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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 7 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres Di
Awesome chappy Di
Poor Jo n Jalal
Hope they will be together soon
Update soon Di

Thanks for pm Di

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 7 years ago

#772

Seeing Bairam Khan so broken merits some sympathy but then again when we recall all that he has done, he brought it all upon himself just as Salima pointed out.

Marium Makani's timely arrival and intervention helped diffuse a potentially devastating situation.

If Bairam Khan had insisted on leaving with his family and Jalal stepping in to forbid Salima and Rahim from leaving with him, all hell would have broken loose.

Loved the entire conversation between Marium Makani and Bairam Khan- her queenly aura and her calm demeanour in persuading him to stay and protect Jalal was splendid writing.

The joy of Holi in Rajputana is going to be short-lived with the attacks being planned.

Stuti, to see Jalal and Jodha suffering like this is too painful to bear. How will they be re-united is what I have been wondering all along.

Having met in disguise as commoners, how do you plan to get them to meet ?

A terrific chapter.

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#773

lovely update
I hope jo and jalal become together soon
waiting for your next update
update next chapter soon

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#774

haila ye kya hua jallu ko...😒

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#775

A beautiful Chapter Stuti ! I loved how Jalal fought his own reflection and the internal conflict was very well brought out.

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#776

Poor joja. Hope they unite soon.

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#777

It is so sad to see this distraught state of the mighty emperor Jalalludin, and also of Chandrajeet who is defeated by his own love

And the guilt that Poornima is going through of seeing defeat in her love 's eyes was also painful

Marium Makani is true to her both roles may be political or her motherhood. Very nice portrayal of this character

Loved it, please post next one soon

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#778

Thanks For the Awesome Update... Stuti...

Full pathos...but not depressing cos I believe Jalal at least will swing into action...both are under testing times...stretched to their limits...and need each other badly...Jo has no hope and Jalal is ready to fight for her...

But by some of the reasons you gave through Jalal's inner self...will Jodha hate Jalal

Finally reason is knocking on Bairamkhan, I think...Hamida's tactical moves will yield the desired results, I hope...

And Jaswant has a convincing flashback for hating Ameris...and that escaped spy belonged to Suryaban...so will it be just tough getting Bhangarh or the sagarmal group will taste defeat...I know we've to wait for it...so we will 😉

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#779

Ok now my comment

Some points:

1. I AM THE BEST 😆

Loved Salima... Even in this horrible moment she doesn't looses her cool not even for a moment... May be this is the best quality of a woman like salima so that fate choose her for BAIRAM KHAN who is complete opposite...

2. JANAM SAMJHA KARO!!! 😆🤣

In this whole chapter if there is any real hero... That is none other than MALLIKA E JAHAN MARIUM MAKANI Hamida Banu... May be she is the reason of Jalal having patience and intelligence... Her personality reflect through Jalal in all way... Any other than her couldn't handle BAIRAM Khan like she handle that too in this delicate situation...

In the view of BAIRAM Khan the insult he faced... After that any self respected person will try to go away from the place where he was insulted...it's obvious for BAIRAM KHAN to go away... But the point MARIUM MAKANI placed is absolutely right... He is the protector first than he is Khan e khana...then Wazir e aala...

He always took pride being the father figure to emperor... But he took that pride in wrong way...so it's quite possible of his fall...Mariam MAKANI is totally right.. no father can be so pathatic to join hands with his sons enemy just because his son doesn't required him...

3. TERI YAAD SAATH HAI

want to recite this few lines for the couple...

Main Jahan Rahu...

Main kahin bhi hu...

Teri yaad...Sath hai...

Kisise kahun...

Ke nahin kahun...

Yeh Jo Dil... Ki baat hai...

Kehne Ko Sath Apne ek duniya chalti hai...

Or chupke is Dil me tanhaayi palti hai...

Bas yaad... Sath hai...

Teri yaad...Sath hai...

No words can describe the feeling of them better than this line may be... Still wanna say something...

Two souls burning... One in defeat

..one in guilt...

Defeat that he doesn't win his love... The love refuse to acknowledge him...

Guilt that she couldn't do anything to wipe the pain from his beloved face.. the pain of rejection... The pain of separation...

Jalal thinks that he could took her in his horse.. he shouldn't left his love behind in Amer...

Jodha thinks that she shouldn't hurt him too much... She should atleast talk to him like a normal human being...

Don't any more to say...

Btw sonargarh is the Sasural of sujamal isn't it??

What is the Paigham...

Update soon now or will loose the track...

Very good description of Jalal jodha's situation... But try sometimes not too much complecate the writing...will be better...

Update soon..

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#780

Stuti...🤗

So beautiful update...everything is so balance.

Human emotions are beautifully expressed.

Salima...strong women ...great personality...how fortunate bairam Khan to have her...but he is so blind by his ego.

Beautiful start of the chapter.

I like the way you show us bairam Khan through salima eyes...very well describe his state of mind.

No matter what ...bairam Khan care for jalal and mughal empire...he never want to harm him.

Jalal views matter him so much that's why he just couldn't able to forget his insult from Jalal infront of everyone.

He loves Jalal...but he way of showing is bad.

Like a good wife and mother of Rahim...try to show him where he goes wrong...even salima could see how much her husband love Jalal.

But yes...bairam couldn't understand his wife logic...if only he could understand his wife and Jalal than he would know he is lucky to have them.

Arrival of Marium Makani...stunned bairam Khan and salima.

There is strong aura in her surrounding...

She behaves like true Marium Makani and true mother .

Wow...what a beautiful way of showing bairam Khan mirror.

There was no best way to show him where he goes wrong and what his position in Jalal life..

So true bairam Khan is much more than mentor ...if only he understand that.

If there is misunderstanding between them he is behind that.

Jalal...what can I say about him ?

I feel terrible after reading his condition ...his helplessness, his loneliness...how much he is suffering.

There is no one for him...to console him...money and power never bring happiness.

His inner battle very well show in the scene.

Exactly he don't even know real name of his lover...how will he find her ?

She is the only one who bring peace in his life...I hope that day come soon.

Jodha condition is also same like Jalal .

There is no one for her ...slowly everyone forgetting her in her family ...her absence doesn't matter to anyone .

She is centre of attraction in her family ...and in whole Amer.

But now she is alone .

Moti is the only one who understand her but now she is also suffering because till now no news from Vijay .

I wonder why...where he goes ? I hope he doesn't join hands with enemy .

In Sonargarh ...so much going on ...Sujamal is not aware of that...

Jashwant Singh ...he is not the way he is showing himself .

It's clear he don't like Amer...and there is also that... he feels for Sujamal wife ?

And something happen with him in Amer which he didn't forget till now ?

Who is that Messenger who giving Suryabhan news from Sonargarh ?

So much conspiracies going on . ...

All in all ...Superb Chapter dear !

So many beautiful elements you added . ...

Waiting for the next chapter !

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