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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Doreman
Nice update .. The way you reciprocated the feelings of Diya and Ratan during the separation period is excellent...👏 👏
Waiting for next update... Please update soon as the show is also ending

Thanks Dear...

M happy that u liked it..😆😆

Ya, i m trying to finish it off soon... as serial is going off air, aur fir aage likhne ka bhi mann nai karega..

I just noticed that we both joined IF on same day, BEHNAA 😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Mind blowing update
Fabulous and fantastic
Love it
Continue soon

Thanks Plmzaq. M pleased that u liked it..😊😊

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desiseriesfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Kut kut ke pyaar bhari FF hai tumhara!

Loved your writing my dear.❤️

It looked like that this 4 month separation has made Ratan 4 year more older. This maturity was necessary.

I loved that you made the 4 month separation into one part, thanks for that. Wedding, video chat, "Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha " moment, simply WOW! 👏

I am eagerly waiting for your next part ...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Ranjit25
Very well written. Love it so far. Can't wait for the next part. PH could have taken you as the writer . Serial would have been still going on

Thanks Ranjit25. Glad that u liked it... Ur comments r flattering.. watever is written in this FF, is just result of imagination of one of DIRA fans.Truth is- Reality is always differnt from imagination and CVs had something else in their minds.. But jo bhi kaho, On screen DIRA's charm cant be matched in any FF.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: nancy505
Kut kut ke pyaar bhari FF hai tumhara!
Loved your writing my dear.❤️

It looked like that this 4 month separation has made Ratan 4 year more older. This maturity was necessary.
I loved that you made the 4 month separation into one part, thanks for that. Wedding, video chat, "Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha " moment, simply WOW! 👏

I am eagerly waiting for your next part ...

Thanks Dear Nancy...😆😆😆

M happy that u liked it.. Ur positive comments r v encouraging..😃

Oh ya, this line correctly suits that incident- Na bole tum, na maine kuch kaha... wow 👏 this line just explained everything, they were going thru at that moment... Thanks...

M glad that i cud show some maturity in Ratan. Like Vijaya wrote in one of her posts that- maturity doesnt come with age..it comes as soon as ur way of thinking changes... And the best example of this is DIYA helself, she became mature as soon as she was handed over the responsibilty of RATAN's security..

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desiseriesfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Arulya, ypu are doc. right? Than how you manage to write beautiful stories?

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jafg99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: nancy505
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Arulya, ypu are doc. right? Than how you manage to write beautiful stories?

Ya, m doctor.. busy schedule se jab free time milta tha, to thoda TV dekh leti thi.. fir RLHN achcha lagne laga.. online search kiya to, IF mil gaya.. Fir tum sab log, tumhaari baatein aur tum logo ke FF/OS ne mujhe kafi impress kiya aur fir bas ek din kuch likh diya... I was v reluctant to post part one of this FF (that was my first evr post on IF) i was thinking-pata nahin kya reaction hoga? Reaction hoga bhi ya nahin..? But i must say, i have received so much love from u all, in such a short period.. i feel lucky..

Jab frens itne supportive aur encouraging hon, jaise ki tum, to likhne se dar nahin lagta.. hum sab jo bhi yahan discuss/ chat karte hain detail mein, wahi sab baaten, kuch kuch idea deti rahti hain.. Ya, frens ke support ke bina, kuch nahin hota..

And my work is nothing in comparison with Ayesha's (another doc in forum) who is just superb with excellent power of imagination..

Waise bas profession se hi dactar hun, baaki dactaron jaisa kuch bhi nahin mujh mein..😆😆

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

This is sooo beautiful update

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Shafoo
This is sooo beautiful update

Thanks shafoo😆😆😆

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Carry

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Posted: 8 years ago

#210

What a wonderful update Arulya! 👏👏

Too good bro.. very well written..👏

Ratan's behavior changes were so well described...and you still made it all so relatable. Matlab bajaye Ratan per gussa anay ke, I was feeling more and more bad for him..

Asal Ratan ka bhi yehi masla hai waise... I end up relating with him no matter how big a jerk he becomes.. 😆😆 So you kept Ratan true to his character.. 👍🏼

Diya's video message was so poignant!😊 There was a point that my eyes watered slightly on reading about their plight.. So hats off to you buddy for writing it so well.. 😊😊

Next update jaldi ker dena please.. 😳😳

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