EROSION P13 PG17 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Auroraborealis

This is heartbreakingly beautiful. JW and HC are meant for a script like your story friend. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: -Rehanna-

Haha optimism is great, I promise they will get the ending they deserve, but the ending is far away right now, so for the next chapter I apologise beforehand

Originally posted by: Auroraborealis

This is heartbreakingly beautiful. JW and HC are meant for a script like your story friend. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: Tyshal

True..

This story is meant to show on a large scale...This story deserves so.

The outer ND inner struggles of zoya...The unablity of adi to express himself...The complexity...

True...To love someone...First u shd love urself.

Originally posted by: Peaceful_Haven

That's good.. I mean great. No matter what kind of scary roller coaster ride you've planned to make us ride, I don't want this story to end any time soon. I truly love this kind of soul searing emotional stories even if it left me disturbed for long time. These kind of stories have reality, depth and rawness that are too hard to left unacknowledged. So I'll be reading every update with equal ardour. 😊

Originally posted by: Peaceful_Haven

Oh my god! How can one write like this? Such emotions, such vulnerability, such crude intensity is truly unimaginable to be captured so perfectly in words but you did it expertly. Kudos to you for this exceptional piece. Amazing. 👏