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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Yours is also a review to look forward too. 😆

Thank you so much 😆

I think my reaction is the same as Preeti's. I didn't think anyone read my comments

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Viddhi

@Viddhi01

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Ash commendable yaara 🤗 ( HYLILY ' s writer not any aira gaira Mo_________________error fan )

I have regrets that I wasn't there among all the lucky witnesses of Bela and Mahir journey to Behir journey and I least expect myself to be here either but you know the reasons RIGHT ?

HYLILY was / is / will be one among FOREVER FAVOURITES COLLECTION. This new book is interesting and intriguing as well.

Abhi nahi continue karungi, varna aadat par jani hai phir se

But whenever you need me, PLEASE pm

I am not gonna leave you though, will be BACK once I settle down in a medical collage GOT IT

Love ( you know who )

Dadi amma

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sonie singh shrivastava

@sonie32

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

again awesome awesome awesome👏👏👏

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Nice updates dear
Loved it
Poor mahir, she kissed him in front of everyone.
Yuvi is disgusting boyfriend. Who said her girlfriend to go & kiss some random guy.
Mahir bela start is good
Waiting for story to unfold
Continue soon please
Thanks

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: humtumsalman
the reality is that the magic is in u
that's y whatever u wrote is different and interesting

as always awesome

Thanks you so much!! 😃

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Varsha001
Waiting waiting😃

Your is now over Varsha. I will post the next chapter in a hour or so. 😃

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball
You always stopped at cliffhangers to keep us engaged.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Please update soon.

Well I am glad that my cliffhangers work so well. 😃 Your eagerness to read what happens next prompts me to write faster and better.

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth
Hi Ash

Superb update 👏

I think you are overcoming the word limit problem very well. It doesn't even seem like a problem at all actually. There is nothing missing from your chapters

I'm looking forward to seeing Mahir learn to be more confident. He will be a good match for Bela. I'm sure Bela has a few things to learn from Mahir too. They both will be each other's strengths

I'm not as talented as Preeti in writing comments. You already know this. I don't know how else to praise you. Excellent chapter and update soon!

Hey Claire, thanks a lot. I don't know for sure if the problem has been overcome or not yet. Because I just realised that the story must end with an epilogue. So that is another 500-600 words that will not be a part of the main plot. But I am glad that so far the chapters are not lacking anything. 😃

Bella certainly has a lot to learn from Mahir and Mahir from Bella. 😳