Saiyyan-Complete Adiya Fanfic *Epilogue-Pg. 55* - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the update dear 😊⭐️
So good to have some Adiya moments atleast in ffs. Glad you r continuing 👏
Keep shining!! God bless 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing chapters ! My mood got lifted . Please do update tomorrow itself ! BP fans are going through a bad phase . Your stories make me feel better .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Edited by AsadZoya1708 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Love your updates . Looking forward already
Posted: 7 years ago
These two chapters were really nice. Specially when Zoya relieved Adi out of tension before his presentation & how Adi liked her playing the piano in his study room. Their bonding is strengthening & how Adi & Zoya shared a kiss was such a delicate moment b/w the two. They are equally falling for eo with time. I'm enjoying the phase of how you're making the characters realize whether they're attracted to eo or love eo. It's a blissful read 😳
Do continue asap with time & yeah, hope you'll start with your new story too 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey been following ur updates, i like how this story is progressing slowly yet sensibly towards love and the scenes between AdiYa is a treat everytime. Love their kisses and playful moments, keep updating 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
I'm so glad you decided to continue the FF for your readers even in this difficult time phase. Tight hug for you JC 🤗

Lovely update as usual JC. Here goes my views on the update. Staring from these little little scenes where Zoya straightening Aditya's tie though it wasn't crooked and wanting that moment to be with Aditya and on the other hand Aditya smiling at Zoya amongst the crowd at the boardroom giving attention to Zoya makes the story very romantic and also these little moments are much needed and matters a lot in a married life and i love these little moments. 👍🏼 ❤️

Aditya joking stating "I can tolerate you for an hour" and Aditya commenting no matter what you wear, you will still look fat on Zoya's attire for the engagement made me laughed.😆 🤣 I really enjoyed these dialogs as i love jovial shade of Aditya. 👍🏼 😉

Another aspect which hooked me most was Zoya thanking Aditya for trusting her and telling his feeling of being an adopted child. This shows the friendship which has bloomed in their relationship. I loved this aspect as friendship is one of the most important factors required in a marriage. Glad that Adiya is now comfortable in sharing what ever comes their way. So thumbs up for bringing this aspect. 👍🏼

Coming to the bed room scene, it was beautifully written. I seriously feel sorry for Adi as this time too their romance got interrupted and i'm in Aditya's side, does really Pooja have to come at that very moment.😆 😉 Anyways looking forward for more intimate scenes.😳

Zoya is definitely in love with Aditya now but only thing is that she doesn't want to accept it yet. Loved the advice given by Noor stating, don't let fear stop you and just trust your heart. Seriously its a lesson for me as well on a personal note and was really hooked to this piece of advice.

Last but not the least loved the flash black scene.And i wish if we can get a bathroom romance scene as well in the future story.😳 I'm sure readers would love it.

Overall superb updated as usual.👍🏼 Loved all the shades of Aditya, being brought up in the story and hope to see other shades of zoya as well. I mean a jovial zoya, bold zoya in romance etc... and loved the fact of bringing flashbacks to the story as it makes the story more interesting to read. ❤️

And of course i'm eagerly waiting to read your update, This is a story which i've got hooked so much. If possible please update tomorrow and looking forward to your new story as well.



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Edited by Anu*Gayani*Anu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Update: finally got time to read it, and as always, amazing! I'm really loving how you're showing both POVs on how Aditya & Zoya are falling in love - it's nice to see that nothing's being rushed and we are given those small, cute, romantic moments when they look at each other. Also, that conversation they had in the office was a BIG yes - Zoya needed to know that he trusts her and that he will never hide anything from her. Moving on to that kiss, ARRRE yaar! Fxcking blown away - they got so caught up in each other, I loved it!
Side note: I relate to Sakshi 100%, dancing with joy as laddoos pooth inside for AdiYa! Amazing update, love. You never fail to leave me stunned with your craft! 👏
Edited by iloveSaJan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank u so much for continuing the ff. Felt so happy after reading it. I could forget the grief of BP shutting down for some time. Your writing is beautiful.
The study room scene is sweet and I love the way Aditya teases Zoya. Hope Zoya realizes her love soon. Eagerly waiting for the next parts.

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