Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
May! I read the update so greedily...I never wanted it to finish...though I'm eager for the bidai as well...I actually liked this update...you focussed on the emotions of the pivotal characters of the story...Sameer's misunderstanding...Nanaji's decision to let his grandson make his own decision now...n if he decides to be with Naina...that should stem from love not pity...
The Anne Frank quotes were so apt here! Kudos for keeping the parts linked with each other ..the nightie n all...while they embarrassed Naina to the core, a deep melancholy also set in her heart, knowing she's not destined to use them.
I'm glad she shared her troubles with Preeti. I want Naina too to rise from now on, be independent!
Deepika was a cute addition to the story...I'm sure dark green, chocolate ice creams would come in handy for Sameer, when he finally realizes how much in love he is with Naina and then tries to woo her back. Not an easy task I'm sure hehe.
Naina's gesture of sending tea n snacks for Ramdhari n Farooq touched my heart. Vishakha made taiji shutup for good. Poor Naina doubting her beauty n self worth coz of this woman.
As usual, I'm eager for the next one!
Keep writing! Have a fabulous year ahead May!
Love
Sur