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phoenix27

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

It's a beautiful story and really enjoy it a lot. But the more i am reading it the more my believe in the fact is increasing that I can never give someone second chance and go back to that person.

Giving someone second chance actually takes a lot of courage and somewhat a bit foolishness. You need to accept that personep wrongdoing accept the consequences of those wrong doing. Accept them as your own. You not only need the be empathetic for that person but also you need you butcher yourself respect for the what you believe a greater good.

Love that person so much that you can give up on everything you have, just to get a part of them. Its difficult decision and foolish as well as you never know what the other will do again to you. But that is definitely a brave decision.

I can certainly not take that decision at least I till I do not hurt that person a little.

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yanks28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ria2794
It's a beautiful story and really enjoy it a lot. But the more i am reading it the more my believe in the fact is increasing that I can never give someone second chance and go back to that person.
Giving someone second chance actually takes a lot of courage and somewhat a bit foolishness. You need to accept that personep wrongdoing accept the consequences of those wrong doing. Accept them as your own. You not only need the be empathetic for that person but also you need you butcher yourself respect for the what you believe a greater good.

Love that person so much that you can give up on everything you have, just to get a part of them. Its difficult decision and foolish as well as you never know what the other will do again to you. But that is definitely a brave decision.

I can certainly not take that decision at least I till I do not hurt that person a little.

this is just a fan fiction and i am not forcing anyone to read it or change their views to suit mines. thanks for the comment.

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Sabyata

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Another...great update Wishu🤗

Apprecating your efforts

Like Amber said--I am not good at giving long reviews😳

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phoenix27

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: yanks28

this is just a fan fiction and i am not forcing anyone to read it or change their views to suit mines. thanks for the comment.

Did I say that you are forcing me to change my belief I loved the story line so I read it. But I can't accept something like this in my life thats what i wanted to say. You took it wrongly. You are a good story teller so i read this. If you think anyone who has opposing views should not read or comment you can certainly say that

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Mages

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ria2794

Did I say that you are forcing me to change my belief I loved the story line so I read it. But I can't accept something like this in my life thats what i wanted to say. You took it wrongly. You are a good story teller so i read this. If you think anyone who has opposing views should not read or comment you can certainly say that

well its reality of life some forgived n accept them...some just move on in life giving a closure to the past...in real life too people do forgive n reconcile n there are people who moves on...

in this fiction kunal is really guilty n have redeemed himself and realise his mistake and whom is his true love actually thus mauli follows her heart to forgive him and start fresh in life with him...yes its not easy to trust kunal after what he did...but he needs to prove to mauli that he is no more the kunal who broke her trust...he is mauli's kunal who loves her madly

sometimes its not always abt self-respect...sometimes its abt love and well being for the kids

here kunal.was very guilty of his doing and literally realise his mistake...just becos he cheated due to his weakness doesn't mean he die a lonely death...he truly loves his ex-wife and wants her back...work hard towards to win her trust and love back...he wants his family back n we all feel he should get a 2nd chance in life n love

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yanks28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: ria2794

Did I say that you are forcing me to change my belief I loved the story line so I read it. But I can't accept something like this in my life thats what i wanted to say. You took it wrongly. You are a good story teller so i read this. If you think anyone who has opposing views should not read or comment you can certainly say that

dont get me wrong your comment was entirely civil but ppl might take it as an invite to turn my thread into a debate when weit is not...such has been the atmosphere in this discussion forum...esp whilst dealing with someone who is in favor of maunal...such as myself...which is why i only posted this FF for my friends who requested me and had to convince me to write it but still i had to think twice before posting it bec i knew it would be found offensive

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rupa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

wow its beautiful...finally nobody disturb maunal 😆☺️ by the way i want to know how mauli give that mark on kunal neck actual scene 😉😳 dida loved to tease maunal 😛 but i loved how u deal with maunal inner insecurities because that's reality how much maunal love each other and reconcile still they need sometime to deal with their ugly past specially the insecurity mauli have regarding kunal...slowly they will learn how not affect by the past...

can't wait for the next part update soon

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yanks28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Mages
wow another amazing chapter filled with hotness and fire,just the way i wantedit to be...we wanted it to be and the highlight was 'mauli's insecurities'...she is with kunal..they are just like they were before but there is insecurities in mauli becos the fear of history repeating again and now kunal has to wash away those insecurities n fear in mauli's heart...it waa shattering to read that EMA past is still haunting her

jaana...gajra should take lesson from you ❤️

im glad u liked how i dealt with Mauli's issues...Gajra could NEVERRR😆 no courage,😛

@hotness- woh toh continue rahegi😉

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yanks28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Amber_Eyes
Lovely update Yanks! I'm bad at giving long reviews though. 😛 waise Deeda is a detective..she knows everything. That hickey thing was funny. 😆

hahahah..glad u liked the humor...i tried😆

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yanks28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sid_ridz
wow its beautiful...finally nobody disturb maunal 😆☺️ by the way i want to know how mauli give that mark on kunal neck actual scene 😉😳 dida loved to tease maunal 😛 but i loved how u deal with maunal inner insecurities because that's reality how much maunal love each other and reconcile still they need sometime to deal with their ugly past specially the insecurity mauli have regarding kunal...slowly they will learn how not affect by the past...

can't wait for the next part update soon

read part 3...i mentioned how it happens...😆😛 isse ziyada kya explain karun?😛