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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Loved the way the siblings are bonding!! You have created the understanding between Sameer and Rohan in a very realistic way.

Do keep writing more!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Aww thanku so much for giving these beautiful pieces to us readers and putting a lot of hard work in it but ur hard work pays off i must say u r a fabulous writer and yes rushing to read ur another story and will comment soon on that too

Thank you so much dear...I'm truly humbled...😳😳

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Loved the way the siblings are bonding!! You have created the understanding between Sameer and Rohan in a very realistic way.

Do keep writing more!

Thanks dear!! Glad you liked it! 😳😳

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Kkadss
Good one
Pls continue

Thanks dear...sure!! 😳

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Alisha

@AlishaSyed

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Would love to see this in the show also .. especially the way you show rohan's concern about him and his and deepika's friendship then ofcourse the brotherly bond .. perfect .. do PM me if your planinpl to write more

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed
Would love to see this in the show also .. especially the way you show rohan's concern about him and his and deepika's friendship then ofcourse the brotherly bond .. perfect .. do PM me if your planinpl to write more

Thank you so much dear...pakka would PM!😳

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Prizi
beautifully written

Thank you Prizi! 😊

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natashaa46

@natashaa46

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Wow!!! Beautifully written.👏

wish aisa hi kuch show mei bhi hi jaye 😉😉

abi tak to Rohan dadi ka time-table wala robot hi bana hua h 😭😭

i sooo want the 3 siblings to share a sweet bond n tht leaving Vishakha surprised 😲😲 n evil somani ma-beta duo shocked 😡😡

it ll be gud to see Rohan helping Sameer in return Sameer making Rohan more a teenager thn just a study-Robot 😊😊

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Beautifully written dear!!!

Sibbling goals ...u showed it so sweetly...whd actually love to see Rohan bonding this way in the show as well!!!

Would love to see how the topper brains whould work to get the love birds together!!!

The best thing that cracked me was...Rohan dailouge...aaj ka study schedule cancel...bas dadi ko mat batana!!

Lovely one dear!!!

Edited by Niakhush - 8 years ago