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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

finally maan could bring back his geet
such a emotional part ,well written
just loved it dear
finally waiting for the reaction of geet, only she could bring maan from his guilt
and waiting eagerly for sasha reaction when she come to know about the maan and geet bonding
nice part dear loved it

thanks susmi
You will soon see the reaction of Geet
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maherkhan

wow double update that too big thank for that it was supurb...

geet open her eye and become normal...
still she has some weakness but i sure when they reach at home priya n dadi bound her with bed...
but what's wrong with maan...i know its not right situation for starting their married life but its not all wrong also why he hide that most important thing of their life...after all he is her husband and make love to his own wife its not wrong he is not lusting but loving her...i m sure geet also understand this...
update soon...

Thanks Mehar
Nothing is wrong with Mana..it's very natural reaction from nay gentleman who does not want tot ake advantage of such situation even if she is his wife.. He is not hiding anything just doesn't know how to tell as she is completely unaware of it

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taanee

Ek maan ko guilt bohat hota hai he has moved on in relation with her why can't he accept her saving her was important

every good man feels so when something happened is not right😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

awesome updates... geet is saved by maan. geet is safe but she is still in trauma. maan called up Ram and to send a chopper. ram himself came and after finding what happened with maaneet he is very much scared.. he thanked the villagers and wants to do something for them... maan again in his guilt trip. hope geet gets him out of that..

Thanks a lot
Im sure geet will help him to come put of his trouble
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

He shouldn't have the guilt trip... he didn't forced himself. It was situations demand. And they are husband and wife. So they are going home after such a traumatic journey. Happy for them.

Your every point is right as you know they love each other and Maan has that right..But it's Maan who thinks that it was not good when she was not in her senses but he was helpless as it was the need of the situaation
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

maan can imagine ur situation but rather dan feeling guilty n keeping it in u just share it with geet...its not easy but den u can try na...otherwise geet will b sad by seeing u like dis...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Just wait soma.He will share but he needs little time
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Thank you so much for the double treat Rashmi🤗Feeling so contented and so emotional after reading both of the updates. Jumping in joy as Mittu is safe and sound, back to herself. And they are safely reaching home. So grateful to all the villagers and the doctor for saving Maaneet. Was especially enamoured the way Geet and the villagers mingled so well bonding so sweetly. And the magnanimous gesture of Ram helping them out in ways that he can. But I am feeling so sad for Maan who is now drowning in guilt.

I am always at a loss for words to describe the soul connection Maaneet shares. And the way you bring it out in your story is truly admirable. Mittu in her unconscious, subconscious state is only calling out to her Angel...reaching out for her Angel...Asking him not to leave her...to save her...even when she fell her hands were stretched out to him beckoning him to save her...She remained in that state until Maan was able to break through her trauma with his love...Maan was totally broken and lost without her...Their love and union was a divine life saver. At the first opportunity Maan should tell his Mittu the whole truth. She may not have been conscious but her heart and soul was with her Angel all the while. Which was why she was holding on to him, murmuring for him not to leave her. The way she reacted to his warmth and love in her subconscious state speaks for itself. Maan needed to save his Mittu and for that he had to bring her back by all means. He may be feeling guilty that they had to consummate in such a circumstance. But Mittu will definitely understand her Angel and would cherish it for eternity. How her Angel fought destiny with his love to bring her back alive when all had lost hope. So Maan pls talk to Mittu when you'll are together alone and resting after settling down at home...So excitedly looking forward to their much needed conversation and what happens after that:):):) Knowing Mittu once she knows what had transpired, she would want to relive it with her Angel na:):):) My Mittu will work her magic on her Angel and make him understand that what they shared was divine:):):)

Thanks alot Indra
Lovely comment

You always make me embarrass with each of your comment
Nut you are right their connection is not of this world..this something which is made in heaven..
Geet even in her unconscious state too trusts him blindly...She knew that he would not let die and would save her..She even reciprocated him when he was not sure if he was doing right or not...
But Maan knew that he had to bring her back at nay cost..No matter he had to cross thin line which was s till between them even after more than a month of wedding..
and don't worry Mitthu hai na
she will not let him live in this guilt..They will definitely come out of it safely and happily
Thanks again for the comment
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaa9

Superb and emotional updates
Really adventurous HM aisa to kisi ka bhi nhi hoga
Maan is guilty but he have to save her
Waiting for geet's reaction of it
Love it
Waiting for next
Cont soon
And plz next part pm me

Thanks neha
chalo I m happy that i was able to give something new😉
wait for few more days for geet's reaction
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Superb

Ram came in a chopper for his kids
N was relieved but still hesitant of their wellness
They decided to build a hospital n school in the village
While Geet did not know about Maan taking their relation ahead only for her survival
Precap, why Maan had to feel guilty it happened for her survival not his force
Continue soon



Thanks rahi
Umm you think that maan did right as he had to save her
But for Maan it was not so right but he was helpless
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

HI...DI...
APNE KAHA U LL GIVE UPDATE ON MONDAY ND DAT DAY I SAID SABAR KA FHAL MEETHA HOGA...BUT YEH NAHI PATA THA ...KI ITNA MEETA KI DOUBLE DHAMAKA UPDATE MIL JAYEGA...MUAAHHH 😳

COMMING TO UPDATE..I HAD READ SOMEWHERE WHEN U WERE WRITING PV U HAD SAID U ARE NOT COMFORTABLE WRITING MUSHY MUSHY SCENES ...BUT DI...THIS WAS EMOTIONAL AS WELL AS HOT 😳 IN ITS OWN WAY...SIRF MAAN KA GUILT BEECH MAIN NA AATA ...
THO MORNING AFTER THE NIGHT WOULD HAVE BEEN SOME NAUGHTY ROMANCE ..WAISE BE GEET THO THI HI SHY SHY...ND HER REACTION WOULD SURELY HAVE BEEN HILARIOUS...PEHLE BE MAAN HAD MISTAKEN AND HAD DISTANCED MITHU FROM HIM NOT ABLE TO CONSIDER MITHU AS HIS WIFE AND NOW ...WHEN THEY CONSUMED THE MARRAIGE AND GEET IS UNAWARE,...HE SHOULD HAVE ENLIGHTENED HER
...
DI U KNOW ME AND MY GUTTER DIMAG...WHEN I HAD READ THE TEASER...ND DER A SCENE...WHERE GEET IS ARGUING WITH MAAN FOR JUMPING IN WATER..I ALL THE TIME READING WAS THINKING NOW GEET WILL SEE HOW INTIMATE DEY ARE AND SHE WILL SSTART HER QN BANK... BUT HOW WAS SHE TO KNOW...PAKAV MAAN NEY ISEY WAPAS SSHIRT PEHNA DIYA... I KNOW U ARE LAUGHING READING MY THOUGHTS ...AUR BE MERA GUTTER MIND NEY SOCHA...BUT MAIN YAHA NAHI LIKHTI ..APKO WATSUPP MAIN BOLTI HU...

OKAY COMMIN TO OR SAY THINKIN FROM MAANS POV...CAN UNDERSTAND HIS PREJUDISE HIS HESITANT ...GIVEN A CHOICE HE WOULD NEVER HAD CHOOSED THIS PATH ...WITHOUT GEETS CONSENT... BUT NOW HE HAD TO BROKE ALL THE BARRIER
SO TO SAVE GEET ...U KNOW DDI. I THOUGHT DEY WONT BE BREAKING THE BARRIER..BUT SITUATION DEMANDED HIM TO TAKE THE ACTION AND GEET IN HER UNCONSCIOUS MIND ...HAD SUCCUMED TO HIS LOVE HAD RESPONDED TO ..HER ANGELS LOVE...
AND GEET LL NEVER GONA FEEL BAD FOR THIS...BUT MAAN THO HAI TUBELIGHT ..ISEY YEH SAMJEGA NAHI KI APNE HI PATNI WHO LOVES U DEARLY ND TO SAVE HER HE TOOK THIS BIG STEP ..ND DER IS NO WRONG ...

NOW JUS LOVED MAAN KA CARE AND LOVE FOR GEET AND NOW GEET IS AWARE THAT SOMETHING IS A MISS ...HOPE DIS CUTE INNOCENT DEVIL LL MAKE MAAN SPILL THE BEAN SOON ..BEFORE THIS GUILT TAKES A TOLL ON DER MARRIED BLISS FULL LIFE...


U KNOW THINKING OF RAM ND HIS REACTION ON KNOWING HIS CHILDREN ARE IN TROUBLE WAS VEERY EMOTIONAL ...U KNOW WAS LISTENING TO SONG... DILBARO OF RAAZI ...ND DAT LYRICS...

Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ikk baar phir se dehleez paar karaa de


ITS LIKE EVEN IF SHE IS MARRIED SHE WILL BE THE PAMPERED DAUGHTER ...ND YAAHA MAAN AND GEET DONO HE ANMOL HAI RAM KE LIYE...
ND HIS FEAR MADE HIM COME TO GEET ND MAAN SO FAST...

VILLAGERS ARE SO DOWN TO EARTH...JUS LOVED DER NATURE AND LOVE ..TO UNKNOWN PEOPLE...

VERY EMOTIONAL PART...PENNED AS ALWAYS BEAUTIFULLY ... WEN I SAY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED ..IT MEANS EVERY EMOTIONS ...BE DER CONSUMPTION...MAAN KA THOUGHTS HIS FEAR ..YET HIS PASSION ..HIS LOVE HIS TEARS...RAM KA CONDITON HIS FEAR...LOVLY VILLAGERS DER CONERN ...GEET KA HIT AND MISS...EVERYTHIN...
LOVLY...
WAITIN FOR NEXT...


OMG
YE COMMENT HAI YA EK AUR UPDATE IN RETURN?
AB ISKA KYA JAWAAB DOON MAIN😲😲😲

i REALLY SO HAPPY THAT I COULD MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY WITH DOUBLE TREAT

DO YOU THINK I M SO PREDTIBLE KI TUMNE J SOCHA WAISA HI HOGA... AGAR AISA HOTA TO M UJHME AUR DUSRON ME KYA FARAK RAH JAATA.. 😉😉

I'M AGREE THAT IT WAS EMOTIONAL..bUT hOT? I DON'T THINK SO..hOT WALA LIKHNA NAHIN AATA MUJHE😳

TUM APNE GUTTER MIND KO CONTROL ME RAKHA KARO DIVYA..BAHUT IDHAR UDHAR DAUDTA HAI😛
EK KAAM AKRTE HAIN TUM EK CHAPTER LIKHO MI KE LIYE JISME YOU VAN POUR ALL YOUR GUTTERMIND IDEAS AND BELIVE ME I WILL DEDICATE IT TO YOU ONLY..ERI INEFFICIANCY BHI PURI HO JAAYEGI TUMHAARE GUTTERMIND KO SATISFY NA KAR PAANE KI😆😆

EVERYONE IS SAYING THAT MAAN DID NOT DO ANY WRONG AND THEY ARE RIGHT TOO BUT JUST THEY NEED TO THINK FROM MAN'S SIDE..HE WHO NEVER CROSSED HIS LIFE EVEN IF IT WAS A KISS FROM HIM THEN THIS WAS VERY BIG STEP WHICH HE HAD TO TAKE ..IT WAS THE DEMAND OF THE SITUATION BUT SHE WAS NOT IN SENSES..AND AFTER THAT SHE FORGOT TOO..NOT HIS DILEMMA IS ABOUT THE SAME THAT HOW WOULD HE TELL HER? IF SHE REMEMBERED EVEN GLIMPSE TOO IT WOULD BE OK AS HE COULD TELL HER WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM BUT SHE WAS ALL BLANK.. SO TO START FROM 0 IS NOT AN EAST TASK FOR NAYONE

NO ONE CAN RAISE ANY QUESTION ABOUT MAAN'S CARE OR LOVE FOR HER...GEET KA PYAAR ..GEET KA SACRIFICE SABKO DIKHTA HAI BUT MAAN KA PYAAR AUR SACRIFICE KISI KO NAHIN DIKHTA ..
BUT DON'T WORRY
GEET IS THERE SO HE CAN NOT STOP HIMSELF FOR LONG AND THEY WOULD SURELY SHARE THEIR HEARTS WITH EACH OTHER
THANKU SOOO SOOO SOOO MUCH FOR THE LOVELIEST COMMENT ON THE UPDATE🤗

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