Pyaar Ka Bandan- Kalma SS(Part 5 updated on page 8) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update!
Next chapter sooner please
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PART- 2

Sarthak: Why is Shekhar not taking the phone...Anu try in Anjana bhabhi's phone...

Anupriya: I am trying Sarthak ji...have patience they must have just reached home...

Sarthak: Patience? I have aited for 15 years...You don't know the feeling of meeting your best friend after years...

Anupriya: Hai Bhagwan...how to make him understand...don't forget that they are coming to fix the alliance of Sampu too...we have to make a lot of preparations...

Sarthak: I know I know...now can I get a kiss?( Sarthak asked with a naughty look)

Anupriya: Your daughters are of the age to get married and you want a kiss( Saying that she started beating him with the pillow and they shared a cute moment)

Shekhar: good that the servants cleaned the house well...I thought we will have to live in the dust...

Anjana: Say thanks to your super biwi...I called Ganesh last week and asked him to renovate it..

Shekhar: yes..yes...You are my Biwi number 1!

Anjana: thank you! Now both of you go and buy something from the market so that I can cook something..

Shekhar: we will send the servents..

Anjana: No no..when in India, be an Indian...

Shekhar: You will always be an Indian wherever you go...

( They all smile)

Shekhar: Let me switch on my phone...OH GOD! 20 missed calls of Sarthak...See this is friendship( Shekhar said with a proud smile)

Raghav: Ma...you also have missed calls of Anu aunty...

Anjana: (looked at Shekhar with a proud smile) our friendship is also not bad!

Shekhar: Agreed!( he smiled)

Anjana: Where is Malhar...I can't wait to see him...

Shekhar: He said he will come soon! I am eager to meet him too..it's been two years he came to India for being an ACP...

Anjana: He is a true patriot...just like me

Shekahr: again agreed! I have no other option( he said with a sigh!)

(They felt proud of their son)

( Raghav went out to the garden and called Sampada)

Sampada: Hello..Raghav..

Raghav: Hey...how are you?

Sampada: I am fine... what about you...

Raghav: I am good...

Sampada: acha...when are you all coming here...

Raghav: Probably tomorrow!

Sampada: OK then! Bye..

Raghav: are you busy?

Sampada: Yea a bit...I am busy with my new design..

Raghav : ok then bye...

Sampada: bye!

(They both smiled after cutting the call)

(After a few hours a police jeep came in the front of the RANE MANSION)

(A young handsome officer came out of the jeep while Anjan, shekhar and Raghav came out of the mansion)

Malhar: Mom...Dad..Bhaiyya...welcome back! ( He ran and hugged them)

Anjana: Aaaram se! you are a great officer but is still a kid...

Malhar: Wherever I am ...Whatever I am... I am still your little kid right!

( She nodded happily)

Malhar: and Bhaiyya...are you eager to see bhabhijaan!

Raghav: Stop embarrassing me Malhar! I have patience...

Malhar: What is so special about that? You are a doctor and you will have patients...It's quite natural!

Raghav: Malhar Please improve the standard of your jokes...My ears got peace for 2 years when you came here...

Malhar: Then get ready...

Shekhar: by the way beta...did you find your lady love here?

Malhar: no dad...Haven't found the perfect one yet( Suddenly Kalyani's face came into his mind)

Raghav: Heey...what are you thinking?

Malhar: Nothing...mom I am hungry make something soon!

Raghav: Once a bhukad...always a bhukhad...you will never change!

Malhar: And I don't want to!( He showed faces to Raghav)

Raghav: I will click pictures of these faces and send to your junior officers..

Malhar: I will punch you if u do something like that...

Shekhar: HAHAHA...You both are really cute while fighting

Anjana: Both of you stop fighting...and Shekhar ji...you are encouraging them to fight...

Shekhar: they are not kids right...let them fight...

Malhar: now you both don't fight for us! I took leave for a week...let's enjoy...and tomorrow we have to meet Bhabhi and family right?

Shekhar: I haven't told them that you are working here...

Malhar: whom?

Shekhar: Sarthak and family...

Malhar: what? so Bhaiyya is going to marry Sampada?

Anjana: Yes beta... do you remember them?

Malhar: Yes very well...she is a sweet girl but her is not like her...I still remember how she fights with me

Anjana: Did you meet her now? She had grown up to be a beautiful lady...don't fight with her now...you are soon going to be her relative...

Malhar: hmm...let me see..I she hasn't changed.. I will arrest her...

Anjana...Malhar! Stop being silly...and she herself is a lawyer

Malhar: ok then!

Anjana: and Malhar and Raghav to the market to buy some vegetables..

Raghav: OK maa!

AHILYA NIVAS:

Anupriya: Kalyani: go and buy the things in this list market..take Goda and Nal along with you...

Kalyani: Yess...Nal go get my car keys..

Nal: Yes di

At the Market:

(Raghav is busy picking vegetables while Malhar is trying different caps and sunglasses)

Raghav: you are such a silly guy...don't know hoe you manged to be an ACP

Malhar: Talent re...( he winked)

(Kalyani came to the same shop as malhar and raghav were in but didn't see each other and they were busy in their own worlds...Raghav went to the next shop but malhar stood there admiring himself in the mirror... Suddenly Kalyani stepped on a stick and fell onto Malhar's arms and they had an eyelock...Nal and Goda looked at them ,smiled and clicked a picture of the pose...Malhar helped Kalyani stand up properly...)

Kalyani:Thank you but you are the same ACP who stopped me yesterday right?

Malhar: yea..it was me..and don't tell it as my mistake...it was my duty...

Kalyani: oh really? I was late for an important case because of you stupid checking...

Malhar: Excuse me? Stop making fun of my work ok...and behave properly..

Kalyani: You first learn to behave...is this how u talk to a lady...I can file a case against you for misbehaving with me...

Goda: Di... what are you doing!? Come let's go

( by the time Raghav came there )

Raghav: guys is everything ok!?

Malhar: no everything is not ok bhaiyya...this girl is making fun of me and my job!

Kalyani: No bhaiyya...it's not like that...because of him and his unnecessary checking ...I was late for an important case yesterday...

Malhar: How do you know the checking was unnecessary!? Haaan?

Raghav: OK OK stop now! You both are responsible individuals and are supposed to be models for everybody and yourself are fighting with each other? We are so sorry Kalyani...

Kalyani: it's ok bhaiyya...I wish your brother was also like you! Come Goda and Nal! ( She said with an angry look at Malhar)

Malhar: look at her...how arrogant!

Raghav: ok stop now...let's go home!

AHILYA NIVAS:

Kalyani: Aai...here take all these...I am going..

Anupriya: Why are you so angry Kalyani...and where are u going?

Kalyani: I am angry because of the same ACP...and I am going to my room..where else can I go?

( and she went to her room)

Anupriya: Kalyani...what happened to her? And which ACP goda?

Goda: Don't know Badi maa...We saw a bhaiyya in a shop and di started to fight with him...

Anupriya: hai Deva..what is this kalyani doing! Ok leave it... you both go and look after the preparations that you can do...

Note: Thank you so much for all your support and feedbacks...will be updating Kalmalicious episodes soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice update ...
Yes plz update kalmalicious episode...
Show ki to vaat lagi padi he...yeh forum aur tum jaise acche writers he ab humara Sahara hai...
BTW love to bonding of Rane family and deshmukh family... especially AnuSar and AnSh( AnSh is for anjana and shekhar)
Update soon
Edited by Shona1991 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very well written yaar please update Soon 🥳
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beautiful update dear
loved it
so kalyani doesn't know ACP is her childhood dushman cum dost Malhar and vice versa
it will be interesting to see them shocked to know the same
please do continue soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow yrr awesome please update soon !!!!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow eargly waiting for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful Story

KalMa nokjhok❤️

thanks for writing

please keep writing 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: the_fangirl

Hey guys! I am writing a fan fiction for the first time here...Need all your support...So here I present you



PYAAR KA BANDAN

Part 1- page 2
Part 2- page 3

CHARACTERS:

Deshmukh Family:

-Kalyani Sarthak Deshmukh: A 23-year-old girl bold,simple and sensible grand daughter of the Deshmukh family, daughter of Sarthak and Anupriya, she is a lawyer by profession.

-Sampada Sarthak Deshmukh: Loving and caring elder daughter of Sarthak and Anupriya, she is 25-year-old fashion designer and her marriage is fixed with Dr.Raghav Rane

-Sarthak Sayajirao Deshmukh: Kalyani and Sampada's Father,son of Ahilya and Sayajirao Deshmukh, he is a friendly and supportive father, a loving husband, a responsible son, and a good brother. He is an income tax officer.

-Anupriya Sarthak Deshmukh: A super bahu of the Deshmukh family, Kalyani and Sampada's super mom, Sarthak's sweetheart and a professor.

-Sayajirao Deshmukh: The patriarch of Deshmukh family, owner of Deshmukh Industries, Father of Sarthak and Vivek, a friendly and sweet father and grandfather

-Ahilya Sayajirao Deshmukh: Sarthak and Vivek's mother, she is strict and loves her family immensely

-Vivek Sayajirao Deshmukh: Sarthak's younger brother, Pallavi's husband, Godavari and Nal's father, he is an engineer

-Pallavi Vivek Deshmukh: Vivek's wife, Godavari and Nal's mother, a silly and jealous woman who always makes mistakes, yet loved by all. Even though she is educated, she is lazy to go for work and is a housewife.

-Godavari Vivek Deshmukh: Pallavi and Vivek's 17-year-old daughter

-Nal Vivek Deshmukh: 14-year-old son of pallavi and Vivek, he is loved and pampered by all as the youngest member of the family



Rane Family:

-Malhar Shekhar Rane: A 27-year-old honest and determined ACP, he is fun loving and spreads positivity all around, Younger son of Shekhar and Anjana Rane. He stays in India and joined the police just because of his love for the country. His whole family is settled in London


-Raghav Shekhar Rane: The eldest son of Anjana and Shekhar Rane, a 30-year-old successful cardiologist in London, a kind and sweet person, Malhar's Superman, his marriage is fixed with Sampada Deshmukh.


-Shekhar rane: A rich ad successful businessman in London, Malhar and Raghav's cool dad and Anjana's love.

-Anjana Shekhar Rane: A strong and bold lawyer in London, a supportive and loving mother, and a wonderful wife.


PLOT:

The story is set in Mumbai. Sarthak Deshmukh and Shekhar Rane are best friends from childhood and Shekhar has come back to Mumbai after 15 years to fix the alliance of his son Raghav with his friend's daughter. Anjana and Anupriya are besties too. They never fail to keep a contact with each other in thier busy schedules.The Deshmukhs are not aware of Malhar, Shekar's son working in Mumbai. Sampada and Raghav were childhood friends but haven't met each other for a long time, but they like each and both are ready for the alliance. Kalyani has just started her career and is very serious about it. She doesn't believe in love and dreamy things. Malhar is exactly opposite to her. He has many friends besides being an ACP and believes in love. He is waiting for his lady love. Kalyani and Malhar were great enemies in thier childhood and almost forgot about each other now.

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