My Angel BeHir FF IF_NC_ENTRY Ch 13 on Pg 44 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks dear!!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks Varuni!! It is really nice to see the readers analyzing the characters and investing in them. Thank you for investing in my Mahir and Bella. I promise to not let you down, 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

😕 Bella really did go through in this revenge of her. She is really trying to destroy Jahnvi's career by hook or by crook. 😆 This girl really needs to learn to better let nature and karma take course.😆😆 Leave room for revenge for God, for revenge is God's.

Mahir is just really observant and really paying attention to detail here👏👏. He can detect that there is something wrong with Bella and her mother. Despite everything that Bella put him through. He is still willing to help Bella to overcome her problem with her mother.

Now that Mahir is helping Bella with her Math studies. He will somehow has the upper hands and can leave room to negotiate. Bella needs Mahir after all.

Can't wait for the next update. Plz update soon.


Nuomi, I took up your suggestion to let karma take it's course.

And yes Mahir will have a upper hand now that Bella will be on his turf. 😆😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Oh wow

Such a badass just loved the way she had a talk with Our Thick Glasses
More to go



Yes a lot more to happen between them. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snowgirl1

Wow!

Loved it
Can't wait for the next chapter


Thanks snowgirl!! So good to know that you are enjoying the story!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonie32

ash awesome as always 👏😳

yaha bhi motichoor ke laddu nahi chode🤣
so behir mission cracking maths is going to start😉



How can anyone resist motichur ke laddoo? 😆 😉

Yes while studying maths, Mahir might just end up getting chemistry and biology lessons. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel



this is funny!!!🤣


Okay coming to the whole chapter. Ash the way you described Bela's anger in the start and then her frustration in the end because of the exams was perfectly on point! I liked the ending, basically Mahir is trying to change the games and bring things under control? It would be interesting to see the ball in Mahir's court😃


Yes it is easier to imagine the cute expressions given that is all we get to see these days. God I want my old MAhir back so bad!!! 😭 😭


But thanks a lot. Yes Mahir will try to control Bella and end up getting embarrassed in the process. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


Yes kiddo mahir recent face

We can imagine
.he so cute

Next kiss will be mutual 😳


Yes the next kiss will be with Mahir's consent. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Mahir and Bela working together will be a treat.

Bela might have just found her match. Mahir will be able to put her on the back foot for once. He's so kind to help her even despite everything.

The characters are developing very well and this story has a lot of humor. It's amazing how you write each FF differently.

Excellent update Ash!



Thanks Claire!!


Yes I have a lot of treats lined up for you all. I hope you like them. 😆 😉

Yes Mahir is kind. Very kind and that will endear him to Bela.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thanks dear!! 😃

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