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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Fabulous update!!

Loved it sooo much ❤️

They kissed bechari ri ghabra gayi thi bt finally he did.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

i am so incredibly sorry for randomly dropping off the grid! I have 250 messages to go through and my boss is pregnant🤢 which means I don't get to go home. ah enough of my sob story and lets get to your profoundly interesting one! (imma comment while reading else I forget half the things I wanna talk about🥱)

Trust Gauri to be the incessant chatty Kathy and a part of me wonders if this is her ingenious idea of torturing the arrogant brooding and extremely sexy man😳 sitting right beside her 😆

oohh my effing God! she made him laugh! goodness... that was fast👏

research done right! you have been to the hills haven't you girl?

personal photographer!! haahahahhahahah I'm sure he is never going to delete those pictures! aha!

awww omg! he bought her clothes! hes such a severus snape! hard outside gooey inside 😳

you just cannot deny a girl the pleasure of bargaining while shopping! else its sooo... incomplete!😛

oh! wow.. incredibly done! the last part. the build up was perfect to the T! the boat ride, car ride, om's-arms-ride and finally ! THE KISS😳

BEAUTIFUL! cannot wait for the next update👏

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@Zola029

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

The Jab we met part on part 4 got me on the floor ! 🤣

Amazing update !

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Oh savi my pyaaariii Jiji you always manage to make me blush and smile! You know how much I love you ❤️ and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for dedicating this AMAZING and lovely chapter 😳

You knew I was waiting like a child for his presents on Christmas for this kiss and the way you made it happen 😳 WAS JUST PERFECT

I must say It was very cute seeing Om slowly opening up to Gauri, though he tried to hide his smile whenever she looked away it was adorable seeing them enjoying the sight seeing tour!

How he even asked the driver to buy her cloth so she could change was very considerate of someone who claims to be annoyed by her presence, He claims to be annoyed by her but he never seems to actually try to stay away

Instead he finds himself being drawn to her over and over again!

you slowly started killing me when they went on that boat and everything just was perfect and then they looked at each other slowly leaning in to each other and then BOOM 😭 nothing

and I though tokay well maybe next time

The drive home was too adorable with Gauri falling asleep and him feeling comfortable enough to rest his cheek on her head once he slept. It was unconsciously done but something his heart desired without him knowing

And then Om carrying her like a bride to their room and placing her on the bed.

Even in her dreams she wasn't ready of letting go, she knew he was engaged but she couldn't fight the attraction she felt( and you know in real live I would kill anyone who would do something like that with my husband to be but it's fiction and I hope people remember that)

anyway it was lovely seeing him being so close to her and GAURI WAKING UP KISSING HIM

you killed me right there😳 Because she thought she was dreaming, and then before she could apologize he kissed her...and you took my heart with you ending there

Can't wait for the next chapter 😳

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Awww its beautiful update savi😳

I just loving this ss❤️

Their day out was

Omkara realized so much things about gauri in the car han when gauri and gulabh uncle were talking 😆😆

His behaviour changing towards gauri😳..he's just like coconut 😛

He care for gauri but didn't want to show..even he asked gulabh uncle to buy cloths for her

Han .gulabh uncle..he's such a nice person..i loved him too

I loved how she fall asleep resting her head on his shoulder and how he missed chatterbox😆😆

They kissed☺️ why you ended there😛

I loved the way you penned down..great job

Can't wait to read next chapter..

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GumnaamHaiKoii

@GumnaamHaiKoii

Stunner

+ 34

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Really loved the update. I could imagine Shrenal in this... <3

Gulabh is love ❤️

But u cant leave us at cliffhanger...Not fair dear 😭

Waiting desperately for Easter ...

Continue soon

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GumnaamHaiKoii

@GumnaamHaiKoii

Stunner

+ 34

Posted: 8 years ago

#227

By the you are one of my fav writers on this forum...

Keep up the good work 👍🏼

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Sumita18

@Sumita18

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Savina beautiful update

Can't wait to read chapter 6

Can we get today ? 😆

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Savina

@Savinaa

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: uma_dey
Read the two updates together and it is wonderful,I like the way you show omkara's behaviour changed towards Gauri slowly. And then he cares for her but want to wear the mask " I don't care " and how she never fails to show her gratitude towards him is good. But I like the most how they make Gulabh nostalgic about his love life with is wife is beautiful.

Thank you so much Uma 😳

P.S. I really like Gulabh too... Loved writing his short and sweet love story 😳