Originally posted by: Desire6
HI...DI...
APNE KAHA U LL GIVE UPDATE ON MONDAY ND DAT DAY I SAID SABAR KA FHAL MEETHA HOGA...BUT YEH NAHI PATA THA ...KI ITNA MEETA KI DOUBLE DHAMAKA UPDATE MIL JAYEGA...MUAAHHH 😳
COMMING TO UPDATE..I HAD READ SOMEWHERE WHEN U WERE WRITING PV U HAD SAID U ARE NOT COMFORTABLE WRITING MUSHY MUSHY SCENES ...BUT DI...THIS WAS EMOTIONAL AS WELL AS HOT 😳 IN ITS OWN WAY...SIRF MAAN KA GUILT BEECH MAIN NA AATA ...
THO MORNING AFTER THE NIGHT WOULD HAVE BEEN SOME NAUGHTY ROMANCE ..WAISE BE GEET THO THI HI SHY SHY...ND HER REACTION WOULD SURELY HAVE BEEN HILARIOUS...PEHLE BE MAAN HAD MISTAKEN AND HAD DISTANCED MITHU FROM HIM NOT ABLE TO CONSIDER MITHU AS HIS WIFE AND NOW ...WHEN THEY CONSUMED THE MARRAIGE AND GEET IS UNAWARE,...HE SHOULD HAVE ENLIGHTENED HER
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DI U KNOW ME AND MY GUTTER DIMAG...WHEN I HAD READ THE TEASER...ND DER A SCENE...WHERE GEET IS ARGUING WITH MAAN FOR JUMPING IN WATER..I ALL THE TIME READING WAS THINKING NOW GEET WILL SEE HOW INTIMATE DEY ARE AND SHE WILL SSTART HER QN BANK... BUT HOW WAS SHE TO KNOW...PAKAV MAAN NEY ISEY WAPAS SSHIRT PEHNA DIYA... I KNOW U ARE LAUGHING READING MY THOUGHTS ...AUR BE MERA GUTTER MIND NEY SOCHA...BUT MAIN YAHA NAHI LIKHTI ..APKO WATSUPP MAIN BOLTI HU...
OKAY COMMIN TO OR SAY THINKIN FROM MAANS POV...CAN UNDERSTAND HIS PREJUDISE HIS HESITANT ...GIVEN A CHOICE HE WOULD NEVER HAD CHOOSED THIS PATH ...WITHOUT GEETS CONSENT... BUT NOW HE HAD TO BROKE ALL THE BARRIER
SO TO SAVE GEET ...U KNOW DDI. I THOUGHT DEY WONT BE BREAKING THE BARRIER..BUT SITUATION DEMANDED HIM TO TAKE THE ACTION AND GEET IN HER UNCONSCIOUS MIND ...HAD SUCCUMED TO HIS LOVE HAD RESPONDED TO ..HER ANGELS LOVE...
AND GEET LL NEVER GONA FEEL BAD FOR THIS...BUT MAAN THO HAI TUBELIGHT ..ISEY YEH SAMJEGA NAHI KI APNE HI PATNI WHO LOVES U DEARLY ND TO SAVE HER HE TOOK THIS BIG STEP ..ND DER IS NO WRONG ...
NOW JUS LOVED MAAN KA CARE AND LOVE FOR GEET AND NOW GEET IS AWARE THAT SOMETHING IS A MISS ...HOPE DIS CUTE INNOCENT DEVIL LL MAKE MAAN SPILL THE BEAN SOON ..BEFORE THIS GUILT TAKES A TOLL ON DER MARRIED BLISS FULL LIFE...
U KNOW THINKING OF RAM ND HIS REACTION ON KNOWING HIS CHILDREN ARE IN TROUBLE WAS VEERY EMOTIONAL ...U KNOW WAS LISTENING TO SONG... DILBARO OF RAAZI ...ND DAT LYRICS...
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ikk baar phir se dehleez paar karaa de
ITS LIKE EVEN IF SHE IS MARRIED SHE WILL BE THE PAMPERED DAUGHTER ...ND YAAHA MAAN AND GEET DONO HE ANMOL HAI RAM KE LIYE...
ND HIS FEAR MADE HIM COME TO GEET ND MAAN SO FAST...
VILLAGERS ARE SO DOWN TO EARTH...JUS LOVED DER NATURE AND LOVE ..TO UNKNOWN PEOPLE...
VERY EMOTIONAL PART...PENNED AS ALWAYS BEAUTIFULLY ... WEN I SAY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED ..IT MEANS EVERY EMOTIONS ...BE DER CONSUMPTION...MAAN KA THOUGHTS HIS FEAR ..YET HIS PASSION ..HIS LOVE HIS TEARS...RAM KA CONDITON HIS FEAR...LOVLY VILLAGERS DER CONERN ...GEET KA HIT AND MISS...EVERYTHIN...
LOVLY...
WAITIN FOR NEXT...
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