Fan Fic: Pyaar Ho Gaya: Name: P 2: Pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: rkath

yea really great plz continue

Thanks...will continue more.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
i m writing a fanfic too and i m happy to knwo our stories our quite differnt
which gives the readers variety...very good job continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
WoW I luuuuuuuuuuuv it plz continue soon...Cant wait to read more and see Karan and Laxmi falling in luv!!! 😆
Edited by sweety_16_usa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
please continue soon can't wait for the next part!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimas_ence

please continue soooooooon

I wil thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rongna

please continue soon can't wait for the next part!! 👏

Thanks for liking it, will continue

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiya_f

i m writing a fanfic too and i m happy to knwo our stories our quite differnt
which gives the readers variety...very good job continue soon 😊

Nice to know that they are.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2 - Name

Karan is quite shocked by Lax behaviour, that he doesnt really have any words for her. Lax gets quite pissed of at Karan, as once in a while he would ask her "Her Name" which got really annoying. And fianlly, Laxz has had it.

L: Look, you want to know my name?
K: Yes
L: Well, my name is.....
K: Yeaa....
L: NOT TELLING

And gets up to leave and find herself a new seat while Karan watches peacefully. And suddenly, the coach pulls to a near stop and gets a big bump which makes Lax's flying over to sit on Kar's lap...she gets scared but doesnt show it.

K: Oh look...even the bus wont let u go until u tell me your name.
L: HA HA HA...Very funny.
K: Really? I am a good comedian...thanks!

Laxmi gets irritated with Karans childish behaviour and gets up again and gets off from the coach. Karan is quite shocked with this and gets off from the coach too. He sees Lax in a near by shop, paying for water and walks upto her.

K: What are u doing?
L: Drinking water.
K: Oh, OK
L: What are u doing here?
K: Following You
L: Oh really....Hahaha
K: That was funny?...Well thank you

And while they are chatting they see that the bus was starting to leave.

L: Look, please stop following.
K: Fine...but NOT until u tell me your name.
L: Look....
K: Whats your name?
L: Hey Bhagwaan
K: Toh tumhara naam, Hey Bhagwaan hai? Weired name.
L: Look, why are u sticking to me like a chipkali?
K: Oh...soo ur name is chipkali? Interesting.
L: Look, u look like a dog, but DONT act like one!
K: I am NOT a dog!
L: And I am not Hey Bhagwaan or Chipkali!
K: Fine Nakchari Billi!
L: Bandar of NOWHERE land!
K: Hawa Hawai!
L: Look...I am NONE of them...my name is...
K: Yea....
L: Forget it!
K: Nice name

Laxmi was tired of explaining it to Karan and finally gave in and started to drink her water and turned around and started to head towards her coach when she saw that there was no coach there anymore. Karan found that out too and was shocked and looked at Laxmi...Laxmi started to cry, but than stoped and looked at Karan with narrow eyes, Karan got scared, Laxmi walked upto the shopkeeper and questioned him. Karan followed.

L: Why didnt u tell us the coach left?
SK: Well...you too were tooo busy yelling at each other that I was busy enjoying ur fight that I didnt notice either.
L: Well, than how the heck am I supposed to reach Simla? huh?

Just than Karan buts in.

K: Is there another coach or bus that will help us reach Simla?
SK: Yes...there is a coach that leaves at 10:00am

Laxmi looks at her watch and it read, "8:00am" and looked calm.

L: Good...only 2 hours wait.
SK: No, I meant 10:00am Tommorow.
L: WHAT?
K: Yes, u heard it right.
L: Well, than where am I supposed to stay for the night?
K: Good point.
SK: If u walk 20 Kilometers, u will find some shops & hotels there.
L: Ok...thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great job Shifali. Really enjoyed reading what you wrote.

Keep going! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Continue soon!!! I loved it 😊 😊

*Riya

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