AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 54

Originally posted by: Ankita713

I have full faith on your ideas So glad to know that. and I just loved this part. Thank u so much Keep going! And yes do update soon!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

mind blowing update

Originally posted by: sushfiza

Emotional one

I'd say both are right at their places Yes exactly. Thank u for understanding.

Avni felt betrayed which is very genuine

Any girl in her place would hv felt d same And all her embeded insecurities didnt help either.

At the same time poor neil has nt done any wrong

Just followed his heart He cant be blamed either. He has done the correct thing too since its not a crime to love and find that person

The main concern is fr neela maa

Will avni b able to forgive her Ahaa, something to look forward too, isnt it.?

Fantastic write up

Way to go girl

I didnt realise when it came to end of this part Aww thank u so much for all the praises.

Do update soon

Originally posted by: rinku95

Awesome
Now what will Avni do?
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Hey Riya Hey Safia

Such a beautiful chapter Awww, thank u so much I would say I am Team AvNeil my heart goes out for both of them equally Same here, no baising and no favouring. , I understand Avnis emotions and the shock also the feeling of slight betrayal but at the same time Neil's intentions were never to hurt her He was Just In Love and you know what they say everything is fair in love so he did what his heart asked him to This is exactly what i wanted to convey. Neil is nowhere to be blamed for anything still Avni's overreaction is also justified. so I hope they talk and sort out everything both are emotional and sensible people. Bingo. U hit the right string over there. Lets just hope aesa hi ho. 😉

Coming to your writing I am fan 👏 Awww, Fan is such a big word. I am just happy that u enjoy the story and my writing too. absolutely brilliant work especially in this chapter they way wrote about AvNeil emotions so detailed that I could picture adiza performing that scene and nailing it Blame the detailed freak in me, this is the advantage of being an ardent reader, u covey what u expect as a reader.😉 thank.u for all ur appreciations can't wait for the next update

Much love
Safia

Originally posted by: canzasana

Thank you for updating My pleasure 😊these day everything about Neil is very emotional😭 Can understand, totally , I fell pain for both Avni and Neil, is she going to talk about this with her gang, since neela also broke her trust🤔 Good point, but who knows she may not need her gang's support this time. There maybe someone else to comfort her. 😉 *hint time nicely done. great job plz update soon🤗. I want to know wht will happen next. also 1 April is coming, wht will Avni or Neil do just a thought.😉 i didnt get the context of this line.

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome chappy riya.. Thank u so much buddy. .how could u manage to write such an amazing chapter always dear...hats off to u dear ...👏👏 I just sit and write whatever my brain commands me to. 😉 it was so intense that i was crying when neil was crying...bechara neil bedard sanam ki vajah se dard m hai😭😭.. Yes poor soul is facing the wrath of sherni .koi nhi i trust u riya...tum jaldi hi amazing twists and turns laake story or bhi tasty bna dogi...loved it babes.. Ahhaaa. Now that is something too amazing. And yes i do have few in my mind. 😉 .plz ab next update dedo...intzaar nhi ho rha mujhse😳[B] It will be up very soon.

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Any girl who is in Avni's place will definitely feel betrayal , anger , pain and deceit . Here it has come in a way crushing on her as she never expected Neela of all to hide it from her . As you have explained in words the person who defined the word mother . This is what has escalated the issue level up than we expected . Yes, Exactly. It has the only two persons whom she gravely trusted, so it was bound to happen. I am glad you agree to my POV Her past has nothing to do with this as Avni is a person who loses her rationality when things like this happens and goes into her past shutting herself from anyone or any feeling . Glad to see you guys can connect to her character very precisely. I am loving it In spite of all this she couldn't hate or scream or be angry or run away from Neil seeing how distraught he was . Honestly speaking if I were there I would have lost my rationality much before Avni . That is because of the connecrion she harbour with this guy, more alaong the lines of Love but she is yet to realise it. Abishek has done his job well but any girl who comes across her photos which is taken sneakily will definitely think the guy was stalking her all these days . well yeah that true but here the case was much different as Avni was hurt coz he lied to her taking into confidence her own mother.

Neil💔I don't have words to explain his state . He exactly doesn't know for what she is mad . He definitely must have expected this sort of reaction from her given he knows her past and trust issues . Neil knows her very well to expect her to be mad in her impulse and even shut him off to not listen to him, but how he will proced with this is something interesting to read. Right.?

This situation has broken both hearts . I feel bad for both . Mee too 😔 Neil's family will be more confused than anyone on earth . Think if she learns this after marriage . The damage is the same but intensity is different. Better late than never . One way it is good that she learnt and will solve this issue . Bingo, Exactly why i brought everything early. Thats the main postive thing that can be extracted out of this fiasco.