Professional Review of The First Scene of Today's Episode!

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: 111192
Ayesha i think you are about to leave this forum😭😭...all good writers left this forum one by one once i become use to good posts by them be it caroline, popiness, foresight😭

Aww Renu.. 🤗You are so sweet.. ❤️

Abhi tou mehfil jawaan hai, haseen hai! 😉

(Reference song: Tu jo nahi hai tou, kuch bhi nahi hai...from the movie Woh Lamhay)

At the moment, I am totally hooked to this forum and you all.. 😆 and I think i am a loyal forum vaasi, (until the show stoops low )😉 So i plan to stay here, in sha Allah..

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AngelicNee
beautifully written... 😳

Thank you buddy.. 😊❤️

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: pranurosid
Waah Ayesha👏..Kya explanaition diya tha aapne👍🏼..Ek dum Mazo aagayo❤️😃

Thankkk you Pranu.. 😊😊🤗

Bass dekh lou.. Uss waqt my mind was totally stuck on this scene... aik ghanta laga ker soch soch ker i wrote this post. Iski wajeh se abhi tak jaag ker apne novel ka chapter likhna para..😛 Kher, i am going to sleep now for a couple of hours... So milte hain, break ke baad! 😉

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Subah ke 4 baje aise haseen khayaal!!!
Mashallah aapke haath kahan haiii
Unse hum handshake karna chaahte hai 😆
Kyaa rang laayi hai aapki shabdon ki kaareegari ayesha 👏
Subhanallah.
Aapne unn kuch lines ko iss kadar humse wapas se milwaya, ki humei bhi thode pyaar ka ehsaas hone ko hai aaya.
Ab iske aage aur kya likhe
Hum mein itna professionalism kahan 😉

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Are Ayesha tum ne to meri dil ki bat bole de.

Superb post my friend, agree with you.👍🏼

P.S. I am reading your Beyond the Realms(finished chapter 9).

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 111192
Ayesha i think you are about to leave this forum😭😭...all good writers left this forum one by one once i become use to good posts by them be it caroline, popiness, foresight😭

Yeah, thats true 😔

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nancy505
Are Ayesha tum ne to meri dil ki bat bole de.
Superb post my friend, agree with you.👍🏼

P.S. I am reading your Beyond the Realms(finished chapter 9).

I am on chapter 7 😉

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VARUNI2014

@VARUNI2014

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Beautifully written I am reading it again and again simultaneously watching yesterday episode

And reg my telling ratan becoming mad ..don't take it literally I mean he craves so much for her ..he will suffer that's how I want CV to do ..I don't want Diya to be desperate and agree the moment he proposes that's what I meant by stone hearted

I want Diya to look in business attire i.e that suits and all I want her to move out of kesarmahal and get in to her profession I don't want her to stay at her dad house pining for ratan

Don't know what CV has in their mind

But what ever end of day will watch for their chemistry which is the best seen ever on big screen or small screen ..kajal sharukh chemistry is nothing before rohit teju chemistry

I am addicted to it so no matter what crap they show I will watch for rohit and teju

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Subah ke 4 baje aise haseen khayaal!!!
Mashallah aapke haath kahan haiii
Unse hum handshake karna chaahte hai 😆
Kyaa rang laayi hai aapki shabdon ki kaareegari ayesha 👏
Subhanallah.
Aapne unn kuch lines ko iss kadar humse wapas se milwaya, ki humei bhi thode pyaar ka ehsaas hone ko hai aaya.
Ab iske aage aur kya likhe
Hum mein itna professionalism kahan 😉

Hahahha.. Surbhi,🤣 Why did you sound like that creepy guy who wrote to Pakeeza (Meena Kumari ) that, "Yeh paaon zameen per na rakhiye ga, mailay hojayeinge!!" 😆😆 Aisi shayeri kyun ker rahy hai? 😆😆

Yeh lain mere hath.. Handshake ke liye haazir hai..

Apko pyar se humkinaar ker paye,

mere liye tou bass yehi buht hai...

Apki lafzon ki miqdaar se kia farq parta hai...

is dil ke liye tou bass...

aik lafz harf e muhabbat ka hi buht hai!😃

yeh on the spot aamad apkay shairaana mizaaj ko dekh ker ayi hai ... qabul kijiye!

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

I am on chapter 7 😉

Areyyy Thats soo cool.. My buddies are reading my book!

You guys can comment over there also. Wattpad has an inline comment option if you like one sentence, or theres a correction you want to be made, you can mention it there. If you like it enough, you can press that star button to give each chapter a vote and you can share its link with your friends.. :) But iski koi compulsion nahi hai. Accha lagay tabhi vote kerna.. 😆

Also guys when Alisa gets to Azamgarh...do let me know if i got everything correct (Surbhi this is for you...Nan tou India mien nahi rehty)

Also follow my profile there so that you get my chapter updates regularly.. 😊 And when you do tou apne apko introduce bhi kerna if your profiles are not in your name.. 😃

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