AVNEIL SS :THE GIRL NEXT DOOR , IMP NOTE ON PAGE 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it

Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing update Tapasi👏 Thnk you😊

Enjoyed Avni and Neil question answer session...

Before saying yes Avni making sure use baby shona etc etc toh nahi bolna padega...this was hilarious... It was?😆.Thnk God! I tried to keep it light and funny.

What will happen when shweta visit them and start liking Avni??? For dt v hv wait for Shweta's visit😉

Twins are doing good..started formal school this year😛

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nivi

No worries.Come back after ur exams😊

Originally posted by: Binh

Aweee! These two are way tooo adorable.. I don't think I can ever get enough of them.. Ha ha ...so true... nobody can ever get enough of dem.

I loved how he teased her about her first love... BOOKS! Even I am an avid reader and my emotions are not far apart from avni's. A good book can lift up the mood like no other thing... This chapter certainly did that... Ahan! a book lover 😃.Actually my roommate in college was a book lover...so I'm kind of a lil aware of der love for books.She could literally live on books😆

It was so cute when Neil said that I am not used to girls fighting with him rather they smile at him.. I can so understand that 😉 Ab hamara hero hai hi itna charming...ders no denying girls must be going flat on him , Avni is like fresh air to him.

Bechari meera ab use kya pta tha ki avni and Neil ek room mein hain to there is a very slight possibility that they would have time to think about something else xD. True😆..She had no idea he was der...nahin toh shayad Khud hi aa jati wahan😆

Their banters are soo nice.. I love how they always have fiery comebacks for each other! Thank you.😊

This was so realistic and easy to connect.. Awaiting the next!

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

My, my what a way to grab the readers' attention! I get to read a feel good story after a long time, will enjoy this ride with a tub of popcorn and coke. Neil's already walked a step closer to his fate, all the best my boy! Lol😆.Was just setting d premise and I had to stop somewhere na😳...no intention to be dramatic😆

The book editor-lawyer couple are gonna be a treat for us readers. Off to the first chapter, Tapasi. I certainly hope dey r . Waiting fr ur review on d next one.

Love,

Nivi

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nivi

Hw r u? How did u exams go? I'm sure you must hv done well.

And d most awaited review is finally here!!

Yes I'm trying to write a feel good story wid not much twists and turns .Hope you enjoy it all d way through.

Thnx fr d review😊

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

I'm fine, Tapasi. I hope you're doing well. Phew, finally I'm done with those treacherous exams. Most awaited review 😆. Aap likhein aur hume pasand na aaye, aesa kab hua hai Tapasi ji. Having a fun time reading the chapter 1.

Love,

Nivi