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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
What a fantastic chapter...
>> Thanks!
Jalal is emerging and evolving as an emperor
>> Yes!😳
He picked up a way where he did not defame Bairam Khan
But does Bairum Khan think before he insults the orders from Jalal ?
>> No he does not. He is blind in his own ego.🥱

When Jalal said he can manage his crown alone, it was an entire message for Bairum Khan
>> Yes!😎
Though Maham played her politics against Bairum Khan, Adham is also very much under Jalal's radar
>> Hmm
I liked the decision that Jalal took for farmers being empathetic enough is also a role of an Emperor
>> He is playing his role of a benevolent emperor.
Waiting for part 2
Continue soon..
>>I have updated the second part.😳

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Jaldi jaldi part 2 bhi update kar do. Part one was mindblowing yaar. Why do chapters have to end😭

Thanks dear. 😳 Now read part 2😆

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres Di
Amazing chappy Di
Update soon Di

Thanks

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: _shinchan_
Superb update
Thanku for pm

Thanks😳

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Awesome update
Jalal is taking action against his Khan baba now
Eagerly waiting for part 2

Yeah, Jalal is strictly handling his Khan Baba😳

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Hermione Granger

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Posted: 7 years ago

#566

yr kya krte ho aap.. bs kamaal karte ho..
fantastic part this is.. vry beautifully written
both are heading to vrindavan..
let's see aage kya hota h..
btw thnks for pm
update nxt part asal

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swetiii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#567

Amazing

JJ both on their way to vrindavan... City of love

Wow

I am so excited

Waiting for their meeting

Update asap buddy

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: swetiii
Amazing
JJ both on their way to vrindavan... City of love
Wow
I am so excited
Waiting for their meeting
Update asap buddy

Yes... They have the same destination. 😉

Thanks dear

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous
yr kya krte ho aap.. bs kamaal karte ho..
fantastic part this is.. vry beautifully written
both are heading to vrindavan..
let's see aage kya hota h..
btw thnks for pm
update nxt part asal

Awww 😳

Thanks dear. yes they are going towards the same destination.😃

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Senapatichandri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#570

hmmm porlam...
jaha bolibo sotto bolibo... ETA bhebei likhchi...

part one is good... really good... the difference of thought of how a king an emperor should see his subject is clearly visible...

one side Bairam Khan who is tough and crual towards subject.. he will not show mercy if there is any scope to increase the boundary of the empire... if any scope to improve the Army or the battelion...

but he sometimes forgot that for a king an emperor should see his subject whom he deal... their satisfaction their comfort first...

and may be that is the cause that Bairam Khan is an Army general not an emperor...

in the view of Jalal there is two things important... one is his subject and his family... but sometimes if you are an emperor u have to sideline the family to ensure the security and safety of subject... and that is the reason of Jalal and Bairam Khan's difference...

now coming to part 2...

I just love the part of jalal's thought... just love the way u described what is his thinking... how he is missing Purnima right now when no one is not beside him when he try to take his own decision...

but I don't like the part of Jodha... somewhere is was a bit disbalance in compair of the Jalal part... I felt u youll write about how Jodha missing Jalal... but u didn't mention.. so somewhere its odd and not up to the flow...may be it's important for the story but somewhere I felt it odd and uncanny.

now waiting for Jalal Jodha meeting...

best of luck and update as soon as possible cz the story is loosing its charm somewhere...