AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A}

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Ohh! This is really bittersweet . A good colourful picture of the entire family except Avni. And all are having kids or are going to. Wish Neil meets Avni ASAP. Without many hits and misses. It is interesting that Ali will accompany Neil to kashid.

Do update soon . Waiting!

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Just read the chapter 4 Beautiful update while it's so great to see Aman and Ali still is Neil's life and also they have a family at the same time it's so sad to see that Neil's couldn't live those family moments 😭

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
interesting

Thank you so much!

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
Ohh! This is really bittersweet . A good colourful picture of the entire family except Avni. And all are having kids or are going to. Wish Neil meets Avni ASAP. Without many hits and misses. It is interesting that Ali will accompany Neil to kashid.
Do update soon . Waiting!

I wanted it to be bittersweet, so can I consider that I am successful in that? Few more chapters before Neil and Avni confront each other, not many hits and misses I can assure. Neil and Ali the only two men constant in Avni's life. So apart from Neil, if any other man has the right to know about Avni it has to be her best friend Ali. I hope you're getting my point.

Will try my best to update soon!

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia
Just read the chapter 4 Beautiful update while it's so great to see Aman and Ali still is Neil's life and also they have a family at the same time it's so sad to see that Neil's couldn't live those family moments 😭

Thank you so much Safia. I have retained Ali and Aman in my story, Ali being Avni's best friend and Aman is the brother she returned for. If not for him, would Avni ever have returned back to avenge? I have introduced their families, not to hurt Neil, but for Avni to realise what she has missed because of her baseless insecurities. Thanks for reading!

Love,

Nivi

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WhtinAname

@WhtsinAname

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Sorry for being late.Was busy wid some stuff.

So I read all d 4 parts.

I love how you taken the same story and given it a different twist.

Thank God Mishti isn't annoying here.Infact she is understanding.

I like the way you hv kept Ali and Aman here.They are married wid kids. Mitali and Kareena are their perfect partners.I wish the story had actually progressed dis way in the show too.

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: drbeth
Sorry for being late.Was busy wid some stuff.
So I read all d 4 parts.
I love how you taken the same story and given it a different twist.
Thank God Mishti isn't annoying here.Infact she is understanding.
I like the way you hv kept Ali and Aman here.They are married wid kids. Mitali and Kareena are their perfect partners.I wish the story had actually progressed dis way in the show too.

Don't apologize Tapasi, I can very well understand the hectic life we have off forum. There's no necessity for sorry. I'm glad you caught up with all the four parts very soon. Mishti/Saesha is not at all annoying here, in fact she will be having very minimal screen space until she is required at the crucial stage of the plot. I had to retain Ali and Aman for they're two important characters of Naamkarann. Ali being the best friend of Avni and Aman is her brother, Neil can feel her presence through these two men of her life. Mitali was shown to have a thing for Ali in the pre leap episodes, so could not make her negative. It's always better to deal our conflicts by ourselves, not always are third angles required to keep the leads together. This, one concept, I never understood till date in ITV.

Sometimes, while watching I too wished to see story progressing with its main characters intact. But then if the show had the same thing, how could I have taken up to write this 😆.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Credits, Footnotes and References

Chapter 1

Not all those who run away are cowards...

Credits to myself and my mind which formed it about five - six months ago.

There is a general belief that when people die, they become stars. Used the same context in Avni's dialogue,

'Kisse chupa rahi hoon apne dard ko, tumse ya phir us chaand se joh humse meelon doori mein rehkar bhi hume sunta hai. Ya phir Aayesha maa aur Neela maa se joh taare bankar aasmaan mein sajein hue hain.'

Chapter 2

The saddest thing in the world is losing someone you love and who loved you...

Again credits to myself.

Radio Station Raabta radio station where Neil is working as an RJ. Only for fictious purposes, taken from the show Naamkarann.

Shayari : Nayi subah...

Credits to Google and the orginial mind behind its creation.

Song : Ajeeb daastan hai yeh...

Movie : Dil Apna aur Preet Parai

Singer: Lata Mangeshkar

Link : http://youtu.be/ARgRNoORO4A

An all time classic song, beautifully rendered by Lata ji, my favourite female singer.

Chapter 3

Shayari : Main aaj bhi...

Movie : Mohabbatein

Actor : Shah Rukh Khan, Aishwarya Rai, Amitabh Bachchan and others.

The shayari fits Neil so aptly, I couldn't resist myself from adding it in the chapter.

Kashid - Kashid is a beach town on the shores of the Arabian Sea, in the North Konkan region of Maharashtra, India. It is located 30 km from Alibag and 135 km from Mumbai on the Alibag-Murud road.

Chapter 4

Tere Dar Par Sanam remade version for Naamkarann. I am extremely sorry, I don't have proper links to the song.

Avalanche Lake - A valanche Lake is an important tourism destination in the Nilgiris district.The lake is surrounded by a rolling landscape with blooming flowers like magnolias, orchids and rhododendrons. Tourists can traverse beside the lake through winding paths around the lake. Tourists visiting the lake can also engage themselves in Trout fishing. A trout hatchery is established near the lake, from where visitors can get fishing rods and other fishing accessories required for trout fishing. The lake is also used by tourists as a camp site wherein they pitch tents near the lake. Other tourist activities in the area include rafting across the lake and trekking the nearby hilly regions like Upper Bhavani where there are thick forests and untouched wild habitats.

Chapter 5 B

Song : Female version of Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga

Movie : Half Girlfriend

Singer : Shraddha Kapoor

Link : http://youtu.be/Aj2tf8-JdwY

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Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

A big love to you for this chapter. Wow you brought both Ali and Aman in this chapter . Aman was a surprise package . It was heartwarming to watch Neil having a great relationship with Aman . Aman and kareena expecting a child 😃 wow . Avni has missed a lot .

Wow Ali and Mitali are married and have a 6 year old kid . It's overwhelming to watch Ali by Neil's side . I had missed their friendship in the show . How can he forget to fulfill his promise to Avni . Happy that he knows that Neil endangers his life to get a glimpse of her . BTW what is fufu ?

It's more thrilling to imagine what will be the reaction of all these people if they find Avni's truth . It's gonna be mammoth task to earn forgiveness from all .

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
A big love to you for this chapter. Wow you brought both Ali and Aman in this chapter . Aman was a surprise package . It was heartwarming to watch Neil having a great relationship with Aman . Aman and kareena expecting a child 😃 wow . Avni has missed a lot .

Wow Ali and Mitali are married and have a 6 year old kid . It's overwhelming to watch Ali by Neil's side . I had missed their friendship in the show . How can he forget to fulfill his promise to Avni . Happy that he knows that Neil endangers his life to get a glimpse of her . BTW what is fufu ?

It's more thrilling to imagine what will be the reaction of all these people if they find Avni's truth . It's gonna be mammoth task to earn forgiveness from all .

Aww, love you too Sri. I had include Ali and Aman in my chapters, they're an integral part of our Naamkarann. And besides, I miss them on the show, Ali was such a cute munchkin for me. Gautam played the role with such perfection. Avni did miss a lot, two big weddings of their families and a six year old niece wanting to know about her aunt. Fufu means uncle, technically speaking - father's sister's husband. Bua and fufa ji, hindi terms.

@bold- Main reason why I had included them, the feeling of betrayal will be too huge to understand Avni's view. It is a herculean task to convince her loved ones, but Avni will try her mighty best to pacify them once she understands the folly she had made.

Love,

Nivi

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