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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
Very cute and awesome ff...
Must say i like the way u always give importance to women standing on their own feet making a self identity
U have in all ur ffs made a special note on that women..
All the best for rest of parts

Thanks yaar Nakshi! I don't like the way women are portrayed in daily soaps. Either you have housewives who do nothing but play kitchen politics or you have career oriented women who don't give a damn about their family members. Either you have girls who are very homely or you have ambitious girls who can't even boil an egg.

It's either this way or that way. I believe that it can be both ways. Most women do have careers but that doesn't mean that they have deserted their families. 😃

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

I never caught that but it's true. Your stories all have strong female characters. Will Bela be cooking in one of the next parts? 😆

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth
I never caught that but it's true. Your stories all have strong female characters. Will Bela be cooking in one of the next parts? 😆

I can do a part in detail with kitchen romance if you want. 😃

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

I can do a part in detail with kitchen romance if you want.😃

Ash I think I'll read anything that you write.

I do have one request: I'd like one part that takes turns between showing a flashback of Mahir and Bela's old relationship with present day married Behir. Just to see how far they have come. I liked how you included that Bela called Mahir sir always when they had a professional relationship in the last part.

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Ash I think I'll read anything that you write.

I do have one request: I'd like one part that takes turns between showing a flashback of Mahir and Bela's old relationship with present day married Behir. Just to see how far they have come. I liked how you included that Bela called Mahir sir always when they had a professional relationship in the last part.

I was actually planning to do just that some time soon. But it will need some basic figuring out as I had just randomly started writing this wanting to make it a Three shot story. I did not give the background stories or the old relationships much of a thought. But I will do it soon, 😃

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

I was actually planning to do just that some time soon. But it will need some basic figuring out as I had just randomly started writing this wanting to make it a Three shot story. I did not give the background stories or the old relationships much of a thought. But I will do it soon,😃

Thank you!

By the way, when is the next part coming out?

I've been trying to resist reading your other story but it's hard 😭

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Thank you!

By the way, when is the next part coming out?

I've been trying to resist reading your other story but it's hard 😭

I have completed the next part of this one. Just proof reading is remaining. Give me some time I will post it before I sleep. 😃

And as far as the other one goes, you can read it as I update on a daily basis.