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Posted: 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Featured comments from last Chapter ::

Thanks a lot for your insightful comments guys.. I really appreciate those who read a story and take their time to convert their thoughts into something like these wonderful comments. This really helps the authors to give you more aspect of a story and make the plot more comprehensible as well!!

Originally posted by: aparna3011
wonderful update
so maan clear all misunderstanding of dev n he is very happy for it
maan complete the geet's with of having swing
also give surprise of their roka
geet happy to see maan's parents
sameera is very jealous seeing all this decide to do something

Hello Aparna,

I am happy that you liked the previous update.

Thanks for your comment!!

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Wow beautiful update baby
Very well written , enjoyed reading it

Loooved Vicky , dev and maan's scene a lot ❤️
Mauke pe chauka maar rahe the dono
Finally maan had to summon her with her cute name 🤣

Really like geet and her child like antics
Can't get enough off them
Aur uske dialogues uff me toh fida Hoon unpe
All credit to our ipti 🤗

Liked maan's surprise
Toh finally mishty aur maan ka roka hai

Let's see Sam Kya karti hai

Hi baby.

If you enjoyed reading it then my job is done there. I really don't know how this thing is being turning up!! But all your motivating words really push me and lemme type further and grew closer to the main plot!! Which is btw still a few updates away!! My updates are just keep getting bigger and bigger!! 😆🤣 Till then I hope you endure me!! 😆

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting baby!!

Originally posted by: hottyangel
amazing update... maan told dev about his love for geet from a long time . both his younger brothers are in a teasing mode. geet is as usual unaware of all the happenings and pestering maan to pacify her from her false anger. maaneet are spending some romantic time... maan gave o surprise to her by announcing about their roka... maans parents also came for the function... what is sameera is going to do... eagerly waiting to know how maan is going to react to sameeras cheap side.. precap is little bit scary. who is that rajveer???

Glad that you find this update amazing,

At last someone got the real thing...Yes it's Geet who was pestering Maan to pacify her from her false cute anger...

Rajveer - You will know it real soon...Well I guess you already know it after reading today's update!!

Thanks a lot for your comment.

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Superb extra lengthy double bonanza
Super glad to read these stupendously awesome updates
Maan's surprise to Geet was so romantic and touching
He rememberes all her likings from childhood
Dev n Vicky enjoyed leg pulling at Maan's expensr, liked his tiniest younger brother ;)

N then the main surprise, Roka
Sameera is.planning something ???

Precap makes.me.curious to know what will happen next
Continue soon

Sameera - of course she is planning something.. and that is quite devastating!!

Glad that you liked Vicky!! 😆 i like him too 🤣

Thanks for your comment!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Sorry for late likes and comments!

Chap 51

Part 1

amazing pic ❤️

fabulous update! wonderfully written! Loved that Maan knew that Dev wanted to question him!

never expected Dev to directly confront Maan abt his status.

Liked how Maan handled Dev's questions! Omg Vicky is a foodie😆

Glad Maan was honest with Dev and reaveled that he is getting married to Geet! Maan proudly says he loves Geet!

Maan wanted to tell Dev something abt NT but disturbed! hope he gets an opportunity soon!

Dev happy seeing this teasing Maan!

Maan went to see Geet but his two bros follow! wow amazed that Maan knew that Dev was there! Vicky is hilarious! 🤣

omg love the part that he is also a jasoos like his dadi!

Geet wants Maan to talk lovingly but he can't as his bros are there! Maan tries 2 hint but Geet fails 2 read in between the lines!

Maan calls her jaan and they tease him! Geet embarrassed as she realises that Dev and Maan were there!

Adore the love and bond between the Khuranas brothers!

wonder what surprise has planned for Geet! 😃

Glad that you liked the picture. 😃

Vicky is indeed foodie and a very cheerful character...

I am happy that you liked the bond between the Khurana Brothers...

Thanks a lot for reading and your outstanding response comment... Loved it!! 👏

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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PRECAP :

"Not even a single Hi?? Oh, I guess your pet minion is here...Is he still being your bodyguard or what??" Restraining her way Rajveer spilled a crooked smile!!

"Leave my way. I do not talk with strangers...!"Sameera lifted her face in disgust and rumbled with a serious glare!!

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Reshu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#665

ALl the updates were awesome
Dev getting to know about maaneet
Haha monkeys
Veg biryani
Bhabi ? Haha geet must have been red ... all Sharanya se pani pani
Loved the surprise
Omg the engagement ?
Finally yayyy
I don't like this Rajveer
Poor sam!!
Shock ke upar shock
Daadi is an angle
Update soon
With maaneet engagement

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gill123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#666

Nice update so samera ka past aa gaye uske samne hope samera dafi ki advise ko follow Kar le nice update waiting for more

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priyankadwivedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#667

Nice update... On the name of flashback i thought Sameera created some scene due to their roka but here new entry... Geet gave correct answer but person like rajveer doesn't understand with words... Does dadima knows about sameera advancement towards maan.. did maan shared with her...

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@jssood

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Posted: 8 years ago

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nice part

dadi give wise advise to sameera

she see love for maan in sams eyes

is sameera done any blunder so that u show flashback part

lovely answer by geet to rajbeer

sherni wakeup

thank god maan tell some past of sameera to geet

precap is curious

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love2_soma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#669

m really thinking something fishy...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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fict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#670

Interesting updates. Was surprised to see Daadi aware of Sam's feelings for Maan. Did she come to know of this recently otherwise I feel she would have clarified things to Sam. Maan Geet talk remembering their marriage was sweet. Rajveer was a surprise too and Geet's response to him was fantastic. Looks like Geet helped Sam deal with Rajveer during marriage scene and thats what Maan meant by them coming closer. waiting for next to know what actually transpired.