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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV


Saesha holds nil importance in my story, so be assured and enjoy the short ride of roller coaster. Thanks for giving the feedback of flash back scenes, honestly I was very nervous while adding them for people will be confused and unwanted chaos.
Challenge girls in anything except in eating gol gappas, they're numero uno in the game. I myself have a crazy obsession for gol gappas, can go on and on about them 😆. Will reveal who is behind the door in next update, it is not that far too.
Thanks for the compliment! Gives me fuzzy feeling.
Love,
Nivi!


Me too a gol gappa lover😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

CAUTION:~ The chapter is short, way shorter than my previous updates. But this is all what I wanted to show, hopefully you will forgive me for the length of the update.


Instalment 6 B



"When two hearts are meant to be together,

no matter how long it takes

no matter how far they go

no matter how tough it seems

Love will bring them together,

Bind them to each other forever...

~ ~ ~


Sunheri opened the door hesitantly and to her relief found none of the goons but Neil on the threshold of the house. She welcomed him inside, exhaling her fears with carbon dioxide. Neil gave her a nervous smile before stepping inside the house. The house was in a complete mess, baffling Neil to the core. He turned towards Sunheri and questioned,


'What has happened, Sunheri?'

'Neil wouldn't it be better if we sit down and talk. Please.' Sunheri replied. Neil nodded and strode further till a small chair and made himself comfortable on it.


'What would you like to take?' Sunheri asked, being courteous.

'A glass of water, that should do.'


Sunheri motioned Tara, latter obliged and traced her steps to kitchen. Few moments later, she came back with a glass of chilled water and few biscuits in a tray. She placed it on children's bed and the twin sisters left the arena to give space for Sunheri and Neil to talk.


'Ye sab kya hai, Sunheri?' Neil asked when he heard click of the closed door, indicating at the scattered and shattered things. Sunheri drew a deep breathe inside before replying,

'Iss area ke gunde aaye the apna money collect karne ke liye. Humne mana kiya tha dene se toh unhone ye...' She couldn't complete her sentence yet message reached to the other party.

'kitne time se...' Neil enquired.

'Two years. Since two years this problem arose for us.' Sunheri replied. 'Have some biscuits, naa.' She tried to divert his attention.

'No, it's OK. Thank you.' Neil denied. Unomfortable silence spread across the room.


'Waise bachon ki Jaan didi.. wo kaha par hain.' Neil asked, breaking the silence. Sunheri's eyes grew wide and she began playing with her fingers, which went unnoticed by Neil who was looking towards the other side. Sunheri wondered what to reply when she heard him re-iterating his words,

'Sunheri where is she? Can I meet her?' Neil sounded impatient.

'She..she actually..has gone to the market.' Sunheri put up a serious expression and answered as a matter of fact, when in fact it was anything but the truth.

Sorry for lying Neil! But right now Avni is not in a state where she can meet you. And you too aren't in proper state to understand her reasons. Hope you will forgive me. Sunheri thought with a regret. Neil nodded with a crestfallen face. He stood up, deciding to leave when he turned back again.


'If you need any help, do let me know. No hesitations.' Neil stated. 'Can I have your number, please. Only if you don't mind.' He continued. She dialled his number on her phone as dictated by him. Giving a ring to his mobile, she cut the call immediately.

'Milte hain.' Neil bid adieu to her. Sunheri heaved a sigh of relief seeing him leaving.

Neil turned behind, miserable feeling again creeping inside him. There was none except Sunheri at the threshold but he felt as if his whole existence resided in that house. He looked up towards the blazing hot sun and wondered aloud,


'What is it that pulls me to this house. Why do I feel such an inexplicable emotion when I am leaving? Good lord, please help me.'


'Neil, any problem?' Sunheri questioned. Neil nodded a 'no' and immediately drove off.


Avni stood at the window of her room, too flabbergasted to utter a single word. Neil, her Neil, was there right in front of her eyes in all his flesh and blood hale and hearty, in Kashid, few moments ago at her very own house. Avni rushed to open her room's door to find an equally anxious Sunheri.


'Sunheri----Neil---what is he---doing here.' Avni fumbled owing to the shock she received.

'Avni, calm down. He's gone, don't worry.' Sunheri tried to explain.

'How did he reach here? Does he know that I'm...I'm alive and living here.' Avni voiced her fears.

'Avni please shaant ho ja. Use tumhare baare mein kuch pata nahi hai, hum log kal use mile the Annual Fest mein. He doesn't know about your whereabouts. Tu tension mat le.'

'Sunheri...Neil...' Avni broke down.


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Neil sat on bed, trying to calm himself down. And the speed in which his thoughts swept across him, he couldn't find serenity even for a fraction of second. Ali sat in the typical Indian style on the couch opposite to Neil, reading a magazine. He grew irritated as the silence grew thicker in room. He stood up, dusting off imaginary debris from his pants, marched to sit beside Neil.


'Neil, enough is enough. Why are you behaving like this, what happened to you Neil. You were never like this. Ho kya gaya hai tumhe Neil, jabse Sukoon Ghar ke baare mein suna hai, you became obsessed with its residents, especially some Jaan didi of those kids. Answer me Neil.' Ali vented out his frustration.


'Nahi hai mere paas koi jawab' Neil stood up in anger, 'I don't have answers to any of your questions, Ali. Koi jawab nahi hai mere paas. All that I know and realized is that house is important for me, very important for me. I get strong vibes of Avni's presence in that house. And I will make sure the house and its residents remain safe, sound and happy. At whatever costs I can't lose out the peace I was searching for since last ten years, like a thirsty man in middle of desert searches for water body. That's all I know and wish to know.' Neil stormed off in anger.


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Precap ~

'you wanted a place which oozes out romantic feelings and has homely vibes too, isn't it? Well I found one for you. Sukoon House.'

Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res coz I don't want to be not first...😛
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Oh Sunheri it was such a sunhera chance for AvNeil to meet & u didn't let them take it...why??

Poor Neil...he came so close to the truth & still couldn't reach it...he sounds so...desperate/ broken.

At least he has told Ali whats the pull that Sukoon House has on him...

So Neil has decided to help the residents of the orphanage...he has actively chosen a path thats leading him to Avni...can't wait for them to finally meet after all these years.

Poor Avni too...breaking down like this on seeing her Neil outside her house...

Nivi...next update asap coz daag achhe hotey hain tadpana nahi😉
Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res... can't be first coz Paayal took dt spot.Sob sob.
Unres

So finally Neil reached his destination but missed his manzil .Singer is to blamed here...kidding .She did handle d situation very nicely.Liked how Neil was eager to meet Jaan and how he could feel d something pulling him back to Summon house.

Avni saw Neil!!! The way she broke down on seeing him and how she was rushing out ...loved dt part.Shows how much she still loves him.

You made me miss Ali again.He is such a good frnd and d much needed companion to Neil ryt now.

Waiting to see how they finally meet.
Edited by drbeth - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
@Payal @Tapasi ~ Chill girls! This isn't any competition. Your feedback matters the most, not the order in which it comes.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

@Payal @Tapasi ~ Chill girls! This isn't any competition. Your feedback matters the most, not the order in which it comes.

Matters to us😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yes it does & I m FIRST!! Yay!!!

@Tapasi😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Res... can't be first coz Paayal took dt spot.Sob sob.


Want tissues?😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yes😭
Chocolates would b grt too.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Yes😭
Chocolates would b grt too.

R u PMSing too?

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