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Cradle song

Teeku heard about the Loha Mandi office move first thing that morning. She had no idea Harit was planning that. Lakshmi was not happy one bit.

She did not blame Teeku for it but was fearing Harit would encounter danger.

"Sarkari vaqeel ban jaate to theek tha. Ab yeh pro bono pehle hi raat ki neend khatam kar chuki hain, aur oopar se yeh naya daftar Lakshmi began to cry softly

"Abhi pakka nahi hai Ma, hamari duty aaj bas 4 baje taq hain, hum sab dekh aayen? she asked Teeku

"Chandu ko bhi laana hai she mumbled

"Chandu ki itni chinta na Srishti ne keen a Hemant ne, dono chal basey Lakshmi sobbed

Teeku began to cry

"Ma... yeh nayin hain, inko bura lag raha hai rehne dein aap Suman whisperes

"Maaf karna beta, " Lakshmi sniffled

Teeku nodded in a daze

When she went to her room she texted Harit

"Are u buying a new office? she texted

He didn't respond almost until lunch

He called her and chuckled "Aap hamey yeh keh saktin thi, ki hum call kar lein

"Haritt

"Avantika... I am considering it

"Whyyy

"That's a strong why

"Your mother is distraught she said softly

"You are actually on her side? he smiled

"How can you be any safer?

"Can we talk about it at dinner please?

"Aap hamey yeh kahen ki yes or no

"Umm.. yes he said slowly

"But Ma said Loha Mandi is a bad part of town

"Everyone I work with is bad one way or another. I offer legal help to people that cannot afford it Avantika

"But why would you go to a dangerous place?

"Umm... I don't know how to explain this, can we talk over dinner?

"Are you going to this place today itself? she tried not to cry

"Oh no... I am not... I am not "I am not going to do this without talking with you first

"Well you did... everyone knows.. and I didn't

"Avantika, I had to tell Bauji because we talking about making changes to visitor hours downstairs

"All this is so confusing to me she was frustrated and agitated

"OK.. listen to me... lets go eat out, we can talk

"Aisi kya baat hai ki aap hamey room mein nahi keh sakte?

"Waise hamari biwi hamare kamre mein nahi rehtin he said succinctly

She went quiet... trying to come up with an argument

"Aap Chandu kea age kuch sochne ya sun ne ki icchha nahi rakhtin he said frustrated

"That is not true she began to cry

"Then I must not be seeing it he said bluntly

"Baad mein baat kar lenge she hung up softly

Alka took Lakshmi and her to Loha Mandi Harshu had sent her the location

The neighborhood was seedy, the buildings were run down and the area was not gentrified

Avantika became even more nervous and unsure about the rapid development around her husband's work life

She had blindly entered into the marriage with only one goal in mind, Chandu

Just when she was falling for her husband, she was being awakened to the not so sophisticated work he did for a living

Her brothers traveled by Lexus and Mercs and worked in air conditioned corner offices with the latest technology and tools at their finger tips

Armed guards patrolled the factories and home day and night

Harit was UK educated and trained, looked the part but spoke rustic Hindi and sifted through smelly oily jaydaad ke kagaz and bhains ke karje ka parchha and ek acre soybean ke dastavej, police ki laathi maar ke fotoo.

She returned home no more relaxed or illuminated than she was that morning

She missed him intensely and craved for him. She didn't have a job, she spent the day thinking about him, unlike him

When ever she heard a man's voice in the hallway she thought he had returned home soon

It was indeed a cold awakening from all the senseless kissing last night

She called her mother distressed

"Ma I don't even like that neighborhood

"He has to go bache not you

"But I mean.. Teeku struggled to communicate that she was growing feelings for him and could not bear to see him endanger his life

"Where does Dad's lawyer have his office?

"Haha... three places in Roorkee, it's a big law firm from Delhi I think Himani chuckled

"Does Dad know anything about pro bono? Teeku asked

"I bet your husband knows Himani scoffed

"MAAA... I am serious

"TALK TO HIM... Take him out on a date Himani hissed

"I do talk to him... I asked him if he was moving to Loha Mandi

"Umm... Teeku... kaise samjhaayen beta... Try to get close. He wont bite Himani said carelessly

Teeku turned bright red. She knew he DID. She had scars to prove it

"How do u know? she said weakly

"Dad aur bhai dono, teeno ne investigate kiya hai, he has no history of abuse. Your Dad's cousin that lives in Knightsbridge, checked his UK history thoroughly through a private eye

"What did they find? Teeku smiled mischievously

"Not funny Teeku... He apparently had long hair, and hung out in pubs a lot

"Any girlfriends I should know about? Teeku bit her lower lip

"You are not serious about this relationship are you? Himani was not pleased

"Maatey... maatey... I am kidding Teeku begged hurriedly

"He is a good looking man. Aap Dilli rehkar bigad gayin hai, you have seen too many flashy boys wearing designer logos zipping in BMWs Harit has a very laid back sense of clothing in his college days based on the pictures Dhruv sent me a week ago Himani went all out in defense

"Black and greys ko aap laid back kehti hain?

"Umm.. that's mean... I will ask Anshuman (Shyam's cousin) to send u some pictures, he looks like a GQ model

Teeku's heart raced

"Beard and vintage glasses and lounging by a pub?

"How do u know?

"Hum bas speculate kar rahe hain

"I don't like your tone beta. I want a grandkid in 10 months Himani said bluntly

Teeku rolled on her bed laughing hysterically

"You are quite OTT she said gasping

"I don't want you to grow up, and yet I do Himani choked

Teeku calmed down

"Ma... I feel out of place here she said sincerely

"Give it time... You are so giving and kind and accepting beta Himani wept

"But...

"You married a good man

"He is still a lawyer Teeku chuckled sniffling

"That he is... "He is Himani sighed

"Ma...

"Does he pay you attention? Is he interested in you? Himani asked softly

"Hmmm Teeku nodded

Himani's eyes sparkled as she displayed a long suppressed ray of light

Teeku's phone pinged with a quote from her mother, as she was in the shower getting ready for her dinner date

What does little birdie say
In her nest at peep of day?
Let me fly, says little birdie,
Mother, let me fly away.
Birdie, rest a little longer,
Till thy little wings are stronger.
So she rests a little longer,
Then she flies away.

~ Cradle Song by Sir Alfred Tennyson

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Posted: 7 years ago
I guess Hairit might have to first time give in to his wife's demand of not moving to loha Mandi.
This will be first for him and her.
I want them to get done with discussion and enjoy their time together.
Looking forward to dinner date and reaction of Vaidya's about the date.
Thank you Nisha.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful transition for Teeku... From marrying for Chandu to physical attraction to concern about her husband !

Cradle Song - Lovely Note from Himani !

Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Delightful update Nisha!
Hopefully Harit will rethink his decision based on Teeku's reaction? Both of them think the other is not interested in them...so strange 😆

Loved the conversation between Teeku and Harit! 👍🏼 I cannot believe Teeku put the phone down rather than continue the conversation though you do want to pick your battles (for ones that you can win) with a lawyer 😆

Lovely conversation between Teeku and Himani-I really enjoyed the mother and daughter relationship. The poem was really beautiful.
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Loved it Nisha, especially the cradle song, kids grow at such rapid pace feel like holding on to them . Seeing the changes in my son in the past few months and the coming changes in my daughter ...hmm

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