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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 1 on next page..😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Mg13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

I am finally here with 1st chappy.feeling difficult to wrote this don't know why, its not happen with other 3 ff.maybe it's too much different concept in my writing 😆

First of all its purely my work of imagination far from reality .if it's assembled with any other works then it will be tottaly coincidence .😳 the name of the places mostly or other things it's just for the story not real one..

FORGIVE FOR All MISTAKES..

Do GIVE YOUR Reviews. .

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Nice update

Poor Geet felling all difficulties

Still all are trying to dominate her

And ask her to become puppet in the name of queen

Prince care for her

But his attitude is more than his care

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Nice start dear

Liked it!!

Geet was leading her life on others command and was irked by the way she is living her life. She didn't like being dictated and wanted freedom to live her life the way she wanted but alas had to obey others being queen of the kingdom. What's wrong with king's deportment??

Thanks for the pm!

Looking forward to the next update

:))

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Sudha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

So this is a King and Queen type story. Interesting and different. Who is the King here? She seems like a neglected queen. I hope there's no twist in the tale and Geet is having an extra marital affair with Maan or something.. bunch of confusions. May be it will get clear with next chapters

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nadia khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Awesome update madam plzzz at least give cs mujhe kych samaj nahi aaraha hai so geet is the queen who is being forced to live the life that is so fake and artificial that it breaks her every single day she resting as she was tired of long gruesome nighks she had this rani seems to know her weakness geet refused to be treated like a toy geet loves her king bbut he always leaves her hungry for more and desires for him remain unfulfill

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maherkhan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

New concept it was superb update
It's like some royal history n like that more interesting...
So at first part we know geet as queen but who is king? Well let me guess geet is nothing without maan so it's defiantly maan sign Khurana but there is some thing wrong why geet not happy?
Update soon dear..,