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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys as promised here is next chapter and hope you like it .
Chapter 13

Uma tightly hugged Kanak and took promise that she will never leave him under any circumstances . she promised for a while they sat on the stairs of the Temple. Kanak put her head on his shoulders and he held her hands. He kissed on her forehead and she smiled back. After some time someone told them not to sit here as it's creating a problem for the passerby and they left for hotel. They both want to relax but Aditya took keys of his room with himself. So Kanak offered him to stay in her room so they go there.

Kanak told Uma to order some food in room itself as she is tired and can't go to dinning room till than she change . she went inside while Uma ordered food. Kanak came back in a gown and wet hair Uma lost in his thoughts. She asked whether he knows the combination code of her bag she doesn't remember the same. He came forward and helped her she selected her clothes and saw Uma was looking down and not saying anything. She was surprised and sit besides to him and asked what happened. He said nothing just than waiter rang the bell and put the food outside the room. Uma took the food inside . kanak closed the door and hold him back. There was a mischievous smile on her lips. Uma said this is not my room. Kanak replied that this is her room and everything belongs to her belongs to him as well. He hesitate and said it's not a correct time. She replied back it's their honeymoon no one is around and they will not be back till evening. He tried to go but she pushed him on bed and this time she put on the music. He smiled and she slowly came near to him. She kissed on his forehead gave a peck on his cheeks Uma closed his eyes around 2 minutes nothing happened so he opened his eyes and saw Kanak was standing far. He asked what happened. She replied nothing may be you are right this is not our room , not a correct time though you are my husband but it's better to wait . Uma stood up go straight to her and gave her a long kiss. He said you have ignite me and now I don't want to wait . He put her on bed put all the curtains removed his shirt and laid on her and followed with kisses on her face and neck. She can feel the sensation in her at times laughing and loving him back. He said that this is the moment I longed since we came here. And she said me to. What followed was deep love between them.

After sometime Uma wakes up and saw Kanak was in the dress she has selected before . He said why we still have time and call her on bed. She went and show him watch that it's already 5 and everyone will be here by 6-7 so it's better he should also get ready . he said that he still have time as it will not take too long for him and laid her down and put his head on her chest. He said Kanak you are so soft and delicate that sometimes I think not to hurt you or maybe you get hurt. Kanak replied Uma sometimes you over think don't think too much and started rubbing his face. He said let it be. She replied she cannot there are marks on his face and he have to leave now so he has to clean it up . uma said you told me that whatever belongs to you belongs to me. So why not this. She got up and ordered him to go freshen up and come out. He always obey her so left to freshen up. In the meantime she called housekeeping staff and tell them to clean the room. They did.

Once Uma come out he hold her from behind and said just today by tomorrow we will get our separate room and after that you can't tell me to leave. She moved forward to him and said till then manage with this and gave him a passionate kiss.

Guy's I know some of you may like or not but please do comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely no doubt you are a good writer. While reading I went in kanum world. Tq dear for this treat.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Enjoying ur writing lovely,please do continue like this,it brings happiness by imagining kaanum through ur story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely where are you yar? Pl update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry friends for no update yesterday as you all know what happening around as a fan I would always ready to share my ideas, stories with all of you but as a citizen first I was busy with something else as well. And sorry Sami I was not able to reply you as well. But I think all of you can understand what Mumbai is going through but all well that ends well and now I am back to continue.
Chapter 4

Kanak gave Uma a passionate kiss while he was leaving though he didn't want to go but she pushed him out of room. He said let wait for tomorrow once I get my room than I will show you. Kanak replied till than bye and closed the door. Uma waited in the lobby they all arrived. Uma touched Bhabho Massisa and Maasa feet they asked what he was doing here he replied Aditya forgot to give keys on the reception so he is waiting here. Saras replied why didn't he waited in Kanak room as she had given her keys. Uma said that after pooja she was very tired so he thought not to disturb her. Aditya said sorry to Uma but Uma said it's alright. Saras Suman shared their experiences with him. They said that they thoroughly enjoyed and there is so much to see here even we wanted to see many places more but it was sunset so Massisa didn't allow. But tomorrow they will see the pending sites. Uma leave them towards there room and proceeded towards his room. After entering the room he noticed Aditya was not around ved told that maybe he is still in the lobby. Uma received a call on his phone. Aditya inform him to come to lobby ASAP.

Uma excused himself and left to meet him . Aditya hugged him and said that I know it was your honeymoon with bhabhisa but due to my mistake everything is ruined we don't get proper rooms and you not got a chance to meet her properly. But still you are always defending me but now it's my turn. Uma hesitated and said it's not like that Aditya in fact I am not angry with you but Aditya said no you have to take this . Aditya handed him keys Uma said what's this. He said that there is a honeymoon cottage here almost 3 km away you can go with bhabhisa and relax over there. Uma said no I will not what I will say to everyone. Aditya said that he will manage everything here only after dinner you have to go there and don't worry about bhabhisa once you reach there I will send her as well. Uma tried to refuse but he said it's a small gift from his side please accept. Now Uma cannot say anything and said yes. Aditya hugged him .

In the room Kanak was busy with saras Suman and payal they were discussing about today's trip Suman was very happy and told her that we should come often here it's so beautiful. And tomorrow we are doing sports like river rafting and bungee jumping saras said that these are dangerous bhabhisa just tell her we will not do it. Payal replied it's all about conquering fears and don't worry there will be safety measures as well. They all were discussing tomorrow plans purab knocked the door and said dinner will be by next 10 minutes so all of you better be ready.

Everyone gathered at dinning room Massisa said no to river rafting as it's raining here and now river rafting would be dangerous we will go to some other places. After finishing dinner Aditya called Kanak and said that he wants to take her to somewhere. Kanak asked where Aditya replied if she trust him so don't ask . he blindfolded her and make her sit in the car. After sometime he removed the blindfold and Kanak saw a very beautiful wooden cottage with a lawn and a river passing nearby. The sound of river can be heard and Uma was there near the front door. Aditya replied that it's a surprise for her but her devil had planned this for them. So enjoy tonight he will be back by tomorrow morning He drove back in the car. Kanak was standing there now this time Uma came near to her gave her a peck and said I was ready to wait till tomorrow but maybe shivji doesn't want him to wait. He lifted her in her arms and took her inside. It was beautiful inside as well the dcor was simple but comfortable and there were no light but candles everywhere and the bed was decorated with flowers. Kanak said Uma it doesn't feel that we are married from years but I sometimes think that we have married just few days back. Uma said that love stories end on marriage but our love story started on it. He gave her a small kiss on her lips just than lighting happened outside Kanak hugged him tightly he said don't worry noty will happen to you. That night it was raining outside and they have bathed in love inside it was just 2 bodies and 1 soul and the sound of water added to their intensity . He said that when you are around I can forget the whole world and she replied he is her world and today she got it. It was a beautiful night of love between them.

Present day.

Someone knocked his room he came out of his memories that kamarband was still in his hand. He put it In the cupboard and open the door saras was standing and said that everyone is waiting for him .he followed her to the Temple.

Guy's hope you all like it. Please do comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Hi lovelycolour it was wonderful and mind blowing...loved and enjoyed every moment you describe, it was apt and precised. Thank you so much for keeping kanum chemistry alive in our heart even after ending the show. 👏👏👏
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys I am back here to compensate for yesterday with the next chapter I will try to be as regular as possible but I request you guys to be more active as I can see 2000 views but only 50 comments so request you guys to be active more in this forum.
Chapter 15

Present day

Uma left the room with saras once he is gone Massisa told Suman to clean the room and remove each and every photo of Kanak. Suman said that she cannot do this as Dadusa will be angry and moreover he will be hurt. But Massisa said in the stern voice that she is doing this for his betterment Bhabho was also there she also told the same thing as now Kanak is no more but Uma is still there and now they have to think about him. Suman went in the room and started crying by seeing the pictures she still remember how happy they were but still she put all her pictures in a bag and put the bag in the storeroom. Everyone was worried it was about 1.00 PM in afternoon and everyone was waiting for sunset vedansh was nearby Uma so that he couldn't do anything. With the passing time Uma was also getting anxious and
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Sorry guys it posted by mistake. I am continuing.
With the passing time Uma was also getting anxious and depressed he was again and again seeing his watch and the Temple gate than suddenly he felt someone has come he turned to see but vedansh was standing behind and ved told that there is no one. Bhabho said that they should keep Uma busy or else he will keep thinking about it. So Maasa told Uma to check with the planners as Aditya has asked the same thing when he and Tiara will standup the garland should fell on them so did the planner has made the arrangements for this. Uma said he will go and check. Planner told that everything is as per plan at the correct time chinmay will clap and they will throw the garland from above and it will fall on them. Uma said okay fine but again and again he was looking at the door like someone is coming .

And someiy enters in Benz car . though her friends told her that you wanted to see the country so there were more places like we could have visited Goa a film festival is going there or Delhi a food festival is there but why here haven't you notice there is so much heat here and we are traveling in such a luxury car that if the car breakdown we will not find a mechanic. She replied my special saarthi we are in the hottest city of India so do you think we will feel cool here and don't forget this is summer so anyways it will not be cold. Her second friend replied yes exactly my point what are we doing in the hottest city of the country and that too in summer. She replied that there may be many festival going around but Shivratri is celebrated in most grand manner here and we are here to see that. Her friend said okay miss kamya go and treat yourself we will sit in the car we are tired. I don't know why in ranakpur Temple someone told you about this place and you from not going to hotel directly came here. What if you suffer from any panic attack or something like that. Kamya said nothing will happen to her and they both can sit inside the car as they don't know how to explore and if Dad call just tell that I am taking spa in hotel so will call back later. They both agreed and she went with her xlr camera near the Temple. The crowd was much more she sat in the corner she saw a ice cream seller . she gone to the seller and asked for a cone but he was shocked to hell and just said it can't be possible.

Guy's please tell me how it's going. If I am dragging it too much still you can tell me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tq lovely if you missed one day also you updated two. But sorry yar to bother you as we know it's raining still we expected update.
That means she for got uma and all. Now she is Kamya.Story is going beautifully.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice kanum moments👏& beautiful structuring of story lovely!! is kamya our kanak wow eager for nxt parts😃 don't hesitate for lengthy ones dear we are there to read happily.. Thanks for double treat today🤗

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