AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A} - Page 10

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AvNeil SS ~ Colliding Each Other...Again

There's one more of Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga, the song seems to never leave me. After Atif Aslam, only Arjit Singh could capture me with his rich baritone. Promise this is the last time the song will ever repeat. Is baar ke liye mujhe maaf kar do.

And one more thing, few AvNeil scenes I have written are imaginary or consider as one of wishlist scenes. So pls don't ask when was it aired. Happy Reading!!

Instalment 6A

Love isn't supposed to be easy, it's supposed to be worthwhile. Distance is never an issue, when your love is true.

Same Night

Neil and Ali's Suite

Ali sat on the bed, surfing in the net something mundane while Neil was with his headphones, laptop and the music player on the coffee table in their suite. He connected the player to his laptop and set the head phones over his ears.

'soti hui aankhon ko salaam humara

meethe sunehere sapno ko adaab humara

dil mein rahe pyaar ka ehsaas sadaa zinda

aaj ki raat ka yehi paigaam humara...

Welcome back to the show 'Woh Lamhe'. Shuru karte hain us panne se jaha meri daastan humesha ke liye badal gayi. Woh ladki jise main samundar ke kinare mila, raat ke andhere mein baat kiya, who ladki meri hone wali mangetar ki best friend thi. Ise kismat kahein ya kuch aur, hum baar baar takrate rahein. Kabhi humari maa ki jaan bachane ya phir uske bhai ko saza dilane mein. Main jaha jaata tha use waha pata tha, ek ajeeb rishta-sa jud gaya tha humare beech aur jaane-anjaane mein wahi rishta humesha hume ek doosre ke paas laake khada kar deta tha. Akele mein use arrest karne ki baatein karta tha aur kisi se uske khilaf ek shabd nahi sun pata tha. Strange naa? This was just the beginning of our story, tune into 'Woh Lamhe' to know more about my story. Until then, this song is for you,

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga (X4)

Pal bhar tumhein na suchun toh

Dhedhkanein tarasne lagti hain

Tumko joh dekh lun nam aankhein bhi

Haule se hasne lagti hain

Dil se dil ka ye mel sanam

Joh kal yeh ho jaye kam

Halat bigad bhi jaye agar

hum dono bichad bhi jaye agar

Yaadon ke chaand shikare par

main tumse milne aaunga

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

main phir bhi tumko chahunga...

Resting the head phones on the table, Neil leaned against the chair lost in deep thoughts.

'kya soch raha hai Neil' Ali's question brought him out of his reverie. Neil stared at him for few seconds, and then replied 'nahi, kuch important nahi hai.' quietly adding, 'kal Sukoon Ghar jana hai, toh soch raha tha usi ke baare mein...'

Neil walked towards the bed, occupying the other side and covering himself with a blanket.

'kuch hai, kuch toh hai Ali jo mujhe us ghar ke taraf, un bachchon ki jaan didi ke taraf le jaa rahi hai. Aisa lag raha jaise koi dor hai jo mujhe us taraf se kheench rahi hai. This inexplicable feeling I have been getting ever since we stepped here, sab kuch aisa lag raha hai jaise khuda ka koi khel ho aur main buri tarah se us mein fas gaya hoon.' Neil sighed, pouring his heart out to his confidante. Ali could not come up with any reply, so chose the best option ; to remain silent and give an assuring pat on Neil's shoulder.

'I guess you badly need a sleep, Neil. It is way past midnight and these conversations can wait. Good night.' Ali wished and faced the opposite side, switching off the bed lamp on his side leaving Neil to deal with his thoughts.

Sukoon House

The entire house was asleep except for one restless soul who did not find an ounce of sleep she was awaiting for. Her entire body ached, weary due to the hectic schedule the day was filled with. Avni strolled in the empty street of their colony, rubbing her palms against each other to feel warm with cold wind blowing incessantly.

She reached to the other end of the street where a children's park was situated, albeit a closed one.

'dada, gate khol di jiye please.' She requested the watchman, who was at the back gate. The older man nodded, opening the gates for her to enter. She walked towards the play items and found herself a seat on a swing. Oscillating it gently, she pushed herself into a puddle of sweet memories.

'Neil thoda zor se karo naa.' Avni giggled, enjoying the push her husband was appying on the swing she was swaying on. Neil mirthfully shook his head, giving a larger push to the swing.

'I love you, muah.' She blew an air kiss which Neil was quick to accept. While the swing came back, he kissed her temple bringing a wide grin on Avni's face.

Avni came back from her thoughts realizing the swing did not move anymore. She stood up, clasped her hands together in front and strided to a small garden allocated in the park. The plants stood in all their glory, buds ready to bloom into fresh and fragnant flowers by morning.

Bidding a bye to the watchman and apologising for disturbing him at midnight, she marched back to her house when she chanced upon a gol gappe wala with his stall and a couple feeding each other. Avni smiled reminiscing their good old times, time before they were even married.

'To celebrate our friendship and togetherness' Avni rose a spicy water filled gol gappa in air clinking with Neil's, before gobbling the entire thing at one go while Neil donned an amused expression on his face. Avni threw him a quizzical look while Neil shrugged off in nothingness.

''kya hua' She asked, with mouthful of the puri.

'soch raha tha tum ladkiyan itna kha kaisi leti ho?' Neil replied. Avni shot an angry gaze at him but he was in no mood to back down.

'I mean, look at you. You had six while I could finish only two gol gappas.'

'So...is it my fault that you can't eat!' Avni growled. Neil shook his head, stunned with her Lady Don avatar.

'Good, ab chup chap khao aur chalo.'

Avni came back to the real world, realizing she was at the threshold of her house. Unlocking the doors, she tip-toed inside to her room and called it a night.

Morning

Sukoon House, Kashid

The mornings in Sukoon Ghar were always chaotic, with Avni and the trio girls waking up the entire kiddo gang sparing Saesha and Samrat, bearing their tantrums and getting them ready for school.

'Mowgli, stop! That is my lunch box.' Pinky yelled at him while the latter dodged from her, mischief sparkling in his wide, innocent orbs. Watching the scene unfolding in front of them, Sunheri entered between them.

'Mowgli, give her lunch box back.' She ordered. Mowgli shook his head, refusing outrightly to give her back the box. Sunheri narrowed her eyes towards, trying to threaten him.

'Main nahi doonga, didu. Mujhe yeh wali box bohot achi lagti hai and isne' pointing towards Pinky, 'isne last time bhi yahi wali lekar gayi thi school. Mujhe is baar chahiye' Mowgli gave his one of the best puppy face looks, softening Sunheri. Reluctantly nodding at him, she consoled Pinky.

'come on kids, breakfast is ready.' Avni announced from the living room. Children, dressed in their prim, ironed uniforms, seated themselves on chairs surrounding the small dining table. Avni made proper bread toasts for them with a glass of milk beside their plates.

'jaan didi, ye doodh bilkul ganda hai. Yuck!' Mowgli made faces seeing the worst ever drink (according to him) of the world in front of his eyes.

'kaise bhi ho, peena toh tumhe padega hi Mowgli. Aur yeh' She pointed at his sulky expressions, 'mere saamne bilkul nahi chalenge.Drink it silently, otherwise this week you will not get your share of chocolates.' Avni threatened. Forging fake tears, Mowgli quickly finished his share of milk and looked at her with expectant eyes.

'I'll get chocolates at evening. Now all of you go, you're getting late for school. Saesha and Samrat, all the best for your tests. Ache se likhna, haan.' Avni stated. Saesha and Samrat bent to take her blessings.

Waving at the kids as they boarded their school bus, Avni and Sunheri re-entered their house and began arranging scattered things with Tara and Sitara's assistance. Avni was arraging the book shelf near the main door when it sprung open, baffling Avni and others. Fear crept in them as three hulky men marched inside their home.

'kyun aaye ho aap phir se?' Sunheri's voice quivered while asking. By then, Avni reached to Sunheri's side.

'apna fees lene' One of the men spoke in plain yet threatening tone.

'but we paid it last week, isn't it. Kyun pareshan karke rakha hai aapne?' Avni stepped in this time. The man shot her an angry look while the other spoke, 'de rahe ho ki nahi?'

Avni stood unaffected and made her stance clear infuriating the men. They walked past the girls and in a blink of second caused havoc in the house; reducing the furniture to ground, shattering toys, while the girls watched in horror.

'Please don't do this. Please.' Sunheri fell to her knees, requesting them to not do so but they paid no heed to her words. Avni immediately brought out their little savings and handed them over to the goons.

'pehle hi de dena chahiye tha, itni tabahi nahi machti.' The goons remarked before leaving. Girls sat on the floor with a thump, eyes closed with despair and fear.

'main andar jaa rahi hoon, Sunheri' Avni stood up, took small steps till her room and bolted the door afterwards.

The bell rang once more, alarming the girls in living room. ...

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As much as I wanted to continue, the other sadist part of me wanted to leave in a cliff hanger. Now before I get bashed for leaving it like this, running off with my boriya bistar samet ke.

Adios!

Nivedita

With this off air news floating around the forum, I feel very upset and the writer in me is not able to write anything. Why only our show, man. There are several other useless and insanely stupid shows which deserve to go off air. I really don't want to lose this show. Audience pls watch the show at 9 om and convey it to the channel that people ARE interested in the show and that ratings will be better within days. For now, I'm stalling all the updates. Extremely sorry if anybody is upset, but I just can't tolerate all this crap going on. Apologies.

I'm first! Yay!!

Second here😃

Originally posted by: paayaal

I'm first! Yay!!

Unres

Both Avni & Neil are feeling restless coz they are finally, after all these years, near each other, unaware of it physically, but their soul is feeling itz mate presence!

Obv Ali thinks Neil needs sleep😆 coz he can't feel the deep pull that these 2 are feeling!

Hmmm...m guessing its Neilz on the other side of the door & wud b the one helping them out of this gunda situation!

Can't wait for the next update...

@Tapasi @Radiant_Eyes - will wait to hear your feedback.

Such a cliffhanger man !

Originally posted by: drbeth

Second here😃

Res

Unres

Der wasn't much Saesha😃.Thnk you fr dt.

So d pull is getting stronger and both of them can feel it but cnt explain it.

Bechara Ali is clueless abt whats happening.How else can he reassure Neil.

Loved the two flashback scenes.Both were completely new.

Especially liked d gol gappa one😆.Girls and der love for gol gappa remains unchallenged😆.What Neil doesn't know is dt girl's hv a bigger appetite when it comes to gol gappas😆.

Liked how carefree Avni was here and this being a scene before marriage is what makes it more adorable.

Cliffhanger!!!! Waiting to see who's behind d door😉

Btw ur writing style is impressive.

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Such a cliffhanger man !

Ali must feel neil has gone crazy because of sleeplessness . How can he feel what Neil is going through .

That both imagination was so cute . Were they flashback or her wishful thinking . Either way it was cute . Gol gappa😆 Though I have never had I have seen the craziness for it . Girls have always a big tummy when it comes to it .

Is it Neil behind the door ?