buzy these dayss so couldnt had time to comment so Coming back to the update...It was lil bit emotional that Diya Is suffering from PKU... And THEN Sameer takingh information about the PKU disease And Knowing the history of his Grandparents...And He is soo concerned for Diya ...Since he is the father of Diya but he doesn't know about it but still fathers always love their daughters and then the last scene where Naina is imagining about she and sameer romantically confessing love for each other...She hates sameer a lot but still she deeply loves him And happy to know that Naina Is going to break the news in front of Sameer And I m sure he will believe her and Jald hi in dono ki misunderstanding dhoor hone chahiye and they should be living together .... DO UPDATE NEXT ONE ASAP>>>😊

KEEP SMILING

Thulasi

Originally posted by: doublecross

Dear Sur

I marvel at your consistency of churning out some amazing updates. And for me it's as good as turning pages of a K. A. Tucker, Colleen Hoover or Judith Macnaught for that matter.

My God Pooja! Itni tareef...behen perhaps it is just a fluke! :) These are some big shots in the literary world for me! :)

The best thing about your story is your characters. The balance of their flaws and their qualities is beautiful. At the very core is a major flaw that is the flaflaw of miscommunication or rather the dearth of communication. And that is what leads them to their own drawn conclusions.

True dear...the premise of this story has been a lack of communication or a miscommunication- that's what came in between their ardent love and separated them and is still keeping them at bay. The moral is that it is better to conquer our inner demons and speak yur heart out, however bad the reception might be- for we never know if life would offer us another chance or not, or perhaps the person in front of us is waiting for us to make the move. Sameer and Naina are not perfect as you said- I've tried to keep them as real and prone to flaws as normal humans would be. We all make mistakes and realize them later. But perhaps this is what life is all about- make mistakes, learn, move ahead- for the next day might bring you either the promise of rain or eternal sunshine!

I loved the way the scene with the ice-cream panned out. It was awesome and yes diya is sameers daughter in more ways than he can even imagine. Those furtive glances towards the cheese and the easy camaraderie that comes in so naturally. Am loving the way the father daughter relationship is developing. Especially sameers concern for Diya and somewhere that nagging thought in his subconscious that is nudging him in all the right places yet missing the core. It's like he doesn't wanna see inspire of all being there blatantly. Angry sameer is always my guilty pleasure. So this time his outburst at naina I loved. I had been wanting him to confront her on her behaviour. The conversation that flowed thereafter touched my heart. They are still so much in love and unknowingly somewhere Co parenting their daughter. SSameer s concern after knowing the truth and even when he goes about gathering information about the rare condition that diya has made my heart swell in tenderness. I could see the same old vulnerable sameer from college. You unmasked the father in him so beautifully sur. The peeling of the layers in his personality has been the hero of this story. And I know one can say that am biased towards sameer but he has been a more interesting personality to me and am attracted to damaged souls like a moth to fire.

Hey hi five! Somehow, even in the show, the character of Sameer has intrigued me and grown upon me. Though I relate a lot to Naina that we had initially, it is Sameer with whom I can empathize- maybe as you say, the way his personality has been shrouded in layers, makes him more appealing to uncover. From a frivolous lad, arrogant, womanizer, he keeps the real, vulnerable Sameer hidden, until Naina appears. She has always been able to bring the real him outside- the caring soul that he is, one who can love with no abandon, selflessly. And again this time, with the arrival of Diya with Naina, Sameer discovers his paternal instincts. His daughter, though he is unaware of it as yet, pulls him to her. Their traits, behavior, even appearances are so similar, that the two naturally bond together.

Bravo to you and to sweetie for this one. I can see the makings of a brilliant author. And when I say this I mean every syllable of it. I have seen my favourite authors doing it, you Dan Brown his books are so well researched and everytime he writes it's with precision getting all the details bang on and even Lisa Genova, though she is in the medical profession and often her topics pertain to her area of work yet she does it with brilliance and ease that is not only restricted to her but also her innumerable readers who are often novice seeking information about the subject. Even the most difficult of the diseases seem so easy to understand when the author has the correct understanding of the subject herself. The fact that you took the pains to research and come up with this rare disease makes me marvel you as a person. Since I know at one time you are juggling in between so much and so many things. We as hungry readers are often pressurising for more updates but we fail to understand the tedious hardworking that goes into each of them. Bravo to you and the doctor in the making sweetie since at her tender age she is a firecracker already and that she could come up with such an unlikely disease makes me want to pick her brains. A genius in the making indeed she is.

Awww! Ab main sharma jaungi! :P Yaar, I try my best. Somehow I'm obsessed with getting things right and that is what makes me dive as deep as I can. PKU was something I came across a few years back as part of another research for my husband and since then it stuck in my mind. I'd thought of autism initially, but then discarded it as I didn't want to give more pain to Samaina. The disease was just a means for Samaina to come closer and Naina to lean on him for finances. However, when I read the Kiss Quotient as you suggested by you, I understood that there are various ranges on an Autism spectrum. But by then, I'd already fixed PKU. And thanks to Sweety and Aaisha and even Minu- these guys really helped me corroborate my research and gave me additional points to include in future as well.

And Dan Brown is one of my favorites as well :P And I will try Lisa Genova and KA Tucker soon! :D <3

Love you sur

Love you loads too dear!

Hey love,

Thank you for such a beautiful review! My response is in red! :D

Lots of love,

Sur

Originally posted by: ana0806

Sur Di what a beautiful update 👏

Sameer deserves to know about Diya, Naina should tell him about that as soon as possible but I think there will be a very big twist in the next update. And what about that Mr.A.(😡Unfortunately)

Please finish his track as soon as possible🤢

Also I should say that you write romantic scenes very well👍🏼

Sur Di please update the next part soon, I know it is very cruel to ask you to update soon but my marriage has been fixed for the next month so I want to read an update before my marriage as after that I will not be able to read an update for a very long time😊

Waiting for the update.

Love

Ananya

Hey Ananya!

What a darling piece of news you gave here! Many many congratulations! Wish you both a lifetime of togetherness! When's the big day? :D I will definitely try and update as soon as I can! :)

And thank you so much dear! Haha Mr. A ke sab anti ho gaye hain...after all he is Samaina ke pyaar me haddi! :D But I really hope you like his role ahead!

I'm so glad you liked the romance...mujhe laga main thik se nahi likh paayi...wanted to do better...<3

Lots of love,

Sur di