Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Dear May ,
Loved this one. Its going to be one of my fav. What I liked is the yearning that both have to be together yet not ready to give into their needs as they are not sure of what the other thinks of them. I felt bad for Naina when she kept thinking if he would fall in love with someone else and want to marry her.
And liked the way he reacted to her packing food. Its so typical of husbands to create a ruckus when they have to travel ...lol....Telephone conversations was also good...you wrote these scenes so beautifully and realistically . I loved it. But what really touched my heart is the way their eyes met and spoke volumes .
I am eagerly waiting for the next update...
Thanks and Regards
Ashwathy
Thanks Ashu and so good to see you back!
I know yaar... husband traveling means wife has to run around doing ten things at a time! and it is still hardly ever good enough 😆
Telephone conversations between lovers are always in a league of their own... that longing which gets conveyed without seeing the other.. just through the tone.. and sometimes just the silence.. hayee!
hope you enjoy the coming updates.
Love, May