Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 ) - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it, naina is slowly opening up to sameer that's really nice and i love the jealous sameer now waiting for the next update please update soon and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
I already read the next part and now again wait for the next...Excellent update but carving for more...just loving this story to core...please do not complete also soon... but give us wonderful updates daily...

Thanks for this beautiful story of our Samaina with your unique and wonderful thoughts
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmaara

yaar u r too good...u r updating daily n this is what I want!!!

loved their conversation today,, naina has started to open up...
sameer understands that naina blindly trusts him so he doesn't want to keep any secrets from her

rakesh ka to koi story me kuch nhi ho sakta!! hahaha

thanks for the update,,,waiting impatiently for the next one

Thank you so much !! What do you think I was doing during a week long vacation?? 😆 😉 There are characters like Rakesh. Where the daughters don't matter at all because they consider them to be a burden. We think its not there among the educated crowd but the reality is that education doesn't actually help unless people are ready to change their mindset.

A lot more is yet to come...for that you will have to wait a lil more... 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Thank you Anjali!! Karan , is a shade grey...sometimes we need to thank the grey characters , they help in love story . DO you think Sameer would have stayed back if it hadn't been for Karan 😉 ??


I know!! I know!!😆
But a fan's heart is way too biased n sensitive 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33



I know!! I know!!😆
But a fan's heart is way too biased n sensitive😳

🤣 I have always felt that slight shades of grey and subtle sweet nothings between the couple , add flavor to the story. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved it .. very well written..
loved the possessive sameer..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 7 years ago
This update had all the flavors of the season!! Kulfi, pani puri, pizza, burned sabji, and much more 😆
From Naina discussing not so sanskari things with Sameer to making him unknowingly jealous it was a treat to read. Their relationship is budding like a beautiful rose plant😳. Naina, this girl is as transparentas water.

Karan ka twist was unexpected but interesting. The K factor is haunting our leads 😆 But then I am thankful because this will give Naina a chance to see how much Sam cares about her and also give her fam a much needed reality check.

Love how your updates are crisp in writing. Great work Ashu!!👏

Waiting for the next To be Continued😃

Cheers!
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Edited by NikiAries - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved.. our Jealousy Sameer...
Naina is opening up...
Beautiful update...can't wait for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

It was a wonderful update dear.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

I loved this possessive Sameer.. and Naina, she is slowly opening up in front of him 😊

I liked the Bike ride.. her hands were around his waist.. Kaash show mein bhi yeh dikh jaye

She was in totally in blush mode while talking about past incident.. and Sameer was teasing her by taking advantage of her shyness ☺️

She should have told him otherwise he should realize that she loves him since the 11th..

Because of the Karan we got an opportunity to see his jealous side 😆

He didn't leave her alone in the house.. he really care about her.. I loved that part

You write so well that I imagine the whole scenario in front of my eyes.. 👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Update soon

Thanks for the PM

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
This update was so good!
You have introduced a new character, will he have more importance in this story like a grey person or a third angle types? He means harm I guess
The best part of the update for me was Naina telling the memories behind that 'bench'😆Such a tease Naina is, simply waking up Sam's emotions😉
I am liking how Sam is getting Naina out of her reserved side and making her open up to him...and also not forgetting Sam's possessiveness😉 I love it!
Eagerly waiting for the next!
Love,
Shreya

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